Eighth order? bright red
Success is not only for great people, but also for us. A small success is also a success, and I have gained success from a small matter.
On that day, my mother decided to go to Torreya grandis Park to see the suspension bridge that has been on the circle of friends many times.
We were excited all the way, and my cousin fought all the way. I finally reached the foot of the mountain and looked up. Wow! I have to make people feel distressed. This bridge is too high! It is daunting.
But my cousin's interest is undiminished. Like a lively little leopard, he has been rushing to the front and left us dozens of meters away in the blink of an eye. We "crawled" panting, but he ran along the steep mountain road with a straight face.
How steep this mountain is! Close contact with the suspension bridge is a real test. Look up. Where is the bridge? It turned out that it was above our heads. Many people walk on it, and the bridge is rickety. Is it really safe? Looking at it again, there are actually several "Xiong Haizi" running on the bridge, which makes my heart calm a lot, even running is no problem, and it is safer to walk there!
Finally, I came to the front of the bridge. I don't know without looking. I was shocked at first sight! What a long bridge! Looking down, the car is only as big as a cicada. Walking on the bridge, it seems that there is a monster under your feet. I walked over gently and glanced at my cousin "Little Leopard"! He has lost his courage just now, leaving only timidity and cowardice. Even his cousin is not afraid, just holding his father's hand tightly and writing the word "fear" on his face. Playing a small drum in my heart, I am still worried about "will the bridge collapse?" Halfway through, the hanging heart was finally put down, and there was nothing! It's just a bridge. Just walk past. But my cousin is about to cry, and her head has been low, alas! This is not the more you look at it, the more you are afraid! We showed him a demonstration, and he finally burst into tears.
Fortunately, we have crossed the bridge, and he has regained his brave posture.
I crossed the suspension bridge suspended in the air, and I was silently proud of it. I have achieved a little success.
Instructor: Teacher Jiang.
Comments: The author explained the definition of "success". Tell readers through personal experience, challenge yourself and surpass yourself, which is success. The full text is just a small matter, but it has deep feelings. Great!
I got happiness.
Qiu Wen Yi
People say, "No pains, no gains". Last Sunday, I gained different happiness from others, which was the result of my own efforts, and also the most sincere simple happiness and full happiness. Ordering dinner in class really made me gain a lot.
On the way, the sky is like a veiled girl, lifting the looming thin veil on her face, smiling shyly at you, and the fiery and enthusiastic sunshine beam turns into a pink "blush"; The sky at this time is such a beautiful girl, just like reflecting my good mood. After driving in the car for a long time, I arrived at the desk. There are rice fields on both sides, showing a kind of farm life. As soon as we got there, we started a barbecue trip. But it doesn't seem to go well ... it seems that someone is going to give me a fright. I was hit by the "rolling poison gas" coming out of the barbecue, which really surprised me; I didn't prepare the "S of gas mask" in time, and suddenly I was out of breath. I had a brainwave and remembered a lyric: "I didn't take any precautions …", which undoubtedly gave me a heavy blow. However, I immediately picked myself up and started a "barbecue career" ... All kinds of ingredients rolled on tin foil, eager to try; I am very excited at the thought of golden crispy chicken chops, soft and chewy sausages, delicious shrimps and delicious squid. This is my spiritual pillar! I started to roast the shrimp first, but it seems to be alive and jumping ... The shrimp is placed on it, showing a curvy figure, which is not good! Shrimp only cares about beauty contests, so the spoon baking field has not made any progress; I can't help worrying. Seeing other people's ingredients sizzling on it, my heart is getting worse and worse, just like a cup of bitter coffee pouring on my heartstrings. "No, I can't give up!" However, the dream is beautiful, and the reality is cruel, as if God had a heart. I really failed, but failure is the mother of success, and I can't give up so easily.
Gradually, my barbecue became better and better. Eating your own baked food, I have a solid sense of happiness in my heart.
Instructor: Teacher Jiang.
Comments: The little author's articles are close to the reality of life, and the language is lively. The use of some subtle words virtually adds a lot of interest to the article.
I gained persistence.
Yang
What is persistence? Where does persistence come from?
Why insist? What's the use of persistence?
Few people will persist, but those who persist may not succeed. Although the probability of success is very small, so what! As long as you persist, you will do one thing for yourself, so don't give up anything.
Persistence, although not many people do it, is worth everyone. Of course, I am no exception. I am also a persistent person, but every persistence is that time-crawling.
It was Sunday, and Xiao Orange Deng decided to order some soup and rice for a barbecue. The whole class jumped three feet high and was very happy, including me-everyone arrived at the destination with a smile.
Upon arrival, the teacher announced five activities: barbecue, digging sweet potatoes, walking the suspension bridge, climbing dragons and playing some other projects. When some students heard that they were going to climb the "dragon" by the suspension bridge, they suddenly turned yellow and said hesitantly, "I ... I don't ... I don't want to climb the" dragon "and I don't want to walk any suspension bridge!" After that, I immediately hid behind a few bold classmates. Hearing this, I began to feel proud: gee, what's there to be afraid of? Take the suspension bridge and climb the dragon. Why are you so timid?
At present, after the completion of three projects, I want to climb the legendary "dragon". I am proud, because I am sure to climb up. When I saw the dragon, I almost fainted-it took a long time to cross three peaks! Seeing this, I began to look pale, with goose bumps and trembling all over. Needless to say, I climbed and didn't want to see it. By the time I came to my senses, some students had started to climb, so I had no choice but to bite the bullet and climb.
I started climbing. I grabbed the net with one hand and took a step up with my left foot. Then I grabbed the net with my other hand and took a step up with my right foot. "In fact, it is not difficult!" But just to the top, it is difficult to climb to the top again. I will fall down if I am not careful, but I can't embarrass that boy. I have to climb up! I first put my left foot behind the peak, then crossed my right foot and climbed down step by step. ...
At this moment, I heard some voices: "you idiot!" " "You have disgraced our children!" "You are a coward!" What, I'm the only one still online! All the other students have finished climbing, but I'm still surfing the internet, and I haven't finished climbing. My classmates told me to climb faster, and my teacher told me to relax, but I'm afraid of heights! I am slower than before. Some students got impatient and started to climb up to help me, but I ignored them. Suddenly a force pushed me forward, and I got up at once, very fast. I climbed the whole distance in less than five minutes.
Looking back now, I am very happy, which makes me understand a truth: stick to the moment you choose, you can't be disillusioned like a dream, let alone ruin it!
Instructor: Teacher Jiang.
Comments: The article comes from life, the language is easy to understand, the narrative is natural and vivid, and the structure is compact. Understanding the truth of life through life examples is thought-provoking.
I smiled.
Chen jinhang
At that moment, I smiled, especially when I ordered dinner. That day, it was a sunny day, and the sky smiled brightly, so that those gloomy dark clouds were completely dispersed. At that moment, just after I climbed over the net. ...
There is a net in the pond called "Dragon". This net is steep and wide, just like a soaring dragon, so it is called "dragon". That day, I was in front of the dragon, ready to climb the mountain.
At that time, I was full of confidence, just like climbing an ordinary dune boat, and I could cross it with my feet up. But as soon as I climbed up, my face became dark as night. "Dragon" is not as simple as I thought, and I regretted climbing it at that time. Suddenly, a hand stretched out "hurry up! Others have climbed to the top. " At that moment, I smiled ...
With the help of my friends, I finally reached the first peak of my life. Looking at the way down, although I am a little scared, I have no previous fear. I climbed down with little confidence. However, an unexpected thing happened to me.
At that time, I fell into another kind of fear, even more than before, because-my shoes! I was in a panic, but there was always a rainbow after the storm. A little hero sent my shoes up. At that moment, I smiled again. ...
After climbing for a while, I climbed into the middle of the net. There are many companions waiting for me there. As soon as I saw them, my eyes couldn't help getting wet. The teacher is taking a group photo here, and they are all waiting for me! I smiled at the teacher's cell phone again.
After many hardships, I finally climbed the "dragon". After touching the ground, I cried immediately, no! I smiled ...
Instructor: Teacher Jiang.
Comments: The article describes life cases with full passion. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure and prominent center.
I succeeded.
Eight steps down? Huang shenghan
After the sugar rice incident, some people gained confidence, some people gained courage, some people gained the power of unity, and I gained success.
In the afternoon, I went to some soup rice with little Jayden. This is a beautiful tourist attraction and a good place for barbecue. We hurried to the barbecue site, and the teacher wanted to find us a cooler seat, but there were only two tables, one for boys and one for girls. This place is covered with yellow sand and looks a little golden in the hot sun. There is a stream next to a few bare trees, which is covered with aquatic plants and looks very green. There is also a bridge made of several chains, which is crumbling. There is a lake next to our seats, and we can often see uncle farmers who catch fish driving a boat to meet us from the lake.
We just looked at the shelves, spices and oil that the teacher brought. I don't know how to start. I picked up a string of sausages, put them on the hob and put some oil on them. Oil meets coal, and a puff of white smoke makes me sneeze. Later, when I put food on it, I couldn't put it down. I spilled oil on it and began to smoke. This smoke is very quiet. The food is almost cooked, but some people don't grasp the time and let their hard work go up in flames. Some people make their food fall off the stick and into the coal during the turning, and become victims ... This happened to me when I first arrived here. Until later, I learned to control time, ate the first successful barbecue food, got encouragement from this success, and succeeded several times. I am very sweet in my heart and proud of myself.
We went to dig sweet potatoes again. I found a pile of leaves and thought: Where there are leaves, there are sweet potatoes. A hoe went over and dug wildly. I dug and dug, and I dug deep and deep, and even my hands dug out bubbles. I persisted. I dug up something hard and a little white. I got excited and dug the soil next to me with my hands. The process is very light, for fear of damaging sweet potatoes. Most of the exposure, I pulled it out, the result is a series.
After this incident, my greatest achievement is success.
Instructor: Teacher Jiang.
Comments: "Success" is not easy. The author described the tortuous barbecue experience, which was the most successful. The young author's literary talent is worthy of recognition, showing a beautiful landscape.