The first sentence is wonderful. As an astronomy (rabbit) lover, I know this better. This ribbon is full of fun, whether it is the dim moonlight when Samsung accompanies the moon to set off the starlight or the three stars are arranged in sequence in the sky.
In the second sentence, the landlord hopes to use sports to set off still life, which is a very clever artistic creation technique. For example, my favorite sentence "... the night now gives way to the ocean of the sun, and the old year melts in freshness."
However, it is necessary to remind the landlord that three meteors are not suitable. First of all, four consecutive flat and turbid characters are difficult to read. In addition, if the landlord has seen the meteor, you will find that the meteor can't reflect the boat because it is too fast.
I am a science student, and my writing ability is limited. If I have to modify it, I might associate the last sentence with "reflecting the boat with the waves" or "reflecting the boat with the stars" The former comes from the moonlit night on the spring river, and the latter comes from Du Fu's "The Milky Way over Three Mountains".