Basic requirements for primary school composition. So how to overcome the false phenomenon in students' compositions so that primary school students' compositions can truly reflect students' own lives and express their own emotions.
(1) Recognize the nature and position it accurately
The "Nine-Year Compulsory Education Primary School Chinese Education Outline" states the nature of composition teaching in primary schools: Composition is a reflection of students' cognitive level and language To reflect the ability of written expression, primary school students' compositions should start from the actual level of primary school students' understanding and knowledge. In other words, the composition of primary school students is to "say" their own words with pens. Therefore, the content requirements for primary school compositions must be set accurately. When teaching, we should insist on allowing students to use their own lives as themes, and strongly encourage students to write about themselves and things around them, and express their own thoughts and emotions. This enables students to understand that composing, like speaking, is also for communication. It is to use written language to tell others one's feelings.
Composition for primary school students is to learn to "speak" with a pen. It is obviously a practice, not a creation. This in turn enables us to position ourselves accurately in the form of primary school students’ compositions. In terms of expression, it mainly depends on whether the students' compositions are "accurate in the use of words, coherent and fluent sentences, organized, and correct in punctuation. However, there are no or fewer requirements on rhetoric and plot planning.
( 2) Choose materials correctly and don’t seek novelty
Composition training for primary school students can be roughly divided into two categories: one is to provide materials, requiring students to use the materials and organize them into essays through imagination and extension; the other is proposition composition, which requires students Conceive first and then select materials. In primary school Chinese textbooks, students are trained in composition in the form of units. Each unit has a sample essay, and each composition has clear center and content requirements to guide students to select appropriate materials around the center or content. , is a key part of composition teaching. The life of primary school students is relatively narrow, and their knowledge of people and things is limited. If teachers blindly emphasize that the selection of materials must be novel, unique, and unique, it will limit students' thinking and dilute and ignore the things that students are most familiar with. Things bring students into the blind spot of material selection, which makes students develop the bad habit of talking big words, empty words, and lies from an early age. They blindly require students to make materials that are novel and unconventional, and students should not write about ordinary things. Materials that have nothing to do with them are written openly in the composition, and there are a lot of empty words and lies, which is ridiculous. Articles with novel materials always give people a refreshing feeling and can attract readers more. If students have such real materials and choose them. Of course it is possible to write it in your own articles, but it is not advisable to make it up for the sake of being new and different. If students have something to say and are talented, they should cultivate the good habit of paying attention and be thoughtful people in life. . In addition, students are strongly encouraged and actively encouraged to read more extracurricular books and write more diaries. Extracurricular books can enrich students' knowledge. Writing diaries is an effective way for students to record meaningful things in their lives and studies in the form of diaries. Record it and persist in it for a long time, and you will have an inexhaustible supply of materials to choose from for your composition.
(3) When using words and sentences, avoid being flashy
Articles are not fashionable. Just looking at the appearance is not enough. So what kind of article can make people excited? It does not have to have gorgeous rhetoric or impassioned sentences. On the contrary, the words and sentences should be simple and appropriate. True feelings can be truly touching. Therefore, when writing for primary school students, we need to pay attention to two things: one is to write true feelings, and the other is to use words and sentences appropriately. So how can we write true feelings? The truth is reflected in the author's feelings from the ideological content and character. Only then can the article be authentic, and truth comes from life, which requires accumulation of life.
(4) Express expressions and avoid using adult language
Language is a tool for human beings to express their feelings. People of different professions and ages have their own language characteristics. How do primary school students use language and words to express accurately. One's own thoughts and feelings are issues that teachers should pay attention to when guiding students to write. With the development of science and technology and the increasing progress of society, people's material and cultural life has become increasingly colorful, and children have learned a lot of knowledge from life that cannot be learned in textbooks. . But children are children after all, and they should not be allowed to lose their innocence. Children's compositions should also have children's characteristics. Being young and mature is not necessarily a bad thing, but the old-fashioned tone throughout the story makes Ran feel artificial.
The above aspects are all based on the content and emotion of the composition. It mentioned a very important aspect of the authenticity of the composition, which is to pay attention to observation. Life is the main source of composition for primary school students. If students want to compose smoothly, they must observe carefully, be familiar with life, and accumulate materials. The degree of initiative and carefulness of students' observation of things directly affects the difficulty of students' composition. As long as students learn to take the initiative to absorb materials from objective reality, and actively participate in reality to understand the things around them, that is, "experience life", they can use their minds to process, create, and "express" them. Therefore, it is necessary to mobilize students' awareness of participation and enthusiasm for writing. The continuous induction and accumulation of this interest will add to students' life experience and enrich their writing content.
Some things in life are unforgettable for a lifetime, while others are like passing clouds. Of course, primary school students should write about unforgettable things, but they should also pay attention to the little things that are ignored or even not worth mentioning. They should use innovative eyes to discover the profound truths contained in small things, write down the unique feelings they have personally experienced, and express their feelings to life. Request a wealth of materials.
In addition, writing down fresh, interesting and touching things happening around you in the form of diary or weekly diary is also a good way to accumulate material. A variety of extracurricular activities can not only enrich students' lives, but also allow them to deepen their experience in the activities and write touching articles.
We advocate that primary school compositions should be realistic, and use a series of methods to correct ideological errors and make practical plans so that primary school compositions can truly eliminate falsehoods and write students' true compositions.
Part 1
The picnic, the day I have been looking forward to for a long time has finally arrived. On this day, all our primary school students went to have a picnic and get some exercise.
We happily came to a wasteland in Songjiazhou to have a picnic. As soon as the students arrived here, they went straight to the picnic ground. Everyone put down their things, and under the command of the team leader, the division of labor was organized in an orderly manner. Firewood, rice, oil, salt, and vegetables each had its own place, and dedicated personnel were responsible for it. Teacher Peng happened to pass by us at this time and smiled at us: You children who grew up in honey have not received any exercise and few of you know how to cook. You will definitely encounter difficulties and ask for help. After listening to the teacher's words, we thought to ourselves: We must show our skills in front of the teacher and impress him.
We were divided into six groups, and each group brought two first-grade children to compete to see which group made the best food. Let’s wash the spatula and other tools first. Then we put the big pebbles picked up from the river in a place, and then built the big pebbles into a large stove. We asked the teacher to help us light the fire, but we couldn't. Later, the person from the Political and Education Department The old grandfather told us: "First, if the stove is too big, it must be narrowed down; second, because there are many gaps, it cannot be lit; third, because you are not united and have to build the stove alone, so you must unite ". We learned our lesson and finally put up a complete stove. The teacher said: Our group's stove was the best, and the fire started burning all of a sudden.
The fire was OK, but I didn’t know how to cook the rice. Later, the teacher came to teach us. We thought we were OK with cooking, but we found that the rice was missing. Everything was ready. I owed Dongfeng, and later the teacher paid for some rice. We washed the rice and poured it into the pressure cooker to cook. Then we built a stove to cook. I took on an arduous but glorious task—— Cooking is really embarrassing to talk about. I have only touched a pot a few times and picked up a shovel a few times since I was so old. I, the "little emperor" who has always stretched out his hands when clothes came and opened his mouth when rice came, had to cook by himself. At that time, I didn't even think about it. How nervous. Fortunately, my classmates gave me courage and confidence, but I had not practiced it alone, and I still felt unsure. Under the expectant eyes of my classmates, I hurriedly took out the chopped meat and green beans, made some preparations, and started frying my first dish. I poured a little oil into the pot, put a little salt, then poured all the vegetables into the pot, and started frying. Because the pot was too small to fry, and the fire was too strong, I was afraid that the vegetables would be burnt. , five minutes later, I sprinkled a little MSG into the pot and served the dish.
"Let's eat." Everyone hurried over, poured Coca-Cola, and called the first-grade children over to eat together.
After everyone ate my food, they kept saying it was delicious! Delicious!
This picnic not only allowed us to leave the boring school, but also exercised our will. I am very I would like to thank my teachers for organizing this event that added joy to my childhood.
Part 2
"Classmates, are you ready?" "Okay!" "Then let's set off!" "Oh, let's have a picnic!" Amidst the cheers, the car finally started moving, carrying everyone’s laughter and laughter, and rushed to the destination-Grand View Garden. Along the way, everyone put all the study inhibitions behind and sang and danced to their heart's content. Passers-by also curiously paid "attention" to us. Even Teacher Guo, who always frowned in class, changed his attitude from the past. Serious, but also cheerful along the way.
After half an hour, we finally arrived at our destination. As soon as they got off the bus, the students were like birds just out of the cage, flying into the embrace of nature. I took a deep breath of fresh air and suddenly felt refreshed. There were white clouds floating in the blue sky, and the endless green lawn was like a huge green carpet... forming a beautiful landscape painting.
We first visited the "Peace Square", "Bird Forest", "Macaque Garden" and "Carp Pond". The picnic has finally begun! The classmates rushed to the barbecue area to get a seat, and we were not to be outdone and grabbed a good seat near the faucet. Guo Qinxin spread the picnic cloth he brought on the lawn, and then arranged the pots and pans neatly. After we placed the cooking utensils and backpacks, we started to light the fire in a hurry. It’s really hard to get started! Guo Qinxin first arranged the firewood neatly, then lit the scrap newspaper with a lighter and threw it into the stove. Ha, the fire started burning! yeah! We danced happily. But the good times didn't last long. After 5 minutes, the fire was extinguished. Failure is the mother of success, we said to ourselves, and once again lit up the newspaper with hope, hey, I was so impatient that I couldn't eat hot tofu! Under everyone's expectant eyes, the flames were once again extinguished. Frustration is also a kind of wealth. We comfort ourselves and ignite the fire of hope again, but the fire seems to be deliberately against us and disappears without a trace in the pile of wood. After mocking us enough, The green smoke gradually dispersed. After several rounds, we were all like deflated rubber balls. At this moment, Teacher Zhang came with a bottle of iodine. She opened the bottle and poured the iodine on the firewood. The flames burned, but not long after, only sparks were left, so Zhang The teacher helped us light the fire and taught us how to make the fire prosperous. We nodded in understanding. After a while, Teacher Zhang went to support other groups again. In order to prevent the fire of hope from extinguishing, we took turns "on duty", while other members spread out to pick up dead leaves, and thick smoke hit our faces. , my eyes hurt like needles, and tears flowed out. Hey, it really took us a lot of effort to have lunch! The flames are really merciless, and we have tried our best but in the end it was all in vain! There were curls of cooking smoke floating everywhere, and the enticing aroma of rice penetrated straight into my nose. Seeing our classmates enjoying the fruits of their labor makes us feel really bad. Finally, the boys in Wen Xin's group were kind-hearted and generously lent us the hot stove. We were so happy that we didn't have time to say thank you. The pot was put on the stove and the water boiled quickly. We got off. We cooked the rice noodles and added condiments. After 15 minutes, the rice noodles were finally cooked. Although they were not as delicious as the authentic Longyan clear soup noodles, we still ate them with gusto!
Hey, this picnic has really brought trouble to us little emperors and princesses who "reach out for clothes and open their mouths for food"! However, it cannot be said that we have not gained anything. At least we have discovered our own shortcomings through this picnic. We should exercise more hands-on skills and learn more skills in order to gain a firm foothold in this competitive society in the future. .
Part 3
Although the morning sun was not bright, a bright smile reflected on the face of every student. Do you know why we are so happy? Because today is the picnic that everyone has been waiting for.
We took a car to Tazishan Park. The air here is very fresh, the trees have fallen many golden leaves, the park seems to be covered with a golden carpet, and the birds are singing cheerful songs on the branches. The beautiful singing and our laughter merged into a beautiful piece of music.
Accompanied by the singing, we arrived at the picnic location, and the students began to have sex enthusiastically.
Some students are going to make smooth and delicious noodles, some are going to make traditional food - delicious dumplings, some are going to make fried rice, and some are going to make Chongqing hot pot.
What our group is going to make is spicy and delicious Sichuan hot pot. Liao Junyi took a big bag of beef from his schoolbag and shouted: "Delicious fresh beef, delicious fresh beef." Everyone laughed heartily at him, and I answered: "You are Seller of beef, how much does it cost per pound?" Everyone laughed even more. After we finished laughing, we started to get down to business. Some people made a fire, some washed vegetables, and some made condiments. The fire slowly became bigger, and it was in close contact with the pot, and the temperature of the pot also rose. I was responsible for serving the dishes. The lotus root doll, the cabbage princess, and the ham sausage girl were all waiting to be put into the pot, but I still didn’t know how to put the vegetables in without burning my hands. What to do? Fortunately, the teacher came over and taught me how to release it. I followed the teacher's example, grabbing a handful of vegetables at a time, and then carefully sliding the vegetables into the pot along the edge of the pot. Only then did I successfully complete the task of serving dishes.
The hot pot is ready, and the bursts of fragrance make everyone salivate. Everyone wants to stuff everything into their stomachs, but the capacity of the stomach is limited, so everyone puts all the food into their stomachs. I support a boss, but I still feel that it is not enough. I have no choice, who makes our belly only so big.
This picnic was truly unforgettable!
Part 4
The day of the picnic finally arrived. Carrying large and small bags, oil, salt, sauce and vinegar, we boarded the bus and headed for the picnic spot. Along the way, we talked and laughed, and soon we arrived at the picnic spot. This is truly a charming place.
After getting off the bus, many naughty classmates rushed up to grab the ‘turf’. After a while, our group got the corresponding territory. I looked around our site and it was really a geomantic treasure. We set up camp on the spot, laid out the tablecloth, put our "luggage" on it, and then went to find bricks to build the stove.
After a while, we found a lot of bricks. Xu Xuechao and I quickly built two stoves, one for cooking rice and one for cooking soup.
Now that the stove is set up, the next step is of course to light a fire. You Haiwei and I brought in a lot of firewood, and the team leader Wang Mengyao was also named the 'Fire-making General' and the 'Cooking General'. The two of us lived up to the expectations of the team leader, and soon the Xiongxiong fire was lit. We quickly put the rice with water on it to cook, and then sat in front of the stove and kept adding firewood.
A few minutes later, good news came from the side responsible for cooking. The first cauliflower, stir-fried with red pepper, was ready, but there was no improvement on our side. We saw them savoring it carefully. , You Haiwei and I’s saliva flowed into the pot. I stuffed a lot more firewood, but You Haiwei excused himself to take out his food and stir-fry it and ran over to taste it. I was left alone fighting in front of the stove, but I couldn't leave my post without permission, so I had to complain secretly.
Ten minutes later, five or six dishes were cooked over there, and I just had a little idea here. Fortunately, You Haiwei came back. There is still strength in numbers, and five minutes later, a pot of fragrant rice came out of the oven.
Time passed minute by minute, and when the sun was high in the sky, the dishes were finally cooked. Many of the dishes were rated by the teacher as 'unparalleled deliciousness', and my braised beef was certainly not inferior.
When we eat around the vegetables, we truly realize that the fruit of our own labor is the most beautiful, and we also understand the hard work of our parents. Then, we went to enjoy the pastoral scenery, and this happy event came to an end.
Part 5
During my elementary school career, many things happened, ups and downs, everything. However, the most unforgettable thing for me was a picnic.
That was in fifth grade. One Thursday afternoon, the teacher announced to us that we would have a picnic tomorrow. The whole class was overjoyed. Then, the teacher assigned the overall tasks. My group quickly assigned tasks, who brought the pot and who brought the shovel. After the tasks were assigned, the team leader let us go home.
The next day, the teacher distributed noodles to us. We carried the noodles and set off towards our destination. We walked for forty or fifty minutes, and we were already sweating profusely, with big beads of sweat falling down.
After walking for nearly an hour, we finally reached our destination - a small hillside.
Students from other classes started to compete and make a fuss. The classmates in our class were not to be outdone, and each scrambled for space to set up a stove. My group grabbed the last spot.
We quickly picked up a few big rocks and set up the pot. "The water is coming." Someone shouted. I saw pure water being transported by truck down the mountain. The team leader sent me to get water. As soon as I slid down the hillside, I saw that the bucket had already been emptied. I came back with my head drooped and blamed myself: "I'm really useless, the water was taken away by others." The clever Xu Zhiwei saw that another group had two buckets of water. After the people in the other group left, he quietly stole A bucket came over. We have water, but we are still short of firewood. What to do? Xu Zhiwei quietly went to Zhang Bofan's group and stole another bundle. Now that we have all the firewood, rice, oil and salt, we need to cook noodles.
I will be the chef. I first poured water into the pot, then spread some firewood in the stove, lit it first, and then put it in one by one, so that the fire would be bigger and would not go out. After about ten minutes, the water boiled. I excitedly put the noodles into the pot, covered the pot, and waited for it to cook. When cooking, in order to increase the fire and cook faster, I moved the stones to both sides, and then put in a few more firewood to make the fire bigger. After about twenty minutes, the noodles I cooked were almost cooked, so I added some tomatoes.
After all the hard work, I finally cooked the noodles. Everyone ate my noodles and said in unison: "It's fresh!" Seeing that the fruits of my labor were well received by everyone, my face was filled with a happy smile. I feel very happy.
This is truly an unforgettable picnic!