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4. It is much better for the author to admit "retreat" and think too much than "retreat" without seeing his own shortcomings and problems. However, he advocates that you should always think about your mistakes when you don't retreat, so as not to do anything wrong.

5. Write "retirement garden" in the first sentence, and then write "retirement" and "thinking" respectively, leaving the garden and thinking. It is a total score in form, but it is actually very clever; Finally, it is pointed out that Tongli is different from other small towns in the south of the Yangtze River because there is a garden and a retreat garden.

This essay not only focuses on the scenery I have heard and seen, but also writes my own feelings and thoughts from the scenery, implicitly reminding the world that we should learn from the ancients. This deepens the center of the article.