Excellent story-telling composition 1 In the second class this afternoon, we will hold a story-telling competition. In the second class, Mr. Lin came up to us with a big smile and said, "Now the story-telling competition begins. Students who are prepared at home please come up and tell stories. " When the home was ready, I went up and chatted. The teacher asked us to draw lots, and I got four, which means I am the fourth player. Huang Xiaoting was the first, so she went first.
The story she told was A Mouse Married a Girl, and she recited it fluently. Time flies, it's my turn to speak. I am nervous and excited, and my heart is pounding. The story I told was Goose and Duck. Because I was nervous, I felt that I didn't act well enough. Finally, the teacher said, "You didn't speak well enough, and the tone of the characters didn't come out." I think I will practice more when I get home.
This will make you play better. Teacher's comment: The little author described the story-telling contest in concise language. "I am nervous and excited, and my heart is pounding", which vividly describes the mood of the little author at that time. The deficiency of the article is that the focus is not clear enough. Young writers can describe their feelings before and after the competition in more detail, which will increase the vividness of the article. So I'm going to go up and talk, and the word "now" is changed to "stand"
Excellent Storytelling Composition 2 This afternoon, the final of the first huangyan district Story King Competition was held in Huangyan Vocational and Technical School. Two gold medals, four silver medals and eight bronze medals will be decided from 39 players.
As soon as we arrived at the competition site, the whole venue was packed with people and very lively. Some are dressing up, some are practicing nervously, some are rushing to change clothes, and some are even actively flushing the toilet ... It's time to draw lots, and I'm glad to catch a number 16, which is not bad. Then, the intense competition began. Look, this is about cat fishing. He has prepared a set of fishing gear. The vivid, vivid and natural passage about "clever little turtle" immediately attracted the audience. At this time, the stadium was silent and everyone seemed to hold their breath. It was so quiet that even a needle fell to the ground. As soon as she finished speaking, thunderous applause broke out in the venue, and finally she got a high score of 9: 57. However, some of them can't speak well. Several children forgot their words when they spoke, and some remembered them after a few seconds. Some of them stopped for more than 2 minutes. Finally, she really couldn't remember, so she said, "Thank you, my story is over."
Whenever I feel happy, worried and happy at this moment, I have a better chance of winning the prize if they don't speak well. I'm afraid they won't get the prize if they don't speak well. Finally, it was my turn. I walked unhurriedly to the podium and began to tell the story of little mantis learning art. As I spoke, I carefully and clearly described the mistakes made by Little Mantis in the process of learning art. For a while, I learned from Little Mantis to cut broadsword, for a while I learned from Mother Mantis to catch insects, for a while I taught Mr. Monkey to punch, and for a while I learned from Master Xiong to saw boards. After the story was finished, I was also tired and sweaty. Finally, he won the bronze medal with the eighth place.
This story-telling contest is really meaningful. This not only exercised my courage, but also enriched my experience.
Today, after I finished learning, my mother told me many stories. The first story I asked my mother to tell was to find the seventh star.
Its content is: a little ladybug with six stars on its wings. Its name is Doudou. It heard the children singing: little ladybug, little ladybug, seven stars, help us eat aphids. The little ladybug said, "aren't they singing about me?" This reminds me that they are talking about ladybugs. How many stars are there on my back? The little ladybug can't see how many stars are on its wings. It asks the bee, "Can you help me see how many stars are on my back?" The bee said, "Six." The bee asked again, "What are you eating?" "I eat young leaves and green shoots." "I can't blame you!" Ladybug thought: can't I grow seven stars after eating green shoots? It decided to look for a star. It asks the butterfly, "Sister Butterfly, can you give me something?" The butterfly says, "Yes." "Give me a star on your wing." The butterfly said, "Do you want to turn me into an old woman?" The little ladybug flew away and came to a garden again. There are many flowers in it, including roses and stars all over the sky, just like little stars. It found the stars all over the sky and asked, "Can you give me a little star on you?" The stars swarmed in and said, "Take mine, take mine!" " A baby full of stars leads the ladybug on the back. "Today is a happy day." It remembered that it hadn't had breakfast yet. It swallowed the baby's breath, and the baby's breath was staggered, and the small peas were thrown out.
In the evening, it came to the pool and spent a sad night. It said to the little star, "Do you know me?" The little stars said with one voice, "Aren't you the Doudou?" A little star said, "It looks desperate." The ladybug really wants to cry. Then Rose spoke first: "Little ladybug, can you do me a favor?" The little ladybug forgot her sadness and said, "What do you want me to do?" Ross said, "I'm going to throw up. I feel pain all over. " Xiao Doudou hurried to have a look. It turns out that there are some aphids on her. The little ladybug ate and ate until morning. It can't count how many aphids it has eaten. The little stars are going home, only one little star stays on the back of the little ladybug and says, "I want to be with you forever."
I think reading is a very interesting thing. I will study hard and read books by myself in the future.
Today, it is raining in Mao Mao. My parents took my cousin and me to Xianju to see rape flowers and listen to the story of Four Great Classical Novels told by the scarecrow. Next, let my little tour guide start this trip for everyone.
At the destination, although it was raining, there were still cars coming and going. Parked the car and we walked all the way to The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. The first thing I saw was "Taoyuan Jieyi". This story tells the story of Liu Bei, Guan Yu and Zhang Fei who became sworn friends in Zhang Fei's Taoyuan. Then, we went to see "Three Visits to the Cottage", which was about Liu Bei's three visits to the Cottage and invited Zhuge Liang, a wizard, to be a military adviser. Then, Borrowing Arrows from Grass Boat and Battle of Red Cliffs appeared before our eyes. These two stories are probably familiar to everyone. "Borrowing an arrow from a straw boat" means that before Battle of Red Cliffs, Zhuge Liang borrowed 654.38 million+arrows with his own wisdom, which made Zhou Yu more jealous of him. "Battle of Red Cliffs" finally broke out, and finally Sun Liu's joint army defeated Cao Jun. ..
After listening to the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, please follow me to the Journey to the West. You will see "Make a scene in Heaven", "Eight Rings Back to Daughter-in-law" and "Monkey King Thrice Defeats the Skeleton Demon" ... At this time, it is estimated that everyone will have a clever and eccentric the Monkey King, a greedy pig, an honest sand monk and a kind Tang priest.
Then, let's go to see the Water Margin again. You must remember the scene of Song Wu drinking in Jingyanggang big bowl. Speaking of Song Wu, it will naturally remind us of Wu Dalang, the short Wu Dalang who sells baked wheat cakes all over the street. You are not a stranger. In the water margin area, we will also see "Juyitang", "Chariot" and "Huarong Carving". ...
Finally, I want to introduce A Dream of Red Mansions to you. This is a story that happened in the Grand View Garden. I'm not particularly familiar with this little tour guide, so I won't say much.
The scarecrow in every story is so lifelike. After listening to my little tour guide's introduction, I believe you will also want to have a look!