A rich man went to ask a philosopher why many people didn't like him after he became rich. The philosopher took him to the window and said, "Look out, what do you see?" The rich man said, "I see many people." The philosopher took him to the mirror again and asked, "What do you see now?" The rich man replied, "myself." The philosopher smiled and said, "Windows and mirrors are made of glass. The only difference is that the mirror is covered with a thin layer of silver. But because of this money, you can only see yourself and not others. "
Please make up your mind to choose your own style, write your own title and write an article of no less than 800 words with the topic of "seeing yourself and seeing others". What you write must be within the scope of the topic.
Second, analysis:
In the face of material interests, we should not only see ourselves, but also others, and we should also think of the interests of the vast majority of people and the interests of the country. Positive examples, such as Du Fu, Hai Rui, Hong Kong millionaire Henry Fok, and negative examples, such as Cheng, all put the interests of others in mind and always pay attention to the sufferings of the people, and the people's eyes are full of him. As Cang Kejia said, "People will always remember those who worked for the people." In hell, everyone only sees himself, and the long spoon can't feed himself. For example, when you learn calligraphy, you should look at other people's handwriting and lay a good foundation at the beginning. After reaching a certain level, we must see ourselves clearly and create our own words in order to achieve higher achievements.
As far as stratification is concerned, there are three aspects.
(1) If you only see yourself and can't see others, you will become complacent and eventually lose yourself. For example, in the late Qing Dynasty, you regarded yourself as a "paradise" and could not see the strengths of others.
(2) Seeing others but not yourself will make you lose your personality and become a vassal of others. For example, at the beginning of the founding of the People's Republic of China, we only saw the Soviet Union and paid no attention to ourselves. Seeing others, but not yourself, will also make others lose sight of themselves at some time and hurt themselves. For example, when a mother educates her children, only seeing them will make them selfish and ignore their feelings.
(3) Only by seeing yourself and others can we learn from each other, strengthen ourselves, constantly surpass ourselves, and finally realize our own transformation.
Three. example
Walking in the world of you, me and him
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When the eagle sees the vastness of the blue sky, it flaps its wings, free and proud; The waterfall is dangerous when it sees a steep cliff, and it flows thousands of miles, flowing silver and jade, and it is as smart as a dragon; When Haiyan saw the surging waves, she sang loudly, braving the wind and waves, and the atmosphere was obvious. If people only see themselves, they will be like floating grass on the wall, frivolous and shallow, like a lonely deer on the grassland, and they are always in danger of being swallowed up. God created man and multiplied from generation to generation. In life, there are not only you, but also him and me. People are the world, not just me. Please don't.
You, me and him are in this colorful world. When you see yourself and others, your world will be more wonderful and the sunshine in your life will be more brilliant.
See yourself, see yourself. Yes, I am very important, I am unique, I love the clouds in the clear sky, I love the pearls in the bright starry sky, I love others to live in my world and live in my happiness. But I also deeply understand that I am a member of all beings, and everyone created by God is equal, but why should I be special? Above others? Yes, I'm just me, a nobody in the vast world. I have no reason and no ability to let others follow me closely. Moreover, I have so many shortcomings, so ordinary, only in a small self-world short-sighted narcissism. How dangerous it will be. I am only a small part of this world. I am imperfect, unattractive and even dirty. I can't grind myself at my own expense and lose my precious life in my own world.
Get out of yourself and see others. Other people have beautiful and sad life stories like you. Others are as unique and happy as you, and others have a shocking spiritual journey to surprise you. Step out of your small circle, let your sentiment be tempered in the majestic tide of life, let your temperament be tempered in the tide of bold love for life, brush away the dust and dirt in your heart, and illuminate the dark corner of your life. Looking for the gold of life from others, that noble quality will supplement your innate poverty of life! Go to others to explore the mysteries of life, where there are perseverance, straightness and twists and turns, which will move you, excite you, destroy your weakness and laziness, rebuild your inner dam, make you fair and make you bright; Listening to other people's nonsense, although it looks full of thorns, will make you clear-headed after dizziness, thoroughly understand on the lost road, and even rein in the reins at the edge of the cliff. The integrity of life is beautiful because of lovely others. And seeing the beauty of others, others will see your beauty, know each other's hearts, cherish each other's feelings, and your life will be sweeter and more wonderful.
See yourself clearly, see yourself clearly; See others and understand others.
Therefore, the road of life is no longer accompanied by darkness, only loneliness; The scene of life is no longer misty and rainy, and the wind is bleak. I will walk out of a brand-new self, a sunny self in my life. In laughter, singing and blessing, I walked with others, accompanied by excitement and sweetness. I have walked on the road of life with maturity, self-confidence and pride, thus moving towards success and glory.
The evaluation topic is "Walking in your world ……", which is closely related to the content of the topic and full of philosophical thinking and reverie. How to treat yourself and others is not only the starting point of this essay, but also a problem that must be taken seriously in the long journey of life. The author is good at association and metaphor. The first paragraph of the article uses a series of metaphors to lead to the theme "See yourself, see others, your world will be more exciting, and the sunshine in your life will be there."
The author is also good at using a large number of alliterative sentences appropriately, which makes people feel refreshed and exhausted. For example, "I love clear clouds, I love bright stars, I love others to live in my world …" In short, the outstanding features of this composition are rich vocabulary and gorgeous language, as well as poetic and philosophical exposition of the topic.
Desire-the isolated area of the mind
Candidates for the entrance examination
Asking what the selfish desires in the world are makes people evil and full of gullies.
Wei Zhi has a saying: If you can see what you want, you will be satisfied with yourself. But how many people can be self-disciplined? Desire can turn friends into enemies; Turn a cat into a jackal; Will make people feel isolated in the crowd; Although I am laughing, there is an arrow behind me. Desire is the source of pollution of the fountain of the soul and the isolated area of the soul!
Desire comes from what you can desire (at least most people think so). There is a saying that "if you can't see what you can desire, your heart will not be disturbed." All human evils seem to be related to money, so money has become the source of all evils and the thin silver behind the glass, so that people only know their own needs and interests; Let people hurt others just to satisfy their own desires. Finally, they summed up a sentence of liberation: it's all because of money that I only see myself. So there are many corrupt officials, black businessmen and other greedy people.
We can't deny the power of desire, but it doesn't mean that desire is a black hole, irresistible, and even the light of truth can't escape its bondage. Reason should be the strong backing of truth, because reason will lead to bright modern civilization. Therefore, we should not isolate our hearts on an island full of desires, but should bloom in the flower bed of new souls.
No one will believe that people will be stopped by money, because God once said that people are full of sunshine and flowers. Seeing others clearly and knowing others is actually very simple. Let go of selfish desires, liberate their hearts and let them bathe in the sunshine of love. Think of other people's kindness, listen to their voices, wipe their foggy eyes, put aside worldly material desires and break their inner barriers. From then on, I found that the sky is so blue and the water is so blue.
To hell with those desires! Treat those desires like dirt, and be careful to pollute your hands and heart. Life is so beautiful and colorful, but it has not been discovered because the heart is polluted; Life is so colorful, but I am lost in the wilderness because my heart is isolated.
Desire is SARS, and desire is the isolated area of the soul. Don't always stand in front of the mirror and stare at your haggard face, and don't always listen to your fragile heartbeat in the dark. Open the window, and you will find that spring is beautiful and true love lasts forever!
Commenting on the topic of "desire-the isolation zone of the soul", we will naturally think that the reason why the rich man in the topic material was rejected was desire. The strong possessiveness of money makes him and everyone's heart farther and farther away. This proposed topic reflects the examinee's accurate grasp of the content of the topic and shows the examinee's ability to refine and summarize. The title is the eye of the article, "the title is half good", which is correct. The article has been lyrical discussion around the topic content. Although these discussions are not rigorous because of lack of logical reasoning, their themes are clear, their language is beautiful and their structure echoes, which won the favor of marking teachers and won good marks.
A cup of boiled water
Candidates for the entrance examination
Gently push open the window. What do you see? Heaven, earth, sun and moon, the essence of vegetation. A cup of boiled water is clear and transparent. Take a deep breath of hot air, and you will instantly feel the wetness of spring, the heat of summer, the coolness of autumn and the coldness of winter.
Young people like to drink coffee because it is rich; Middle-aged people like to drink tea because it smells good; Old people like boiled water because they can see others.
A cup of boiled water is common, but you can see the whole world through it. If you take a sip of this water in your hand in the morning, it will be very light but slightly sweet, just like dew in the morning, dripping on the tip of the leaf. It's mom's love. Can you tell? It is as pure as saussurea involucrata in full bloom on a snowy mountain and as deep as a stream flowing in a valley! Who calls us in the deepest part of our hearts? Who planted care on every inch of our skin?
"But how much love there is in an inch of grass, I got three rays of spring." .
This kind of water is the essence of the sun and the moon, and it is the dew brewed by rain. When you are thirsty, this is irreplaceable by any drink. Through this time and space, there are a pair of teachers' eager eyes. When a seedling appears, there will be thousands of gardeners busy for her in Qian Qian.
Along the campus Qingshi Road and the familiar Liu Yang Road, you can see that Xiaoya has become strong and green when she first entered the school. "A piece of chalk, two feet of platform, three truths." Bit by bit, nourishing the heart.
A cup of boiled water can see the whole world. Spring breeze, summer rain, autumn harvest and winter snow, plants, insects, fish, birds and animals ... how small I am! I used to fly kites on the hillside, but I couldn't compare with the birds in the sky; I used to drink the spring water in the valley, but fish are more free; I tried to leave home, but I didn't leave grandpa's sight or grandma's advice.
All this turned out to be love. Without love, how can there be thousands of people in Qian Qian for you? Without love, how can you help millions of people?
I love this cup of boiled water, and everyone stands in front of me clearly. Don't disturb the turbidity of coffee, don't forget tea, and don't be arrogant when soda is boiling.
This kind of boiled water is tasteless, but I can taste thousands of flavors, sweet and sour. It is the love of others, the affection, the care, and the return and sincerity that should be paid.
Arrogant people, conceited people, can't see the rest of the world. "Qingshan is outside the mountain and the building is outside the building." Seeing others can better remind you of sleeping yourself!
Boiled water is really a good medicine for waking people up. Open your eyes, see the world, care for yourself and others.
Comment on "A Cup of Boiled Water", as the title of the article, may not be accurate, but it should be more appropriate. The composition in the examination room is "in a hurry" and it is impossible to piece it together and carefully scrutinize it. Shortcomings are inevitable. Throughout the full text, you will feel that this article shows innate literary talent, elegant and implicit language and rich poetry everywhere. "A cup of boiled water is the whole world. Spring breeze and summer. " Reading such words, such as sipping fragrant teas and drinking refined mash, the marking teacher will certainly applaud! It should be pointed out that the author does not forget to focus on the theme while expressing his talent. The last two paragraphs solve this problem well.
I am not a man.
Candidates for the entrance examination
Writing that I am not human does not mean that I am really not human, but it proves the fact that I am human.
As a person, I have received a school education of truth, goodness and beauty since I was a child, but I don't understand that I can easily accept the idea of falsehood, ugliness and ugliness. As a person, I will do my best for myself. Although I came last at the bus stop, I'm sure I can get on the bus first and find a seat. When I see someone fall and the blind man cross the road, I will definitely say, "Good fall, ah!" The blind. "If I am unlucky, I will curse the whole society.
In this society, I pursue all material interests and then severely scold the society.
Since then, although I am human, I am no longer human, my mind is twisted and black, and I am no longer human.
There are always countless changes and possibilities for one thing. Just when I decided that I was not a "person", I fell in love. My girlfriend's name is Zhen Shan Mei. Since then, my life has been completely disrupted and completely messed up.
With her, I always give way to the latecomers at the end of the bus and finally when I get to my seat. I always have to contract the garbage of Uncle Li and Aunt Wang next door. What other donations are there? I really can't stand it, but I can't buy her a pair of earrings to show my love. I can't take it anymore. I asked her with difficulty, "Why is this?" She said, "Because my name is Zhenshanmei." However, things are not completely bad. I found that people in the community who never talk to me laugh when they see me. People always ask me to publicize the meaning of love donation, and I also receive many thank-you letters, so I am addicted to them and busy socializing with many people who write thank-you letters. Truth, goodness and beauty said, "You have changed, and I forced you to change, but I don't like coercion. If one day, she leaves at a loss, and I go back to my old life, just with one more thing. I miss her. The people I love are true, kind and beautiful. One day, when I was reading a book, I saw this sentence: "People are like a tripod, which is composed of truth, goodness and beauty. I can't live without it." I shouted excitedly like a child, "I see. Finding truth, goodness and beauty, I said to her, "I see, I have changed." It turns out that seeing others, for others, makes my life meaningful and can become a real' person'! " Truth, goodness and beauty smiled, and I held them in my arms.
Friends, people who only see themselves are not real "people", but those who see others are real "people", really bones, goodness is the body, and beauty is the appearance. Let's rally ourselves with truth, goodness and beauty and be a capitalized "person".
Comment topic composition has the characteristics of wide topic, unlimited style and flexible writing. If you keep an article in a cage and cover everything, it will inevitably lead to superficial views and loose meaning. Therefore, you should learn to "choose one point, not the rest" in a wide range, and provide yourself with a stage to give full play. This paper focuses on one point, that is, the new understanding of "man"
At first, "my mind was twisted and turned black, and I was no longer a' person'". Later, I got to know truth, goodness and beauty. Guided by the demonstration of truth, goodness and beauty, I gradually realized: "Seeing others, for others, my life is meaningful, and I can become a real' person'!" Because the author carefully selected a unique starting point, which is reasonable and has great personality, he got a good high score.
It should be pointed out that the topic "I am not a person" is not appropriate. It can be changed to "critic" or the last sentence of the article "Be a capitalized' person'!" Almost.
Say good night at dawn
Candidates for the entrance examination
Remember that you are always the sun, and the light you emit will not only heat you, but also heat others.
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Miss Jia Jia:
Hello! I received your letter yesterday, and I was very unhappy. It is sunny outside today. I'm sitting at my desk writing to you. I hope this sunshine can also shine on you, so that your mood can enjoy this glory. Give me a smiling face.
I hold your photo, but I can't see your lively confidence before. Only melancholy and dissatisfaction. Why not make yourself unhappy? It's just that the grades have been pulled down! I miss you very much recently, remembering the days when we went to school in that mountain village primary school. How nice! Our hearts are as pure as crystal. I remember that I got 5 points higher in the second exam. You happily picked a handful of wild flowers from the mountain and gave them to me, saying that you would congratulate me on my progress, but you were indeed a little lower than the first exam, so I also gave you a handful of wild flowers in return and told you that we worked together. How nice it was then.
Later, your father will take you to the city. Although I miss you very much, I still say goodbye with a smile. I hope you can get a good education in the city and get into a good university in the future. But ..... How can you not tolerate others' excellence in your heart? Has the fierce competition in the city changed your kindness? You obviously think Lily's new skirt looks beautiful on her just like yours, but you tell others that she looks like a witch. You are beautiful, which is undeniable. Why do you deliberately ignore the beauty of others? In that exam, Xiao Xuan's English was 20 points higher than yours, so you secretly tore their papers. Is Jia Jia very tired? Your Excellence is also my role model, but if you are the only outstanding person in the world, then society. Jiajia, while appreciating yourself, don't shut others out, or others will reject you, okay? It's strange. How do I know this? Your father told me, because he also wants his daughter to be really good.
I believe you are familiar with the saying "no one is perfect". The advantages of others may be your shortcomings. Seeing others, accepting others, appreciating others, appreciating others, is also a kind of promotion for yourself.
Come on, Jia Jia, I won't allow you to be sad any more. Think about our carefree past, our vows, treat the people around you as your best friends-I treat them the same, treat the unhappy things that happened before as a nightmare, and say good night to them at dawn when you start a new day, and let them sleep forever.
Remember that you will always be the sun. When you appear, you will not only see yourself through the clouds, but also see people, and people will see you. Your good friend: aaaaaa.
Date, year and month
The reason why this epistolary composition can touch teachers' heartstrings and get high marks is firstly its emotional factors. The author patiently persuades and persuades his former friends, telling their worries and dissatisfaction, and there is true feelings between the lines. Secondly, the narrative is kind and natural, unpretentious and eloquent, which conforms to the characteristics of epistolary style; Third, reason thoroughly and stick to the theme. After listing the other person's bad psychology and behavior, the author wrote: "While appreciating yourself, don't shut others out ..." "Seeing others, accepting others, appreciating others, appreciating others is also a kind of promotion for yourself." Undoubtedly, these reasons are easily accepted by the other party, and they are also accurately positioned within the scope of the topic. It is said that there is a realm. Otherwise, it is said that there is no realm. "Also said that" writing feelings is refreshing, writing scenery is in people's eyes and ears, and telling things is just like what they say. "This article can be said to be a thing or two.
Father's cloth shoes
Candidates for the entrance examination
In my mind, my father has always been a hero with indomitable spirit and a broad mind like the sea.
My father always wears a pair of shoes with cloth soles, a gangster with a wide white background, which is particularly dazzling and outdated among the people coming and going in the street. Once I asked my father with a smile, "Now that you are a big shot, why are you still wearing such rustic shoes?" Father laughed for a long time without saying a word.
My father once said to me, "son, don't think that we are rich now, but we have the blood of rural people in our veins, and we should have the simplicity and faithfulness of rural people in our bones." I listened to my father's words and nodded thoughtfully.
When my father was a child, his family was very poor. My father has no good clothes to wear and not enough to eat. But dad studies very hard, is willing to work hard, and always takes the first place in the class.
Under the threat of poverty, many children drop out of school and go home to herd sheep, but my father's father, my grandfather, an honest but determined cultivator, gritted his teeth and said, "No matter how hard you are, you should let your children learn." In this way, grandpa barely finished junior high school with his broad shoulders and crystal sweat, and his family was so poor that there was nothing left. Father, with the diligence, simplicity and wisdom of rural children, grandpa tossed and turned on the kang all night and didn't get a result. The next morning, grandpa calmly said to his father, "Come with me to cut wheat this morning." The sensible father blinked as if he understood something. Without saying anything, he picked up his sickle and followed him out of the yard.
But when grandpa stepped out of the threshold, he couldn't help but be shocked, and so did his father-all the men and women in the village stood outside the door, some carrying half a rice bag, some carrying a thin chicken, some carrying some sweaty broken tickets, and some holding some shabby but clean clothes ... The village chief grandpa four smiled and said, "Our ancestors have good geomantic omen, and there is a scholar, the youngest son (. Our villagers' faces are radiant ... let's see the children off ... "Tears rolled down the wrinkles on grandpa's face, and grandpa shouted at his father," kneel down for everyone ... "My father fell to his knees on the dirt floor. ...
My father later said to me, "Do you know why I always wear cloth shoes? When I left that day, the fourth grandmother in the village gave me a pair of cloth shoes and said,' Xiaosanzi, it's true that everyone has difficulties these days. You can live your whole life. You can't always think about yourself, but also think about others. Who has no problem? Your fourth grandmother, when I lived in old bones, I hoped that future generations would produce a talented person and become a big official in the future, so that all the people in our village could have enough to eat and all the children could study. "Later, I went to college and saw the world, but whenever I faced the colorful world in the city, I would think of the scene that the whole village gave me. People should live with a conscience. People should not only think for themselves, but also for others! Looking at the tears in my father's eyes, I suddenly understood the reason why my father resolutely gave up his generous treatment and returned to the village to lead everyone to start a business: people can't just live by themselves.
At first glance, the topic of "father's cloth shoes" thought it had nothing to do with the topic However, wait a minute. After reading the whole article, you will feel that this candidate has written a short story with profound implications. The theme of this story coincides with the topic of "seeing yourself and seeing others".
After graduating from college, my father resolutely gave up his generous treatment and returned to the village to lead everyone to start a business. After he became rich, he became a "big shot", but he "always wore a pair of cloth shoes" in order not to forget his roots, "not only for himself, but also for others". "People can't just live by themselves" played the strongest sound in the whole text.
I share apples with my son.
Gaoguo
"Dad, dad, eat the apple."
My son rushed to me excitedly after washing a red apple and insisted that I take a bite first. If I don't eat, my son will be angry. So I took a big bite. In fact, anyone who sees such a big red apple will be greedy. In this way, an apple was destroyed in our laughter.
My son asked me, "Dad, when I grow up, will you still eat apples with me like this?" I nodded. I remember eating apples like this every time when I was a child, and eating them with my mother.
The son said, "Dad, grandma told me that when you were young, you ate apples the same way as her. Apples are so expensive there that grandma pretends not to eat them. She said that if you didn't, you wouldn't eat apples. She also said that the air bitten there is sweeter than modern apples. But you are so stupid that you never found her biting the air. "
God, every time my mother bites the air, she says it's sweeter than an apple. I suddenly blindsided, tears swirled in my eyes, and I felt unspeakable guilt.
When I was a child, whenever I shared apples with my mother, I always felt that my mother had a big mouth and ate too much, so whenever my mother opened her mouth, I rushed to grab the apples and said, "Well, you've had enough, it's my turn to eat."
I only see myself and the apples I want to eat. Have I ever seen my mother just pretend to fool me? And I'm worried that my mother eats more than me.
When I slowly opened my wet eyes, it was dark all around. It turned out to be just a dream. I was just an ordinary high school student. Where do I get my son? However, it must be true that my mother only pretends to eat apples every time, because every time I eat apples, I will keep barking.
Think about it carefully. How many details in my life do I only see myself and not others?
When eating at home, you can grow taller if you only see good food, but you can stay healthy if you don't see your parents eating well; Making fun of classmates at school, only seeing them happy, but not seeing others' sadness; On the bus, I only saw the comfort of sitting in my position, but I didn't see the hard work of the old man.
Many things happen around us that only see ourselves and can't see others. The list goes on, but how much have we noticed?
Therefore, our parents will think that we are unfilial, classmates will think that we are too much, and the elderly will think that we have no love, so everyone doesn't like us because we only see ourselves and can't see others.
Open the window of your heart. Integrate the world into your heart and treat yourself and others equally.
It's important to see yourself clearly.
Seeing yourself is more important than seeing others. Others are just a mirror. Seeing others is to see yourself better.
one
Proud people often only see themselves, but not others.
Autumn is coming, and all rivers flow over the river. Hebo enjoys himself and takes the beautiful scenery on earth as his own. As for the North Sea, he couldn't see the end of the water from the east, and Hebo began to look, sighing at the ocean.
Hebo is very proud because he didn't see the North Sea. Once I saw the North Sea, I felt very ashamed and had to look at the ocean and sigh. Obviously, the North Sea is a mirror that allows Hebo to see himself clearly.
two
A wise man always looks like a mirror. He saw himself and others.
Zou Ji compared beauty with Xu Gong and asked his wife, who said, "You are beautiful. How can Xu Cangong compare with you?" Asked his concubine, she said, "Xu Gong can't compete with you!" Asked the guest, the guest said, "Xu Gong is not as beautiful as you!" " Zou Ji peeped in the mirror and realized that the Buddha was far away. He thought deeply and realized: "My wife is beautiful and I am private; The beauty of my concubine is afraid of me; Those who are beautiful to me want something from me. "
Zou Ji did not lose himself in praise. He first looks at himself in the mirror, and then thinks deeply to find out why others flatter him. He always keeps a clear head.
If Zou Ji can't see his true face clearly, he will believe what others say and naturally can't see others clearly.
How important it is to see yourself clearly and know yourself!
three
Saints are good at taking people as mirrors, seeing themselves clearly, restraining themselves and subliming themselves.
It's a subordinate of Prince Li of the East Palace. Seeing the deepening contradiction between the Prince and Li Shimin, the king of Qin, he repeatedly advised the Prince to take the initiative. After the change of Xuanwumen, Li Shimin valued his courage and talent, not only didn't add guilt, but also made him an admonition officer, often introducing the imperial palace to ask about political gains and losses. Kevin·Z is very happy to be the master of his bosom friend. He helps him wholeheartedly, knowing everything and talking about everything. In addition, he often argued. Taking history as a mirror, we can know the rise and fall; Look at a person as a mirror and you will know the gain and loss. I have kept these three mirrors in case I pass by. Now that Wei Zhi is dead, I have a mirror. "
The reason why Emperor Taizong became an enlightened monarch and created "the rule of chastity" has a lot to do with his ability to see himself from time to time with Wei Zhi as a mirror. He is broad-minded, knows people well and does his duty well, and forgets past grievances. He has the determination of self-discipline, and he can accept and correct Wei Zhi's criticism. Of course, when Emperor Taizong used Wei Zhi, he took a fancy to his courage and talent, which also shows from one side that looking at others is to see himself better.
In short, if a person wants to see himself, he must see others, otherwise he will never see himself.