The first natural paragraph is about looking forward to spring. At the beginning of the article, two words "looking forward to" are used in succession. It can be seen how eagerly we look forward to the coming of spring. "The east wind is coming" is what the body suddenly feels, thus reporting the news of spring. "The footsteps of spring are near." I finally heard the stumbling footsteps of spring approaching from far away. It seems as if the author has been listening to the footsteps of spring.
The second natural paragraph always writes about spring scenery. "The mountains are bright and moist," it says that the snow has melted, the spring scenery is bright, and the grass is new and green, making it look particularly refreshing and moist. "The sun is blushing" personifies the sun, which not only expresses the warmth of the spring sun, captures the characteristics of the spring sun, but also expresses the inner charm of the spring sun.
When writing about the mountains, water and sun in early spring, I start from a broad perspective and outline a general outline, which serves as a detailed description for the following pages. Then write the scenes of spring in terms of spring grass, spring flowers, spring breeze, spring rain, and people in spring.
The third natural paragraph is divided into spring grass. "The grass secretly emerges from the soil, tender and green...The wind is gentle and the grass is soft." How vividly the word "diamond" is used; "tender, green" and "the grass is soft" describe the characteristics of early spring grass in such a concise and rich way.
The fourth natural paragraph is divided into spring flowers. The beauty of spring flowers. How enthusiastically the flowers bloomed: "Peach trees, apricot trees, and pear trees, if you don't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers."; How beautiful the color of the flowers is: "The red ones are like Fire is pink like clouds and white like snow."
The smell of the flowers is so pleasant: "The flowers are sweet; when you close your eyes, the trees seem to be full of peaches, apricots, and pears. There are thousands of them under the flowers. Bees were buzzing and butterflies, big and small, were flying around." There are also wild flowers, "scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, and blinking."
The fourth natural paragraph is divided into spring breeze. "There is a short canopy tied in the shade of the ancient tree, and the staff and quinoa help me cross the east bridge. The apricot blossom rain makes my clothes wet, and the willow wind blows on my face without chilling." When the spring sunshine shines on the earth, the willows spit out fresh green, and the breeze blows. People's faces were so warm and soft, and they could no longer feel the slightest chill.
The fifth natural paragraph is divided into spring rain. When writing about the spring rain, the author first writes about the characteristics of the spring rain: "like cow hair, like flower needles, like filaments, densely woven diagonally, and a thin layer of smoke is covered on the roof of the house." Then write about the scene in the rain and paint a peaceful and beautiful ink painting of spring rain.
The fifth natural paragraph is about people in spring. Spring is here, "Every household in the city and countryside, old and young, come out one by one as if they are rushing to go. Relax and rejuvenate your muscles and bones, cheer up and do your own thing." wrote. People who have been dormant all winter welcome the joy of warm wind and warm sun. People are full of hope, because "'The plan for a year lies in spring.' At the beginning, there is plenty of time and plenty of hope."
The sixth natural section is praising spring. The author uses three metaphors to describe spring. Spring is new and has strong vitality: "Spring is like a baby that just fell to the ground, it is new from head to toe, and it is growing." Spring is beautiful and lively: "Spring is like a little girl, blooming with flowers. , smiling, walking."
Spring is strong and powerful: "Spring is like a strong young man, with iron-like arms and waist and feet, leading us forward." From dolls to little girls to young men, the order of descriptions in the article is also thought-provoking, describing different scenes at different times. This ending is surprising and quite cute.
After the author perfectly created a picture of spring, he praised spring with all his heart, further revealing that spring has unstoppable creativity and infinite beautiful hope. Three vivid metaphors, gradually paralleling each other, gaining momentum one after another, summarizing the whole text suddenly and powerfully.
Extended information:
1. Original text of "Spring":
Looking forward, looking forward, the east wind is coming, and the footsteps of spring are approaching.
Everything looked like he had just woken up, and he opened his eyes happily. The mountains are moist, the water is rising, and the sun is blushing.
The grass secretly emerged from the soil, tender and green.
In the garden and in the fields, you can see that there are large areas full of them. Sit down, lie down, roll a few times, kick a few balls, race a few times, play hide-and-seek a few times. The wind is gentle and the grass is soft.
Peach trees, apricot trees, and pear trees, if you don’t let me, I won’t let you, they are all full of flowers. The red ones are like fire, the pink ones are like clouds, and the white ones are like snow. There is sweetness in the flowers; when you close your eyes, the trees seem to be full of peaches, apricots, and pears.
Thousands of bees were buzzing under the flowers, and butterflies of all sizes were flying around. Wild flowers are everywhere: various kinds, with names and without names, scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, and they are blinking.
"The willow wind does not blow cold on your face", not bad, like a mother's hand caressing you. The wind brings the smell of newly turned soil, mixed with the smell of green grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly moist air.
The birds settled their nests among the flowers and leaves, became happy, and showed off their clear throats to their friends, singing melodious songs that matched the gentle breeze and flowing water. The piccolo played by the shepherd boy on the cow's back was also ringing loudly all day long.
Rain is the most common, lasting for three or two days at a time. Don't be upset. Look, it looks like cow hair, like flower needles, like filaments, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke covering the roof of the house. The leaves are so green that it shines brightly, and the grass is so green that it irritates your eyes.
In the evening, the lights were turned on, and a little yellow light created a quiet and peaceful night. In the countryside, on small roads and beside stone bridges, there are people holding umbrellas and walking slowly, and there are farmers working in the fields, wearing raincaps and hats. Their houses were sparse and silent in the rain.
There are gradually more kites in the sky and more children on the ground. In the city and countryside, every household, old and young, came out one by one, as if they were rushing to go. Rejuvenate your muscles and bones, rouse your spirits, and each do his or her own thing. "The plan for a year lies in spring." At the beginning, there is plenty of time and plenty of hope.
Spring is like a baby that just landed, it is new from head to toe and it is growing.
Spring is like a little girl, full of flowers, smiling and walking.
Spring is like a strong young man with iron-like arms, waist and feet, leading us forward.
2. Appreciation of writing techniques:
Zhu Ziqing's prose "Spring" is full of endless poetry and endless painting. He blended the "emotion" of personality beauty with the "scenery" of natural beauty, creating an artistic realm where emotion, scenery and scenes blend together.
Zhu Baiqing is in this short prose of only 30 sentences. More than twenty rhetorical devices are used, and the frequency is astonishing. The work uses "spring" throughout, and is composed of three parts: looking forward to spring, painting spring, and praising spring, which are in-depth and interlocking layer by layer. The author uses rhetoric as the "paint" of "Spring" to vividly depict the colorful picture of early spring.
Reference materials:
Baidu Encyclopedia-Spring