Question: How does the author feel about the life of Baicao Garden and San Tan Yin Yue?
(Students answer, the teacher summarizes)
Clear: The author thinks that the Herb Garden is fun; Life in Samadhi Bookstore is very boring. The article describes two kinds of life,
The first part (paragraphs 1 to 9) describes the endless fun of "I" in the Herbal Garden. The second part (paragraphs 10 to 24) describes my boring study life in Santan Yingyue. This is the overall structure of this paper.
2. Guide students to analyze the text.
(1) Let the students read paragraph 1 of the text and guide the students to analyze.
① Question: What does paragraph 1 of the text say to Baicaoyuan? What role does this play in the text?
Clear: Write that the Herb Garden used to be my paradise, and point out the reasons for remembering it.
② Understanding: "It seems that there are only some weeds"?
This sentence is formal, and it is to look at the Herb Garden from the perspective of adults. "There must be only one", and it is concluded that there is nothing touching about the Herb Garden; "Seems" is the hesitation and hesitation of the above conclusion. On the one hand, it shows whether some landscapes can be clearly remembered because of the "flow of time" and dare not jump to conclusions; On the other hand, it is also for the following "threading the needle"-"but that was my paradise at that time."
Paragraph 1 of the text is the first layer of the first part of the full text. It is written that the Herbal Garden is my childhood paradise, which causes the following memories to describe the Herbal Garden.
(2) Let the students read the second paragraph and guide the students to analyze.
① Question: How many kinds of animals and plants did the author write in the Herbal Garden? What are they?
Clear: Write fourteen kinds of animals and plants, namely: Gleditsia sinensis, Mulberry, Cauliflower, Polygonum Multiflori Radix, Manglietia, Ruby, Grass, Cicada, Wasp, Tian Zi, Oil Pan, Cricket, Scolopendra and Mylabris.
② Question: What scenery did the author write in Baicao Garden?
Qing: Lai Qi, Shi Jinglan.
③ Question: What words did the author use to make these scenery, animals and plants more vivid?
What about beauty? Why did the author write these scenes so concretely, vividly and truly? Why is the Herbal Garden "Me"
Paradise at that time "
Clear: The Herb Garden, which is not respected by adults, has so many interesting things for curious children to watch, play and explore the mysteries of nature. This is of course my paradise. The plants, insects and birds here have attracted Mr. Lu Xun as a child to observe and ponder, which aroused his curiosity and thirst for knowledge. Today, these scenes are still vivid in front of Mr. Lu Xun. Mr. Lu Xun described them in emotional language, which showed the interest of children's life and aroused the emotional voice of readers.
④ Question: How does the author describe the beauty of Baicao Garden?
Clarity: Mr. Lu Xun described the beauty of the white grass garden with rich language and vivid words. Green vegetable bed purple mulberry chess, written in spring; Cicadas sing, fat wasps crouch on cauliflower, writing summer; Wandering spirits whisper here, crickets play the piano and write autumn here.
In this way, I wrote about the spring, summer and winter of the Herbal Garden, and I also wrote about so many lifelike animals and plants, which are intertwined and orderly, depicting the beauty of the Herbal Garden.
⑤ Question: What other rhetorical methods are used in this paragraph to describe the things in the Herbal Garden? What does it mean?
Clear: This passage also uses the rhetorical devices of "metaphor" and "personification".
Metaphorical sentence: "Manglietia Manglietia has a lotus-like fruit", which shows the morphological characteristics of Manglietia Manglietia fruit; "If you are not afraid of thorns, you can also pick raspberries, like small balls made of coral beads", which shows the beauty of raspberries.
The anthropomorphic sentences: "The oil fly sings here" and "The cricket plays the piano here" show the sweetness of these two insects.
⑥ Question: Why can the author write the things in the Herbal Garden so wonderfully?
Clear: The author carefully observed the scenery of Baicao Garden, described it by grasping the characteristics of the scenery, and also devoted his love to Baicao Garden, a children's paradise. That's why the things in Herb Garden are so wonderful.
Summary: The second paragraph is the second layer of the first part of the article, which describes the scenery of Baicao Garden and the interest of the author's childhood life. This passage shows the psychological characteristics of children's curiosity and knowledge and their love for nature everywhere.
Let the students read the second paragraph softly together to deepen their experience and strengthen their memory.
(3) Assign students to read paragraphs 3 to 3 of the text and guide them to analyze.
Q: What role does the third paragraph of the article play in the full text?
Clear: play a transitional (or connecting link) role. From the description of scenery to the narration of legend of Baicaoyuan.
② Question: What is written here?
Clear: The following is the story of the beautiful snake told by the big mother. This story has supernatural color, and the ending is that evil does not suppress right, and the beautiful snake is subdued.
(3) What is the connection between this story and the fact that the Herbal Garden is my paradise?
Clear: First, the story content is in line with children's curiosity and love for adventure. This is also a pleasure of childhood; Secondly, after listening to Chang's mother's story, "Chang Cao" stopped going, which limited the scope of my activities in the herbarium. I really want to get a flying centipede like an old monk. "I often think so when I walk beside the grass in the herbarium", which is also in line with children's psychology of exploring and conquering evil. This casts a mysterious veil over the Herb Garden and induces children to participate in it. Thirdly, the rich life content of the Herbal Garden and the legend of the red chain snake have great attraction to the author when he was a child, so the legend adds the factor that the Herbal Garden is my paradise.
(4) Let the students read the seventh and eighth paragraphs of the supervisor and guide them to analyze.
(1) What do these two paragraphs say?
Qingming: catching birds in snowy days is the pleasure of white grass garden in winter.
Ask the students to read the seventh paragraph of the text silently, find out the verbs and write the ways to catch birds, and analyze the expressive force of using these verbs.
Clarity: The author uses a series of verbs such as "sweep, support, disperse, tie, pull, look, pull" to clearly and accurately write the whole process of catching birds, showing children's active personality and love for catching birds.
(3) paragraph 8 wrote a what kind of person? What does this have to do with the Herbal Garden being my paradise?
Clear: Paragraph 8 describes a kind, quiet and experienced farmer-the father who moistens the soil. Between the lines is full of admiration for the wisdom and experience of the working people. On this floor, it doesn't clearly say "Herbal Garden is my paradise", but I enjoy it. The novelty and excitement of catching birds, as well as the admiration for the father of moistening the soil, are all part of the life in the herb garden, making the "paradise" real and concrete.
5] Assign students to read paragraph 9 and guide them to analyze.
(1) What are the contents of the three "maybe it's because ..."? What does this mean?
Clear: These three clauses constitute a set of parallelism sentences, all of which are about some irregular behaviors of Baicaoyuan, so as to infer the reasons for leaving Baicaoyuan. It means that the child feels that being sent to the bookstore is punishment.
(2) what kind of feelings does this paragraph reveal between the lines?
Cheng Ming: This passage expresses Lu Xun's helplessness and reluctance when he bid farewell to the Herbal Garden in his childhood with the style of speculation, doubt and helplessness.
Herbal Garden is my childhood paradise, where I can freely watch the natural scenery. You can hear magical stories here, and you can often be driven by this curiosity, trying to find a "flying centipede" like the old monk in Baicaoyuan; You can also learn the skills of catching birds here; Here, you can also do actions that you must never do under the eyes of adults-destroying the roots of walls, throwing bricks, jumping over railings ... Life here is free, novel, lively and adventurous. How can it not be a children's paradise? How can you not be reluctant to leave?
This is the first part of the text, which shows the author's various pleasures in the Herbal Garden when he was a child.
[6] Arrangement work
(1) Recite the second paragraph of the text.
② Finish Exercise 2 and Exercise 3 after class.
(3) Preview the following text and prepare for the analysis in the next class.
The third category
◎ Teaching emphasis
The monotonous furnishings, boring life and failed education; It is in sharp contrast with the scene composition in 100 sketches.
1. Check the recitation and dictation of the second paragraph.
2. Take a new lesson.
(1) Please read paragraphs 1 1 and 12 of the text by yourself. When reading, consider:
(1) What's the indication of three pools printing the moon? What does the author feel between the lines?
② What is my impression of Mr. Santan Yinyue?
(Students discuss and answer, teachers guide)
Qing dynasty: the furnishings of the three pools printing the moon are monotonous and dull. My first impression of the moon on the beach is "Black Bamboo Gate", which is a heavy and depressing color, in sharp contrast with the "green" and "purple" of Baicaoyuan. The furnishings in the room are even more monotonous, only plaques and paintings, unlike the vitality in the Herbal Garden. Mr. Lu Xun is very familiar with this place. In a few strokes, the three pools reflect the environment and furnishings of the moon, making readers feel as if they were there.
"I" have great respect for Mr. Shou Jason Wu, the master of San Tan Yin Yue, and call him "a founder, simple and knowledgeable person in our city".
⑵ Read the text from paragraph 12 to the end by students of different roles. (One reads my language, one reads my husband's language, and the other reads the narrative part)
Teacher's tip: For paragraph 19, pay attention to the sentence in quotation marks, which should be like this: "Is benevolence far away?" I want the benevolent, I am the benevolent! ""serve wine, hidden dragon, don't use it. " "Jue soil, down, wrong; Lord Jue, Bao Mao, orange pomelo. "After reading aloud, guide the students to analyze.
(1) Mr. Lu Xun studied in San Tan Yin Yue for seven years when he was a child. In this article, he wrote several aspects of his study and life.
(Students discuss and answer. )
Clarity: I wrote five aspects of my study and life: it is impossible to ask "strange" bugs; Boring study life, learning Chinese characters at noon and attending classes at night; Skipping class and going to the small garden was criticized by Mr. Wang; A scene where teachers and students read aloud together; The unexpected gains in the classroom-there are quite a lot of achievements in painting.
(2) Among these five aspects, what makes the author dislike most?
(Students discuss and answer. )
Summary: The first question is what is "strange". Mr. Wang said "I don't know" and his face was a little angry. "I just know that as a student, I shouldn't ask these things ... (he) is never ignorant ... but he doesn't want to say it." -this is very dissatisfied with suppressing students' thirst for knowledge. It's indecent to enter the three pools and seal the moon, see no evil, and read only sage books. However, the young Lu Xun asked about "strange insects" outside the Bible. In the teacher's eyes, this is simply a heresy, so he didn't answer, and he was angry. The second is the content and form of reading. The teacher shouted. Read! So everyone opened their throats and read for a while. "How boring this book is, it was read under the pressure or order of the teacher." What is the content of reading? Some preach the hypocritical feudal morality of "benevolence" Some make fun of others with low taste; Some propagandize superstitious geomantic omen; Some pieced together words about ancient tax laws; These incomprehensible and useless books can't be read, and no one corrects mistakes, only rote learning. How can we interest students? This is very different from the lively life in the Herbal Garden!
(3) The author wrote three pools to print the moon, and also wrote longevity and longevity. What is the author's attitude towards him? (Students discuss and answer. )
Summary: Lu Xun raised the question of "strange insects", and the old gentleman got angry and answered "I don't know"! The children went to play in the small garden behind the reflection of the moon in Santan. When the old man found them, they just "stared a few times" and said loudly, "Read!" When students make him angry, he has a ruler, but he doesn't use it often; He can make students kneel, but not often. When he was proud of himself, he smiled and raised his head. "Bend back and bend down." All these can be seen that Mr. Shou is kind-hearted and loves reading, and Mr. Lu Xun is respected. However, he unconsciously served the old system and was a faithful executor of the old education system. He doesn't understand the child's psychology, doesn't grasp the child's heart like his older mother, and doesn't answer the child's questions patiently and sincerely like his father. Instead, it ignores the psychological characteristics of the object of education, refuses students' questions and stifles students' thirst for knowledge. These are all wrong teaching attitudes and teaching methods.
Nevertheless, he is a good teacher and he is "friendly" to his students. He doesn't often use rulers and punishment rules, which is kind. He also strictly abides by the feudal education system, not to mention others! Therefore, while respecting, Mr. Lu Xun also gave appropriate criticism and negation, thus denying the life of reflecting the moon in Santan and the old education system. The implication is profound.
(4) Is the education of three pools printing on the moon a success or a failure?
(Students discuss and answer. )
Conclusion: The conclusion is affirmative, and the education of "three pools printing on the moon" is a failure. First of all, students don't like the study life of reflecting the moon in Santan, and then, "There are many achievements in painting before the book is finished"-the author denies the education of reflecting the moon in Santan from his own point of view; And "later, because I needed money, I sold it to a rich classmate whose father opened a tin foil shop;" It is said that I have also become a shopkeeper and will soon be promoted to the land of gentry. "-from the point of view of my classmates, I denied the education of" three pools printing on the moon ".The people it cultivates are just followers of this trend of profit-seeking and defenders of the old system and social foundation. Such criticism is very profound and powerful.
⑤ What are the characteristics of studying and living in the second three pools reflecting the moon? What does it have to do with the interest of Baicaoyuan?
(Student answers)
Summary: The second part shows that the study of reflecting the moon in Santan is dull and boring, which is in sharp contrast with the interest of Baicao Garden.
Guide the students to summarize the central meaning of this article (abstract)
Question: What does the author mean by comparing the interesting Herbal Garden with the boring Samadhi Bookstore? (Students discuss and answer. )
Summary: The author compares the free and happy life in Herb Garden with the boring life in San Tan Yin Yue, showing children's love for nature, their love for free and happy life, their pursuit of knowledge, and their dissatisfaction with feudal education that restricts children's physical and mental health development.
Why is the Herbal Garden my paradise? What is the function of this sentence in this article? Because Lu Xun's Herb Garden as a child poured his childlike enthusiasm and dreams into it, it is said to be his paradise.
Under the leadership, lay the foundation for the following. The following is a concrete description of this sentence.
Why is Herbal Garden my paradise? Lu Xun's "From Herbal Garden to San Tan Yin Yue"?
If so, that is: because the Herb Garden brought most of the fun of Lu Xun's childhood, there were not so many entertainment tools at that time, and because of the lack of entertainment, the fun-filled Herb Garden was a paradise for me.
Why is the Herbal Garden a paradise for the author's childhood? Why did the author say that the Herbal Garden was my paradise from the Herbal Garden to the San Tan Yin Yue?
Because there are fond memories of the author's childhood in the Herb Garden (such as: animal "concert", the mystery of Polygonum multiflorum, the legend of the beautiful snake, bird catching in the snow, etc. ), and compared with the feudal education system of reflecting the moon in Santan, it is indeed the author's paradise.
Why does the author say that Herbal Garden is his paradise?
The scenery of Baicao Garden is very novel.
It's colorful and interesting,
You can live freely.
Why does the author say that the Herbal Garden is "my paradise at that time"? Because the Herb Garden is full of the author's emotions and happy childhood memories. Moreover, for the boring life of the bookstore, the Herbal Garden is indeed an author's paradise.
Why is Herbal Garden my paradise? What's the fun? There are interesting plants and animals in the Herbal Garden to form interesting activities, do interesting things and listen to interesting stories, so the Herbal Garden is my paradise.
"But it was my paradise." Why do you say that? What is the function of this sentence in the structure of the article? From Baicaoyuan to San Tan Yin Yue, the sentence "But that was my paradise at that time" is the key of the first part, which can be seen from the following seven paragraphs.
Why is Herbal Garden my paradise? You can ask Mr. Lu Xun 500 words.
& lt& lt From Baicao Garden to San Tan Yin Yue> Why do you say Baicao Garden is my paradise? Because I do some interesting activities in the herb garden, similar to picking raspberries 2.
There are also birds trapped in the snow, which is out of a child and out of a childlike interest.
In other words, living in the Herb Garden is fun and free.