2. Observe things carefully. To make the description vivid, we should mobilize our senses and observe things very carefully in the process of observing things. Such as the following text: "The crescent moon on the horizon gives off a faint glow and quietly sprinkles on the balcony." In the dim moonlight, the colorful flowers and green leaves all seem dim during the day. At this time, a few newly blooming epiphyllum are pure and clean, emitting a wisp of fragrance and refreshing. Ah! There is another bud in bud. Will it bloom? I studied it for a long time. Suddenly, the bud moved ... and finally a small hole opened unconsciously at the tip of the bud. Then, the hole slowly opened, and then the petals gradually spread out one by one. The petals are carved like crystals, and even the veins can be seen clearly; The flower heart is white and tender, and the lace shows a layer of goose yellow. "
The author described the flowers in detail. The whole process of texture, smell, color, grain and bud opening makes people feel as if they were in the scene, and the writing is delicate and vivid.
3. Carefully choose your words. In the description of details, we should choose the right words to get twice the result with half the effort and even convey the spirit word for word. For example, in Medicine: "Aunt Hua dug under the pillow for a long time, took out a bag of foreign money and gave it to the old bolt. Old Shuan took it, shook it into her pocket and pressed it twice outside; He lit a lantern, blew it out and went to the back room. " The detailed description of this series of actions is very vivid. Hua Laoshuan runs a small teahouse, and it's not easy to accumulate a pack of foreign money, so it's so careful to put it away that Aunt Hua has to "dig" for a long time! Old Shuan gingerly "meets", "shakes", "pretends" and "presses", vividly showing the hardships of the life of the highest-level citizens in society.
4. Clever use of rhetoric. The use of figures of speech, such as metaphor, personification and exaggeration, can enhance the vividness of language, turn abstract into concrete, and turn intangible into tangible. For example, there is a description in Medicine: "Old Shuan also looked over there, but only saw the backs of a bunch of people; They all stretched out very long, as if many ducks were held up by invisible hands. It was quiet for a while, as if there was some movement, which made people tremble. Bang, they all backed away, dispersed to the place where Old Bolt stood, and almost knocked him down. " This passage is about the killing of revolutionary Yu Xia, and those bored people are craning their necks to appreciate it, just like a group of "ducks", lifelike, and a metaphor shows the numbness and unconsciousness of the people.