Introduction to bird paradise:
"Bird Paradise" is a famous tourist attraction in Guangdong Province. On the sandbar of Tianma River in Xinhui County, which is 0/00 km away from Guangzhou/KLOC-,there is a strange big banyan tree with a history of more than 500 years. The branches of this tree hang down to the ground and plunge into the soil to become new trunks. In this way, with the passage of time, this big banyan tree turned itself into a forest. Thousands of birds live in the forest. White crane and grey horse crane go out very late in the morning and come back. Grey crane has a rest at night. They alternate with each other and are orderly, forming a spectacular "bird world". 1924, after the famous writer Ba Jin visited here, he was deeply touched and wrote a well-known prose-a paradise for birds. Bird paradise, formerly known as "Bird Wharf", covers more than 20 acres of swaying banyan leaves in the river, and the height of the tree is about 15 meters. The branches of Ficus microcarpa have beautiful whisker-like air temperature roots, which lignify and grow into new branches after landing. On the new trunk, new aerial roots have grown and become complex and chaotic banyan trees. In this bush, there are more than ten kinds of birds, the most striking of which are white cranes and grey horse cranes (that is, night herons, commonly known as visiting birds). White cranes come out at night, gray cranes come out at dusk and return in the morning. Early in the morning and one night, the cranes came out and returned, circling and dancing, covering the sky, twittering, singing and laughing, which became a spectacle.
Second, the legend
More than 500 years ago, there was a severe drought every year in Tianma village, and the farmland dried up and the crops failed. In order to fight drought, the villagers opened an artificial river, Tianma River, to irrigate farmland with water from the Pearl River. However, that year did not improve. Local influential people insisted that the Tianma River was cut off, and the geomantic omen was cut off, forcing villagers to stop the river. The villagers, with tears in their eyes, dumped the selected soil in the middle of the river by boat, which soon became a mound and an island in the middle of the river. At that time, a villager stuck a banyan branch on the mound to tie the boat. Unexpectedly, the banyan branches took root and sprouted in the second year. Because of abundant water, banyan trees grow taller and taller, and many air roots hang down from the branches and drill into the soil every year. A few days later, the buried roots will grow into new branches, the branches will become thicker, and many air roots will hang down ... so year after year, there are countless trunks. After hundreds of years of growth, a tree has grown into a forest, covering the whole island, with an area of 18 mu. It looks like a virgin forest at close range and an oasis floating on the water at a distance. This is really a miracle in the south of China!
Third, the text analysis:
The characteristics expressed in the article are mainly manifested in two aspects: one is to grasp the characteristics of the scenery and describe it statically and dynamically; Second, expressing feelings through scenery description is combined with expressing feelings directly.
The focus of this paper is what the author saw when he went to bird paradise twice. The author passed through the paradise of birds for the first time and didn't see any birds. He focused on the huge and vibrant beauty of the big banyan tree. According to the observation order from far to near, the author first writes that it covers a large area. Through the debate on the number of banyan trees, it shows that this banyan tree is an isolated tree, which shows that the banyan tree is big. Then write a close look at the banyan tree, and show the vitality of the big banyan tree through the description of the branches and green leaves. After an emotional description, the author gave a heartfelt admiration: "This beautiful southern tree."
Passing through the paradise of birds for the second time, the author focuses on the lively scenes of bird activities. From the author's description, we not only know that there are many kinds of birds here, but also clearly feel the freedom and happiness of their lives.
Fourth, appreciation of classic passages:
"Green shines brightly in our eyes, as if there is a new life trembling on every green leaf."
Ba Jin is good at describing the essence and appearance of things with exact words and expressing his feelings appropriately. When expressing the beauty of banyan vitality, he wrote, "Green shines brightly in our eyes, as if there is a new life trembling on every green leaf." If "seems" is removed here and becomes a reality, it is not true; If it is changed to "I want to", the feeling and scenery are completely separated, and the tone is dull. If "trembling" becomes "surging, jumping and trembling", it will be impossible to accurately describe the unique mental state of the green leaves with vitality. "Seemingly, Thriller" vividly integrates the author's feelings and associations at that time into the scene. With the mentality of "forgetting things", the artistic conception is far-reaching and wonderful. The leaves of the banyan tree are bright and anti-customer-oriented, and it says "Green color shines brightly in our eyes". Leaves are so attractive to people that people have to look at them. The vitality of banyan trees can be described as vigorous.
"Birds are everywhere, birds are everywhere."
Writing "sound" from hearing and "shadow" from vision can better reflect the excitement at that time than writing about birds themselves. Big, small, flowery, black, some standing on branches, some flying, some flapping their wings. Fully write various forms and vivid images, giving people an immersive feeling.
There are many birds in Bird's Paradise. Why did the author only write a thrush?
This is the expression of the combination of point and surface that we once said. This thrush is the spot here, and many birds have become noodles. Using a thrush to express the freedom and happiness of birds makes us feel the spectacular scene of birds jubilation, which is also called dynamic description. Then the big banyan tree in front belongs to (static description). The combination of static and dynamic is another expression of this paper. In future writing, students should be good at using these two expressions. (Design intention: The understanding of language and characters will be easily and naturally infiltrated into the study of expression methods, so that students can learn both literature and composition, and play a instrumental role in Chinese.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) Features of the article:
The rhythm is lively and the feelings are profound.
The full text of Bird's Paradise has clear rhythm, sonorous voice, natural fluency and catchiness. Short sentences are often used at the beginning of the text, which is concise and lively, making people better and better. Write static banyan, with long sentences, concrete and vivid, meaningful and intriguing. Writing birds frolicking, taking words as sentences, is patchy and lively, giving people a sense of urgency. The author also used the words "serial" and "top truth" to "see this one clearly, miss that one again, see that one, and the other will fly again". When reading, it gives people a feeling of being at a loss. The author also uses more parallel and overlapping sentences to reflect lively and festive scenes.
Emotionally, the author is good at expressing in many ways. For example, on the way to rowing, "three paddles paddle regularly in the water, which sounds like a piece of music." Write a scene to express your inner happiness. When I didn't see the bird, I felt disappointed and confused. "There are not any birds in the bird paradise, and I can't help thinking so." Write your thoughts clearly and write your feelings secretly. When fascinated by the vitality of the big banyan tree and infected by the joy of birds, the direct lyrics: "This southern tree is really beautiful" and "That song is really nice" set off the direct lyrics in front, making the lyrics at the end extremely strong and shocking, and the ending was as powerful as a leopard's tail: "That bird's paradise is indeed a bird's paradise!"
If you want to improve, you must first suppress and charm.
Avoid being straightforward. This paper focuses on the author's ideological changes, hoping to promote first and then suppress. Write the illusion of seeing several big banyan trees for the first time, first suppress them, then describe them as a big banyan tree, and then raise them; Write down the regret of not seeing the bird first, then suppress it, then highlight the scene of the bird playing, and then raise it. It is proved that Bird's Paradise is indeed Bird's Paradise, with its ups and downs and touching artistic effects.
The natural fluency and catchy recitation of the full text are all attributed to the charm of the article. In the first dynamic paragraph, the author uses two nouns "at first" and "later" to express time, clap his hands with two short sentences, and connect the whole scene change process from silence to birds, to birds starting to fly, and finally to birds everywhere with his own modality. The following passage reflects the connection from generalization to concreteness, from overall description to partial description: from the generalization of "too many things to see" to "see this one clearly, miss that one, see that one, and the other one flies again", and then to the fine writing style of a thrush, which is coherent, smooth and compact.