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When I looked at the loneliness of the sky, the meteor that crossed the sky surprised me, and the night was torn by it.
When I stood in the clouds and re-examined my past and future, I felt humiliated for the rest of my life, which made me show myself to future generations in the ridicule and ridicule of people at that time.
In retrospect, I just feel that inheriting my father's official position is my life track. But fate seems to be playing a trick on me, and it seems to be helping me, making me do something unexpected for myself and myself.
In the face of the rumor that Li Ling betrayed the imperial court, Manchu civil servants dared not defend him. At that time, the waves in my heart rolled for a long time What the hell is going on here? Why didn't anyone plead in front of the facts? Are they really ignorant, or are they afraid to see the gloomy face of the emperor? I couldn't sleep that night, and my heart just couldn't calm down for a long time, so I made an amazing move: I saw the emperor and defended Li Ling! I don't know what I will face, but I think it's my duty as a historian.
The consequences of this amazing move surprised and laughed at the Chinese people, which made me feel incredible. Many officials always talk and laugh about my "epic" behavior in their eyes. I don't regret what I did, because the responsibility in my heart gave me the courage to face suffering.
Faced with a fait accompli, the road ahead of me seems tortuous. I think of death, but when I face the dead tree and just spit out new buds, I feel a strange agitation in my heart. Walking by the river and watching the surging waves, I feel that life itself should be constantly bumping into setbacks in order to arouse the brilliance of life.
Thinking of my father's last exhortation, I made another amazing thing: don't die, live in the world! Sometimes people will scold me, laugh at me and don't understand my behavior, but I know that history is fair and it will give me the most just position. I saw Qu Yuan fluttering in white, which made the world wonder why he was so obsessed with Chu, but I knew that it was his unswerving belief and pursuit. I saw the Spring and Autumn Annals, which Zhong Ni worked hard to achieve when he was in prison, and the Art of War, which was stubbornly revised by Sun Tzu.
Everything seems to be over. Not to pursue immortality, nor to self-promote. When I stand in the clouds and look back on my life, I have no complaints or regrets. Unexpectedly, I lost my happiness in the second half of my life. Unexpectedly, I made great achievements in history. But all these surprises seem to be predestined, because my heart is full of blood and there is an indomitable spring flowing in my long life.
Comments:
This is an examination composition full of images, reasonable imagination, love and literature. In the way of first-person narration, this paper boldly imagines Sima Qian's turbulent mental journey before and after the Liling Incident, and expounds his own views on the topic of "unexpected, reasonable"
This paper consists of four parts with appropriate details. The first clip is about Sima Qian's life before Liling Incident. The second clip is a detailed description of Sima Qian's performance in the Liling incident, because this is a turning point in Sima Qian's life. The third fragment describes Sima Qian's fierce inner struggle after he was sentenced to imprisonment, which is the most detailed and can better show Sima Qian's unyielding character. The fourth clip is about Sima Qian's ultimate success and the true meaning of success, because the front has been paved, and it is logical here to make the topic clear and concise.
The events, characters' fates and experiences in this historical article are all proved by history, and there is no fiction at all. The image, thoughts, feelings and psychological changes of the characters in the article can give full play to their imagination, and the writing is delicate, full and reasonable. Between historical statement and artistic creation, the author found an appropriate scale, and successfully created a glorious artistic image with meticulous psychological description. This image focused on righteousness, overcame pain and shame, and finally went down in history. This image is full and moving, shocking and admirable. In addition, the language image of this article is meaningful and profound, which fully shows the author's profound literary foundation.
Interviewee: HTT 19 19- Assistant Level 211-16: 25.
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