Learn to follow up and observe.
Follow-up observation (also called follow-up observation) refers to continuous, repeated and repeated observation of something in life or someone around you (this observation is generally not completed once or twice), so as to obtain specific and detailed composition materials. This is the primary stage of learning to observe and developing the habit of paying attention to life.
4. Learn to observe directionally.
Directional observation (also called focused observation) is a directional, selective and focused observation of many people or things in life, so as to obtain specific and detailed composition materials. This is the second stage after "follow-up observation". Learn to observe and form the habit of paying attention to life.
3. Learn to observe at random.
Random observation is to observe at any time and place in your own life, face the colorful world, and capture people, events and scenes in all aspects of life in time, as well as events that you accidentally see, hear and think of.
When we observe things, we call our standing position a foothold. Fixed-point observation method is a fixed foothold, and orderly observation, that is, from near and far or from far and near, from high to low or from low to high, from left to right or from right to left. When observing, the author's foothold can never be changed and must be fixed on a basic point. Therefore, using fixed-point observation method, first of all, we should pay attention to choosing a good observation position. Photographers take pictures, painters paint, choose lenses and describe objects, all of which pay great attention to the choice of a foothold. The choice of foothold is often related to the success or failure of a photo or a picture. The same is true of writing articles. "From one side of the mountain, the distance is different." The same thing is expressed in different positions, and the "orientation" and "angle" of observation are different. The effect expressed is very different. According to the characteristics of things and the needs of observation, choosing the most ideal foothold is the primary problem of whether fixed-point observation can achieve good results. For example, * * *' s "Qinyuanchun Changsha" vividly shows the vibrant southern autumn scenery. One of the important reasons why the author can express his lofty sentiments in autumn scenery and seize their rich business from the vast scenery is that he successfully used the fixed-point observation method. Secondly, fixed-point observation must be carried out in a certain order. Because all kinds of scenery are in a certain spatial position, it is impossible for us to make many scenery come into view together when observing, and it is impossible to describe many scenery at the same time when expressing. Pay attention to a reasonable observation order when observing. The advantage of fixed-point observation is that the foothold is fixed, and it is easier to concentrate on observation and reach a certain depth. Especially when observing the specific scenery of a certain place, a certain point and a certain side, it is easy to grasp the sound, expression and morphological characteristics of things. In fact, in writing, the author's observation is always chosen for the purpose of expression. The problem is how to make the observation point achieve the purpose of writing reasonably and skillfully.
3. Write a composition on natural observation (240 words). Cactus is a desert plant, and its tenacious vitality makes me admire. Let's take a look at its introduction first!
Cactus is dark green all over. If you look closely, you will find clusters of white thorns on its oval thick stem. This little thorn is its leaf. If it stings you, you will "ouch" for a while. This may be its weapon to protect itself.
Although the cactus looks ugly, if it is open, it is better than Bai Mudan, as if it is decorating itself. Flowers as white as jade are also fragrant, which really makes people want to pick one. But at this time, the small thorn will remind you "just look, don't start work!"
Although the flowering period of cactus is very short, it will wither in only one day, but its vitality is very strong. Whether summer is "scorching sun" or not, as long as it is planted in the soil and left unattended for a few days. Even in the "freezing and snowing" winter, it will not change color and grow tenaciously.
Cactus is a cactus, which is the general name of spherical species of cactus plants. It is not only varied and complex, but also has unique and colorful shapes. It is a pearl in a hundred flowers garden.
If you pay attention to the taste, you can plant some kinds of cactus, such as Jinhu, Feipeony, Dragon Ball and Moon Palace. However, those ordinary cacti also have a "taste". They have strong habits and are easy to cultivate. Flower pots, pottery pots, porcelain pots, purple sand pots and plastic pots are all acceptable. The fertilizer is the residue of plant ash, Taomi water and yogurt. I hope you don't underestimate cactus. Although the variety is common, the flowers are still beautiful and will not disappoint people. However, what makes people sigh is not the beautiful flower season of cactus, but the breeding period of its big balls and small balls. Watching the little balls attached to the mother gradually change from small to big, the thick maternal love is also very touching. When the melons are ripe, these balls will leave their mother's body and open up their own world. Although I am silent, people who like to grow cactus will certainly not turn a blind eye to all this (but I am stupid and can't describe it). A horizontal couplet depicts the following: the baby fell to the ground. I think it is not only vivid, but also full of puns and fun.
Haha, there are actually many kinds of cactus, so I won't introduce them here.
4. You also know about the observation methods of composition, how to choose materials according to the characteristics of the topic, how to examine the topic, and how to choose materials, but when the composition topic is in front of you, you don't know where to start and where to choose.
This phenomenon is quite common among students. This requires students to master the ability to choose materials according to the characteristics of the topic.
(1) For defining the topic of the center, such as "Remember a person who is not afraid of difficulties and makes progress": First, we must accurately and profoundly understand the meaning of the key words that reveal the center in the topic, and make clear what is "not afraid of difficulties and makes progress"; Then, according to the center defined in the title, consider the writing objects (3~5) and determine the writing objects; Then, collect materials extensively (arrange 3~5) and select the best composition material that can best express this center. (2) For topics that don't directly define the center, but define the scope of the center, such as My Relatives: First of all, we must find out how big the scope of the central idea is, who is our "relative" and who is not a better "relative" than our relatives, what qualities and characteristics these "relatives" have, and determine the writing object and the central idea to be expressed; Then, according to the limited scope of the topic, widely recall what materials you have to express the central idea within this scope; Finally, choose the best and most convincing material to write from the many materials that come to mind.
(3) For topics that have nothing to do with the center at all, but only limit the scope of material selection, such as "Remembering something between mom and dad": First, think about what materials can be written within the limited scope of the topic, that is, what happened between mom and dad; Then think further, what is the meaning of each material; Finally, abandon those materials that are meaningless or can't determine the central idea, and choose a material with the clearest understanding and deepest experience from those materials that are meaningful and can determine the center.
5. Write a composition about autumn at a fixed point, with 300 words in autumn.
Time kept flowing forward, the weather gradually cooled down, and the noisy cicada was blown away by autumn, replaced by the whine of crickets in the cracks in the slate under the steps at night. Ah! That lovely autumn has finally come.
Autumn is more prosperous than spring. Spring with flowers and trees is beautiful, but the fruitful autumn colors reveal the joy of harvest. Autumn is more colorful than summer. Although the summer with dense branches and leaves is charming, the autumn colors of golden leaves and green trees are even more refreshing. Autumn is more energetic than winter. Snow-capped winter is lovely, but the golden autumn with fragrant melons and fruits is more colorful. Autumn came to the Woods. From a distance, yellow leaves fall in pairs like golden butterflies. Tired of flying, they landed on my shoulders, head and feet. Brought my thoughts from green summer to golden autumn. As soon as I turned around, another peach leaf fell beside me. I bent down to pick it up and held it in my hand to study it carefully. What a special autumn leaf! It hasn't come yet, it has completely faded, and it still exudes a strong aroma. Autumn came to the orchard, persimmon bent down, bent down, and the branches were about to break. Sister litchi was so fat that she broke her clothes and showed her bulging white belly. Huge apples are covered with branches, showing sweet smiles, or shy or bold. The girl in autumn came to the farmland, and the corn was very happy. It specially changed into a new golden dress, grinning and showing golden teeth. In order to make themselves more beautiful, tomatoes put lipstick on their faces; The potato may have been too excited to break its green mouth and show its yellow tongue. Autumn has come, and the garden has become a paradise for chrysanthemums. They may like this heavy gold, so they choose to bloom their beauty in autumn. Chrysanthemums come in many colors: yellow, pink and white. . Big flowers and curly petals are like a little girl with curly hair. Wandering in the chrysanthemum garden or enjoying a pot of colorful chrysanthemums alone, slowly intoxicated by that fragrance. Autumn brings gold to the earth and cotton-like clouds to the blue sky. Autumn wind, as cool as water, dyed the world yellow with chill.
I like this crisp autumn season!
I like autumn with flowers and leaves and flat chrysanthemums.
I like this unique and splendid autumn scenery.
6. Fourth-grade composition training [Fourth-grade composition training] Fourth-grade composition training topic: 1, summer vacation travel notes, introduce the natural scenery or tourist attractions that impressed you the most in your summer vacation 2. Observe the diary: such as wonderful words 3, colorful clouds 4, continue to write fairy tales 5, dialogue stationery, stationery fairy tales 6. My favorite animal. Guideline 1: Bird Fossil Park 8. Guideline 2: World Heritage 9. Picture composition: better than relatives 10, the thought comes from Wuta 1 1. A letter to parents: 12. My growth story 1: kindergarten period 65438. I think. 15, winter scenery: ice 16, skating lesson 1: summer vacation travel notes. In the fourth grade summer vacation, my mother and I came to Jiangcheng to watch the lights and practice my composition. The first thing you see is three lifelike "yellow cranes", one of which flies around under the arc light, and every time it flies to the finish line, it is a group of "yellow cranes". There is a "little red" on the head. Some hold their heads high, as if enjoying the night scene with flashing lights, some look back into the distance, as if reluctant to leave, and some fly high, as if to fly to the Yellow Crane Tower. Seeing these beautiful yellow cranes, I can't help but think of Cui Hao's poem: "A long time ago, yellow cranes carried saints to heaven, but now there is nothing left, only the Yellow Crane Tower, and the white clouds will never fly without him ..." ... Looking from the railing, the rolling Yangtze River water flows under my feet. Colorful lanterns decorate the boats on the river very beautifully. These boats fluctuate with the river, and the lanterns on them keep flashing, colorful and dazzling! The majestic Yangtze River Bridge, decorated with yellow lanterns, crosses the Yangtze River like a dragon. The steel beams on Qingchuan Bridge are decorated with colorful lanterns, hanging like a rainbow in the deep blue night sky, which makes people daydream. Composition training in the fourth grade of primary school. The TV tower standing on Guishan is not to be outdone, also covered with colorful armor, as if it were a rocket waiting for heaven. The scenery on the Bund is charming and unforgettable. During the summer vacation. I visited the East Lake in Shaoxing, China. East Lake is very beautiful. There are sparkling ripples on the crystal clear lake, and there are lotus leaves beside it. The big green lotus leaf sets off the brilliant red lotus next to it. It's really a beautiful lotus leaf. Lotus flowers reflect sunlight in different ways! There are some ducks playing on the lake. What a harmonious scene! We took Wu Peng's boat and rippled on the lake. When the boat arrived at Taogong Cave, I gave a cry and heard a clear echo. I came to the second cave: Xiantao Cave, the top of which is shaped like a peach. The old boatman said that the roof of Xiantao Cave was a flat peach that fell from the sky when the Monkey King, the Great Sage of Qi Tian, made a scene in the Heavenly Palace. Finally, we came to the Horn Cave, and the walls of the Horn Cave showed blue and purple lines, colorful! After enjoying the East Lake, we came to a bush by the lake. There are many flowers and plants in the bushes. What a colorful scene! I love East Lake! How to write travel notes? Watch in shifts. When we visit a scenic spot, we must always watch it in different places along a certain route and make a detailed observation of the whole or part of the scenic spot. We usually call this observation displacement observation. It is very important to develop the habit of shifting observation for writing, so we must grasp the following points: 1. We must have a clear conversion order. That is, a tour route. For example, Beijing is sunny in June 65438+ 10. One day, the cool autumn wind sent us to Jingshan Park. When we walked into the park gate and looked up, the red columns and yellow tiles of Wanchun Pavilion at the top of the mountain looked like a beautiful picture against the dense trees. At the foot of the mountain is a big flower bed with blooming chrysanthemums like festive fireworks. Let's move forward. The big red apple is like a fat doll squeezed together, pulling open the green leaves and looking out with a smile; The golden persimmon bent the branches. Out of the orchard, we walked up the steps along the mountain road paved with bluestone and came to Wanchunge. Looking up, we can see the beautiful city of Beijing. We used the method of "changing scenery" to analyze the mountaineering process: colorful flower beds at the foot of the mountain → fruitful orchards on the roadside → overlooking the Wanchun Pavilion, with a panoramic view. You are familiar with the way from your home to school. Now please draw a "traffic map", which mainly indicates the direction of the school and your home, including main streets, main buildings and natural and cultural places (such as rivers and squares). Please write a paragraph under the "traffic map" to describe how to get from your home to school and how to see more scenery, and at the same time describe the main characteristics of these scenery: ② Suppose you have an appointment with a friend. But he has never been to your school. Now, please tell him in the simplest language how to find your classroom once you enter your school. Write it down as follows: 2. Good at choosing the angle of observation. For example, we left the orchard, walked up the steps along the mountain road paved with bluestones, and came to Wanchunge. Lift your eyes and look at the beautiful Beijing. Looking west, the white tower of Beihai Park stands at the top of Qiongdao. The island is surrounded by a bright lake. On the lake, cruise ships seem to float in the water like leaves. Looking south, the solemn Forbidden City building is displayed in front of us, covered with gold, and extends to the majestic Tiananmen Square. There are many tall buildings in the distance, with neat layout and elegant colors. Looking eastward, there are many tall buildings and rows of brand-new stone houses. New overpasses crisscross. The analysis shows that Wanchunge is the midpoint of Beijing's central axis and the commanding height. The author chooses Wang Chunguan as an observation point to look around: the North Sea in the west, the majestic Forbidden City in the south and the brand-new buildings in the east. From three aspects, there are not only beautiful garden scenery, but also the rigorous weather and brilliant achievements of modernization of the former palace. The three corners are isomorphic to form the capital Beijing.
7. Classified observation composition When I was in the fifth grade, people said that ants knew their direction by smell and ants knew their direction by sunlight. When ants leave their nests, they leave a smell along the way when they arrive at their destination. When ants want to go home, they will go home by this smell. But what if ants forget to leave a smell? Well, that's definitely impossible, because ants have become a habit. But what if we stop the smell of ants? What will happen to ants? Then let's take a look at the following experiment!
I bought a bag of mothballs from the store, quite a lot. I took my "deadly weapon" bag and came to grandma's house, a land of feng shui. Because my grandmother has a yard with many ants. When I came to my grandmother's house, there happened to be two bunches of hemp leaves in the yard, which attracted many ants. As soon as I open the hemp leaf, my God! This ant is really dazzling and countless! It's really an ant mountain and an ant sea! But this swarm of ants really made me feel bad, and goose bumps fell all over the floor. Okay, let's get down to business. Now my experiment will officially begin. When I looked intently, it was an outdated ant. Ants ran around looking for it, but they didn't find their own ant team. It seems to say, "Where are the ants in front of me?" Why am I the only ant left? "As soon as I saw this ant, I quickly took out my' deadly weapon' moth pill from my bag and drew a line in front of the little ant without hesitation. Seeing the "enemy" in front of him, the little ant realized that he was outnumbered, and quickly took the best road with thirty-six tricks and changed a direction. And I, the general leader of the enemy, quickly arranged my troops in front of the little ants. And this little ant saw the enemy reaching out to it again and ran in the other direction, and this little ant's escape was really funny! Also formed a beautiful arc! I saw the little ant walk away and drew a "sealing line" in front. The little ant saw that he had only one exit left, so he ran and ran. Hehe, you can't outrun me. I unhurriedly drew a satisfactory full stop to this originally defective square-the last line of the square, the last exit of the little ant. Now, the little ant is desperate, but it is still fighting for it and running around. But I still didn't play my moth pill. I watched, and the little ant didn't move in the middle, didn't move. I thought this poor little ant was tortured to death by me and blew back to his "army". Who knows, as soon as he saw his relatives and friends, he suddenly came to life. It seems to say to his long-lost relatives and friends, "I miss you so much!" A big event happened to me before. You won't believe it. I experienced a life-and-death experience. I cleverly pretended to be dead when my life was at stake, and the little master in this room saw my pity and blew me back. I'm smart! Come on, go to my house and I'll tell you what just happened! " After that, it led some ants back to the nest. I'm glad to leave. Now, I have a composition to write!
This ant and I are really predestined! I hope I can see that clever little ant again when I come to grandma's house next time. Honestly, I don't know which one. Ha ha. From this experiment, I not only saw the cleverness of small ants in danger, but also saw the excellent quality of ants, which is worth learning! Goodbye, little ant!
8. Write a 900-word composition (through observation). I have seen atmospheric peony, small plum blossom and fragrant rose, but I have never paid attention to ordinary thunder flowers.
I used to see many flowers at my grandmother's house, so I asked my grandmother, "Grandma, what flowers are the best to raise?" "It's best to raise, and then a few mines. You don't have to worry about buying seeds for burial. It won't be long before they sprout. " Grandma smiled kindly and gave me some seeds.
Lying in my hand are a few sleeping seeds, clearly a few mini mines! But there is still a difference between mine and mine. Look at the exquisite patterns carved on that body. You can't see them unless you look carefully. There is no domineering in the mine at all. Also called mineral flower!
According to grandma's words, I dug up the soil with a small shovel, put the small seeds in the pit, then sprinkled the seeds with slightly wet soil and patted the soil with my hands, for fear of waking up the mines immersed in my dreams. You're done! I picked up my tools and went home.
When I got home, all kinds of things made my joy disappear; Heavy homework, endless nagging, alas, my brain is about to explode! I completely forgot about Lei Hua. It wasn't until I came home from school one day and saw the tiny branches of thunder flowers that I suddenly remembered. She is trying to stretch. I didn't water her once, loosen the soil once, and didn't even take care of her. She sprouted and grew up! It really should be grandma's words!
The ghost weather in summer is terrible. There is not a cloud in the sky, and the summer heat ravages the earth. All the trees hang their heads and all the leaves hang down, which makes them feel a little depressed. All the flowers were dried up by the sun. But a group of strong bodies caught my eye: everything sleeps alone, and they try their best to straighten their weak bodies. I thought: Lei Hua, don't try to be brave. It's unbearable. Why are you still there? One day you will be exhausted ... the weather in summer is as changeable as a doll's face. In the morning, it was clear in Wan Li and Wan Li, and the wind was blowing at dusk. The wind blew so hard that it broke the tree and bent over. I hurried to see Lei Xiaohua. I really couldn't believe my eyes: she braved the strong wind without fear. Will she win?
The next day, the wind stopped and the ground was covered with fallen leaves and broken branches of other trees. I approached Lei Xiaohua, stroking her tired body and tenacious branches. The deciduous red flowers of the surrounding plants have witnessed her strength. It suddenly dawned on me that she was saving her strength and drawing enough energy to face the battle at the moment. Why didn't I think of that?
Leihua, you have told me a lot. ...
9. Composition My Home (sequential observation) 1. Home is accommodation, home is care, home is home, home is the sunshine in everyone's heart, which contributes seven colors of light.
The prodigal son of Tianya takes home everywhere, and home is amorous feelings and romance; Students, the motherland is home, home is a pilot of love and care, adventure, heaven and earth is home, and home is dignity and honor. "She mended it carefully and thoroughly, fearing that it would delay his coming home."
Home is missing and warmth. "Chai Men smells dogs barking and returns to people in the snowy night."
Home is warmth and destination. "The moon stars are rare, and the black magpies fly south."
I just can't find the desolation and depravity of my home. "Three times around the tree, what branches can you rely on?"
I am confused and sad that I can't find my home. The hut was broken by the autumn wind, which was a sad and pity to lose my home.
When homesick, the moon is the only scenery, the stars are the only language, tears are the only letters from home, and memories are the only way to go home. When you are homesick, the sunshine in your heart will give off colorful light. It's sweet to be homesick in the dead of night. The moon in my hometown caresses my head. It's beautiful when I miss home, and Liuer in my hometown holds my hand. There are tears when homesick, but tears are accompanied by tears; When I feel homesick, I really want to do something for my family, no matter how far away from home.
Home is a round of sunshine in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Home is a small umbrella that stays on a rainy night, so that people wandering in a foreign land can get the shade of home; Home is a lamp in the dark, which brings the lost navigator back to the warm harbor; Home is the milk candy in the mouth, so that people who drink Huang Lian for a long time can taste the sweetness of life; Home is a rainbow flying in the sky, so that people everywhere can see the beauty of the world. Everything can't grow without sunshine, and people can't grow without sunshine.
Because sunshine gives people care, care and happiness. So is home.
2. School-My home My school-Jinhua New Century School, with beautiful environment, is located at the foot of Wucheng Mountain not far from the city center. She is a boarding school that trains students with high IQ, high quality and high skills, and strives to implement "all-round quality education", with "Excellence, Excellence and innovation" as its goal and "three things (all for students, all for students and all for students)" as its purpose.
My school is beautiful. I feel honored and proud of my school. I love my school so much! When I came to school, the first thing I saw was the school gate with a golden key embedded on the top. Shine in the sun! When you see it, you will know that "New Century School" is the key to open the treasure house of knowledge, the key to open people's beautiful hearts, and the key to open all-round quality talents in 2 1 century ... The flowers of the motherland grow here and the sun of the motherland rises here in the new century! I love my school because of its beautiful environment! The campus in the new century is like spring all the year round.
Colorful flowers, colorful, is a "sea of flowers." There are all kinds of flowers in the big flower bed in the center of the campus: iris, lilac, marigold … it will dazzle you! The promenade is covered with wisteria. They are like a bunch of upside-down grapes. They are naughty and cute! There are many beautiful flowers in front of the school sports art museum! Red, green, yellow, purple ... everything, can not help but attract butterflies to dance, bees humming and singing, a lively! In the early morning, the teaching building was covered with a layer of bright sunshine, and the students read aloud in the classroom; At night, the teaching building is covered with twinkling stars, and students concentrate on self-study in the classroom at night; After the lights were turned off, the slow evening breeze accompanied us into a sweet dream country ... I love my school because it is fully equipped! The school has two teaching buildings and a sports art museum, and the school is fully equipped.
The laboratory has all kinds of animal and plant specimens and complete experimental equipment; The electrochemical room has a complete set of equipment such as recording, video recording, projection and slide show; The dance studio is spacious and bright, and the floor-to-ceiling mirror can clearly show the dancer's Ana figure ... I love my school because it is warm as home! At school, there is an amiable "grandma principal" who is nearly seventy years old. From morning till night, she is found in every corner of the campus. She always cares about us and loves us! Here, there are hard-working gardeners who impart knowledge to us, open up a treasure house of knowledge for us, let us roam freely in the ocean of knowledge, and cultivate us from an ignorant doll into a young pioneer with culture, ideals, morality and discipline! Here, there is our life teacher, who is with us in our daily life like my mother, be caring and attentive! Here, there are dear classmates. We are United, progressive and friendly like brothers and sisters ... The new century is my home! I love my school, not only because of its beautiful environment, complete facilities and warmth, but more importantly, the school has created a generation of "all-round and high-quality" talents! Schools often carry out various activities, which not only enrich our knowledge, but also broaden our horizons. The school is constantly carrying out teaching reform.
In class, the teacher asked us to use our brains to study and carry out group discussions; After class, the teacher instructed us to set up a "second class". Therefore, the teaching quality of the school is constantly improving! Due to the development of educational reform, I actually fell in love with the most troublesome Chinese class! Today, I also like writing! The school attaches great importance to the cultivation and development of our all-round quality.
We arrange exercise time every day, and there are eye exercises between classes to protect our eyesight. The school has carefully arranged a nutrition package for us, and added milk, snacks and fruits between classes ... so, our bodies are all great! What makes me proud is that the school is a high-grade school, with three teaching departments, namely kindergarten, primary school and junior high school, 28 classes and 1000 teachers and students. The school was rated as "Jinhua Civilized Unit and Excellent Private School in Zhejiang Province" and recommended as "National Advanced Private Primary and Secondary Schools" by the Education Bureaus of all districts and cities and the Provincial Education Department.
I believe that the development prospect of the school will be more brilliant! I love my school, and I am proud to study in such a school! 3. English composition: My home I have a happy family. My mother is a hardworking person. She often cleans at home. My father.