2 Contrast the characters' ... moods.
3. Promote the development of the story.
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On a bright morning, the sunshine wrapped in morning fog quietly falls in the room and classroom through the window ... The soft golden sunshine makes us feel fresh, warm, happy and bright. Sunshine is with us every day. Get up in the morning and say hello to the sun; After school, I waved goodbye to the shallow sunshine. Life is full of sunshine everywhere.
Sunshine is everywhere in my life. Sometimes, sunshine is a kind word, seemingly small, but warm people's hearts. Once, a classmate in the class was not feeling well. When other students saw him, they all came to care about him and asked him for help. A small greeting brought endless warmth like sunshine to others.
Sunshine, or blessing. Whenever there is a festival, we all send sincere wishes to each other, "Happy holidays! Good health! Learning progress ... "These seemingly useless, but give people a sense of satisfaction, a joy, a warmth, just like the soft sunshine in the morning, so comfortable, so happy.
Sunshine is still a "thank you". Every time someone helps me, or I help others, I always say "thank you" from my heart. Whether it is me or others, when I hear this sentence, there will always be a satisfied, sincere and cheerful smile on my face, and I feel so happy and happy! Just like the sunny sun in winter, the sunshine falls gently on the body, which is enough to give people a good mood for a day!
2. Narrative, there must be a description of the environment, hurry up. An ancient residence by the river, surrounded by green grass, looks elegant and chic.
Village house with green trees, red tiles and white walls. From a distance, golden corn filled the beams of the house, and strings of dried peppers hung on the pillars of the house. The fiery Spring Festival couplets and New Year pictures are antique.
A group of antelopes behind the house bowed their heads and grazed on the green grass. The cow is chasing "moo, moo" and calling for the arrival of its master.
Blue sky, white clouds, grasslands and wild flowers, the quiet mountain village is like a wonderful watercolor painting. There is also a crystal clear stream in the mountain village, which rings all the year round, accompanied by a beautiful music. The birds in the tree are unwilling to be lonely and sing happily, as if they were integrated with the sound of the stream, forming a touching symphony.
I like the mountain village in autumn, not only because there is my closest grandmother, but also because the sky there is blue and white clouds are floating leisurely in the sky, full of fun. On the east and west sides of the village, there is a slowly flowing stream. If you stand on the top of a high mountain, it looks like two green ribbons tied around the waist of the village.
At dawn in the mountain village, I opened my eyes in the henhouse. With the cock crowing, I hugged all night, kissed the world all night, and reluctantly let go of my hand. On the lips of heaven and earth, a bright world is displayed.
Dewdrops drop, rolling down the dream of dandelion and grass, splashing transparent sunshine. In a golden noise, a new dawn broke out.
Plumes of smoke rising from the top of the farmhouse, the "Cleisthenes" sound of cattle coming back from the shepherd boy playing the flute, and the rough and rhythmic country songs of Shan Ye scolded by farmers when they came back with hoes, outline a picture of quiet life in a mountain village like a paradise.
3. Ask for a narrative with an environmental description, about 500 words in winter in Jinan.
Author: Lao She
For a person who is used to living in Beiping, it is a miracle that it doesn't blow in winter. There is no wind in winter in Jinan. For a person who has just returned from London, it is strange that I can't see the sun in winter; Jinan is sunny in winter. Naturally, in tropical places, the sun is always so poisonous, so loud and a little scary.
However, in winter in the north of China, Jinan is really a treasure house with warm and sunny weather.
If there is only sunshine, it is not surprising. Please close your eyes and think about it: an ancient city with mountains and water is basking in the sun, sleeping warmly and comfortably, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up. Is this an ideal realm? The mountain completely surrounds Jinan, except for the lack of some food in the north. This circle of hills is particularly lovely in winter, as if Jinan were put in a small cradle. They whispered, "Don't worry, it will be warm here. Really, people in Jinan laugh in winter. As soon as they saw those hills, they felt that they had landed and leaned over. When they saw the mountains from the sky, they unconsciously thought, "Tomorrow may be spring, right? With such warmth, maybe the grass will turn green tonight? "Even this fantasy can't be realized for a while, and they don't worry, because there is such a charity winter, what else do they want!
Best of all, it snowed a little. You see, the dwarf pine on the mountain is getting darker and darker, and there are white flowers on the top of the tree, like Japanese nurses. The top of the mountain is all white, giving the blue sky a silver edge. On the hillside, there is thick snow in some places, and grass color is still exposed in some places; In this way, one is white, the other is dark yellow, and the mountain is covered with a floral dress with water patterns; Looking at it, this floral dress seems to be blown by the wind, which makes you want to see more beautiful goatskin. When it was almost sunset, the yellow sun shone obliquely on the hillside, and the Bo Xue suddenly seemed to blush and show a little pink. It's just a light snow. Jinan can't stand heavy snow. Those hills are so fragile!
Ancient Jinan, the city is so narrow and spacious. There are some small villages lying on the hillside, and there is some snow on the roofs of the small villages. Yes, this is a small ink painting, probably painted by a famous painter in the Tang Dynasty.
What about water? It did not freeze, but steamed on the green duckweed. Seaweed is really green, and all the green stored all the year round is taken out. The clearer the sky, the greener the algae. With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze, and those skilled weeping willows have to take a picture in the water! Look, slowly rising from the clear river, the sky, mid-air and sky are so clear and blue from top to bottom, and the whole is an ethereal blue crystal. In this crystal, there are red roofs and yellow grass hills, like small gray shadows of flowers on the carpet; This is Jinan in winter.
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You need a good beginning and ending. (Narration) It is best to describe the environment, and don't copy 0 1. Balzac said: "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak." After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim. Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. In this world, a star has fallen, nor can it dim the starry sky, nor can a flower wither and ruin the whole spring. We should try our best to go through every level in life, and we can't give up easily no matter what difficulties we encounter. Standing on the coast of history, it can be traced back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu thinks about rivers, and he does not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming leisurely Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums? They chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow it, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor all day, you are willing to take pleasure in yourself and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow, you will reap. Only when you pursue it can you taste decent people. ● Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, you will eventually occupy the blue sky as long as you are ambitious and fall a few times. ●05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing at any time, blooming at any time, decorating this long journey with fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians wearing branches and brushing leaves can step on thorns without feeling pain and tears. An optimist conquers himself before conquering life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future. An optimistic person has suffered a lot and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible. In the eyes of optimists, the impossible may become possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From excellent people, it is not difficult to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows. Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success. ●08. If you only see the black spots of the sun, then your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish has really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings. ●09, the Himalayan mountains go straight into the sky, but there are climbers' flags on them; The Sahara desert is endless, but there are footprints of hikers inside; There are thousands of cliffs in the Alps, but there are explorers among them; The Yarlung Zangbo River is swift and mighty, but there are stories of brave people in it. ● 10. Gone days are like withered leaves and petals, but the innocence and romance of youth are gone. I don't remember how much rain floated in my chest and how much wind rang in my ear, but I only know that vicissitudes of life have already climbed my face. When a person walks with the pursuit, ups and downs are companions, and hardships are also companions. People have joys and sorrows, and life is ever changing. Every year, there are four seasons. In the long night, you can see the dawn, suffering and happiness. After the cold winter, you don't have to squat and you can look forward to the Spring Festival. ● 12, without the depth of the blue sky, there can be the elegance of white clouds; Without the magnificence of the sea, there can be the elegance of the stream; Without the fragrance of Yuan Ye, there can be green grass. There is no place for a bystander in life. We can always find our own position, our own light source and our own voice.
5. Narration with environmental description is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment.
The earth, I don't know when it started, has become more and more beautiful. The color of sapphire makes it the most beautiful planet in the solar system. She keeps turning, and everything around her is constantly changing. I don't know when, a group of makeup artists-human beings appeared around her.
At first, human beings just decorated some houses on the earth's body and tidied up the hair that had been left unattended for many years, making the earth look more beautiful and energetic.
The makeup artist thinks it is wrong to dress up the earth like this. The earth is still the same, and it has not achieved a refreshing effect. As a result, they began to carry out large-scale cosmetic surgery on the earth.
First of all, the object of makeup artist's rectification is the "lush" hair of the earth. They think that too much hair will affect the visual effect, and the hair of the earth is a good building material, so they came up with a way to kill two birds with one stone, that is, give the earth a broken hair, the more broken the better, and get an unbreakable hairstyle-"San Mao". If you accidentally pull out that San Mao, it may become a "child mountain." So makeup artists don't know if it is possible for them to cut the earth into bald heads. In an interview with reporters, they said, "Our aim is to make her hairstyle avant-garde. How can we give her a haircut? " In order to get a lot of wood and make the hair style of the earth more avant-garde, they immediately broke ground. As everyone knows, according to their plan, it is inevitable that the earth will become a big bald head.
Therefore, they invited many loggers and porters to move all the cut trees to the place where they planned to build houses. When buildings rise from the ground, the earth really becomes more and more beautiful, hair styles become more and more avant-garde, and makeup artists feel their greatness more and more. They think their bold design is successful. So they let loggers carry out predatory development and let architects build houses crazily. The earth, which once lived leisurely, no longer feels that life is easy. The roar of machines day and night makes the earth feel uneasy, and the dust flying during construction makes the earth breathless. As a result, the earth began to be sad and began to shed tears, flooding many cities. But makeup artists ignore these things, and they just keep doing theirs. They not only want to cut hair and make clothes for the earth, but also give her a "portrait". The originally blue face becomes turbid and rough as soon as the powder is removed. Not only that, they also painted her with a thick layer of paint. The earth has not become more beautiful because of their clothes, on the contrary, it has lost its mellow past. She can't stand it any longer. She started to get angry, she growled, and she shed tears. When the makeup artists were washed away by the tears of the earth, they realized that their makeup on the earth was so thick that the earth was about to stop breathing. They realized that they were torturing the earth instead of dressing it up, and they didn't make the earth glow with more charming colors because of their existence.
Students, as future makeup artists, our influence on the earth is more significant, so we should start unloading the earth and make the earth full of vitality and relaxation without makeup. When luxury comes to an end, the earth still turns leisurely. Future builders and creators, there is only one home for us to live in, and it is our bounden duty to protect the environment, so we should start from now on and beautify the environment from ourselves!
6. Write a narrative composition (at least one environmental description, junior high school). For a person who is used to living in Beiping, it would be a miracle if I didn't blow it in winter. There is no wind in winter in Jinan. For a person who has just returned from London, it is strange that I can't see the sun in winter; Jinan is sunny in winter. Naturally, in tropical places, the sun is always so poisonous, so loud and a little scary.
However, in winter in the north of China, Jinan is really a treasure house with warm and sunny weather.
If there is only sunshine, it is not surprising. Please close your eyes and think about it: an ancient city with mountains and water is basking in the sun, sleeping warmly and comfortably, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up. Is this an ideal realm? The mountain completely surrounds Jinan, except for the lack of some food in the north. This circle of hills is particularly lovely in winter, as if Jinan were put in a small cradle. They whispered, "Don't worry, it will be warm here. Really, people in Jinan laugh in winter. As soon as they saw those hills, they felt that they had landed and leaned over. When they saw the mountains from the sky, they unconsciously thought, "Tomorrow may be spring, right? With such warmth, maybe the grass will turn green tonight? "Even this fantasy can't be realized for a while, and they don't worry, because there is such a charity winter, what else do they want!
Best of all, it snowed a little. You see, the dwarf pine on the mountain is getting darker and darker, and there are white flowers on the top of the tree, like Japanese nurses. The top of the mountain is all white, giving the blue sky a silver edge. On the hillside, there is thick snow in some places, and grass color is still exposed in some places; In this way, one is white, the other is dark yellow, and the mountain is covered with a floral dress with water patterns; Looking at it, this floral dress seems to be blown by the wind, which makes you want to see more beautiful goatskin. When it was almost sunset, the yellow sun shone obliquely on the hillside, and the Bo Xue suddenly seemed to blush and show a little pink. It's just a light snow. Jinan can't stand heavy snow. Those hills are so fragile!
Ancient Jinan, the city is so narrow and spacious. There are some small villages lying on the hillside, and there is some snow on the roofs of the small villages. Yes, this is a small ink painting, probably painted by a famous painter in the Tang Dynasty.
What about water? It did not freeze, but steamed on the green duckweed. Seaweed is really green, and all the green stored all the year round is taken out. The clearer the sky, the greener the algae. With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze, and those skilled weeping willows have to take a picture in the water! Look, slowly rising from the clear river, the sky, mid-air and sky are so clear and blue from top to bottom, and the whole is an ethereal blue crystal. In this crystal, there are red roofs and yellow grass hills, like small gray shadows of flowers on the carpet; This is Jinan in winter.
7.n Excellent narrative about environmental description Environmental description refers to the description of the specific social environment and natural environment in which the characters live.
"People create the environment, and the environment also creates people." (Marx and Engels "German Ideology") The activities and events of characters are always carried out in a certain social and natural environment.
Therefore, writing character notes often needs to describe the environment. Mao Dun pointed out in "Skills of Art": "If people want to move in a certain environment, they must write about the environment in their works.
"The description of the environment in the works, whether it is the social environment or the natural environment, is not a dispensable embellishment, but is closely related to the thoughts and actions of the characters. Among them, the narrow social environment refers to buildings, places, furnishings and other scenery and folk customs that can reflect the characteristics of society and the times; In a broad sense, it refers to the sum of social life and interpersonal relationships in a certain historical period.
Natural environment refers to natural scenery, such as seasonal changes, wind, frost, rain and snow, mountains and rivers, lakes and seas, forests and Yuan Ye. Natural environment description is also called scenery description. The description of the social environment must have a distinct color of the times.
When describing the social environment, we should try to draw "genre painting". Gorky said: "Don't forget: in addition to landscape painting, there are genre paintings."
For example, the rural dinner scene in the south of the Yangtze River at the beginning of Lu Xun's The Tempest is a very distinctive genre painting. Environmental description mainly has the following functions: First, it explains the background of the story (for example, the description of the layout of Luzhen Hotel at the beginning of Kong Ji Ji); The second is to render the atmosphere (such as the description of the hometown scene in Hometown); The third is to set off the character's character (such as the description of the hut in Pear Blossom on the Post Road).
In addition, it can promote the development of the story, set off the emotions of the characters and express the author's thoughts and feelings.
8. Description of environment, description of human actions, language, 1, facial expressions+actions+psychological learning cars all over the campus. I found the seat I should sit in, so I went over and sat down. A drink? Thank you, I have. Red Bull flinched. How about this bottle of mine? How about a bite? It's "Yaya" canned Lulu. I smiled, took out my water bottle and shook it at her. This transparent plastic bottle is boiled water with a layer of scale. After I shook it, everyone got excited and pulled it around, just like our hearts that had been struggling for 12 years, and they all lost no time to get excited today. In 2007, the detailed description of Jiangsu examinee's "preoccupation" brought their honest character, indifferent mentality and closeness. Portrait+modality+action At the school gate, a young man said goodbye to his father. No greetings, no relief, no hugs, no words. Looking straight at his father, his wrinkles deepened and his black hair added some gray. Tears swirled in his eyes, and he was depressed. In a blur, my father's indifferent eyes also showed some light. His trembling hands stretched out to him. My father turned around again and did not move. Looking at his distant back and approaching the corner, the father stopped and looked back to see his son. The young man looked at his father, too, and finally the tears could not be suppressed. In silence, my heart is so warm, one step, two steps, three steps ... The detailed description of the silent fatherly love of Beijing candidates in 2007 fully calls my father's unique personality. A simple and determined father was painted with a strong color. Although the father is silent, his deep and complicated eyes and affectionate hand movements are an entrustment to his son and an earnest encouragement. The paternal love contained in the text is impressive and even more awe-inspiring. This is the power of detail. 3. Psychological+action time seems to stop at that moment, and it is horribly quiet around, just like my heavy heart. The sentence "Mom and Dad, I don't want to go" turned around in my mouth and swallowed it back. Only I know how eager I am to learn, but at home ... Mom, your hand is still twisting the straw into a part of the rope. Father suddenly put out his cigarette and got up and walked to the next door. I still have a heavy heart, and you still twist straw into straw rope by hand ... The Straw Rope in Mother's Hands by Shandong examinee in 2007 presents a three-dimensional family to readers. The true psychology of "me", the twitching of the straw rope woven by my mother and the pinching of my father's determination clearly express the difficulties faced by a family and the deep affection of parents for their children, and reach the goal of "I". Language+action seems to have been grandpa for as long as I can remember. He grows vegetables and fruit trees in the garden; He tries his best to help others ... He is healthy, happy and comfortable. Grandma is feeding chickens at home, yelling at two dogs, washing clothes for grandpa, and waiting for grandpa's unchanging "order" for many years: "Old woman, what are you doing? Make tea quickly! " Grandma put down her work, pretended to complain, and said, "Come back so soon to have a rest." Then she carefully cooked tea for grandpa and sent it to him, chatting with him while drinking tea. In 2007, the detailed description of Hunan examinee's poetic life was amazing to read, and I had to admire the author's keen observation and delicate expression. The typical language of "grandparents" is full of local flavor, and grandma's manners are full of admiration. 5. Expression+Scene Lao Gen received six more letters. He was about to cook sweet potato porridge for his returning son, but he received the seventh letter. Xiaogen dropped out of school and wanted to work. Lao Gen looked at the red letter. "Dad, it doesn't matter if I can't go to college. The important thing is that I can't let you suffer any more, or I will regret it all my life. "This is a summer without cicadas, and no one dares to make any noise. Because there is fire in his eyes. This is a very successful detail description in the 2007 Fujian examinee season. As a father, Laogen couldn't afford to pay for his son's tuition, so he could only watch his son Xiaogen drop out of school to work. His father's mood is very complicated. Through the details of "red eye" and "fire in the eye", the author appropriately shows Lao Gen's psychology. And through the specific scenes of characters' activities, Lao Gen's mood "A Summer Without Cicada" is skillfully set off. The above examples are commonly used in detailed descriptions, and they are easy to master as long as students have more experience and practice. Writer Lee Joon once said, "Without details, there is no work of art.. True detail description is an important means to shape characters and achieve typicality. " If one or two "three-dimensional" details are presented in the work,
9. About the description of the composition environment in the early morning, open the curtains and open the windows.
The breeze blew, and a fresh, fragrant and elegant earthy breath came to my face. Spring comes so fast, quietly and unconsciously, the grass is green, the branches are sprouting, the wild flowers and rape flowers are blooming everywhere, and everything is bathed in the early morning light of spring, swaying and swaying in the spring breeze, just like a girl's light song and dance, which is very lovely.
Creatures wake up in the spring morning, showing the preciousness and temptation of life. The spring morning touched the hope in my heart and inspired the enthusiasm of life.
The beautiful nature in spring is so beautiful at this moment: there are bright sunshine everywhere, colorful colors everywhere, sweet bird songs everywhere and intoxicating fragrance everywhere. This is a green world, an ocean of flowers.
Everywhere there are people who go for an outing, the kindness and satisfaction of the elderly, the laughter of lovers and the innocent smile of children. Suddenly understand: the beautiful spring is so beautiful because it makes people's mood bloom at this moment.
Spring rain, spring rain and spring thunder floated in with the spring breeze. Spring rain is like silk, fog, smoke and tide.
Through this thread, everything in the world is like a faint, foggy freehand painting, flickering.