Love to discuss how to write a composition.

1. How to write a non-negotiable composition?

The night is quiet, probably because of the air conditioning, slightly cold. From the ward at the end of the fifth floor came the groan of the old woman.

My mother was hospitalized with keratitis the other day. She is a very busy person and only agreed to be hospitalized at the doctor's strong request. During the senior high school entrance examination, our school was used as a test center, so we had a few days off. The campus is full of people dragging their luggage. I made a phone call, and my mother's voice came from the other end of the phone and I learned that she was in the hospital. Changed direction and went straight to the hospital, and soon came to her bed. I don't know what I was thinking, but I just sat quietly beside her.

There is no sadness and pallor in the ward as I imagined, but it is relaxed and full of laughter. There are three patients in that ward, one is a woman about her mother's age, and the other is an elderly woman. The room was full of excitement all day, and visitors kept coming. The most interesting thing is the old woman. Because of my old age, I gradually became deaf, my eyes were not working well, and I got cataracts. Thanks to the filial piety of the child, the family sent her to the operating table, which was very successful. Three families were destined to get together in one room, and the day passed quickly.

That day, my mother and I squeezed into a small bed and fell asleep very late. Just talking to Duke Zhou, I was awakened by a roar. "You are a devil, you coward. . Give me my eyes back. . "It was the old lady next door who had nightmares, and everyone in the room was awakened. I leaned out to see the scene clearly by moonlight: a slightly fat figure looked up from the old woman's bed: "Mom, what's the matter?" Is it a nightmare? " The old woman stretched out her hands with difficulty, like a drowning man trying to grasp at straws. The daughter grabbed her hand like an old bark, and at that moment, she profoundly explained the relationship between mother and child. Excuse me, is there a better lifeline than family? After a few words of comfort, the old woman quieted down. It's really hard to imagine that memory has been engraved in the old man's heart. What's the story of a time far away from us?

She groaned again, and I haven't slept for a long time. In addition to guessing her story in the dark, I have been staring at the person who gave her strength by the bed. It's her little daughter, slightly fat, over 500 years old. She stayed up all night. I have been sitting in the chair by the bed. After all, I am exhausted. I take a nap from time to time, but I try not to fall asleep. When the old lady turns over a little, she will tremble and get up to shake hands. Inexplicably moved, I looked at my mother and covered her with a blanket.

It's dawn It was a long night. The old woman shouted "You didn't sleep all night" and "I slept". . They talked without a word, and my mother and I smiled at each other.

2. Love you without discussion, 600-word composition

Breakfast, love you is not negotiable.

Today, my family had a special breakfast. We had "Korean ginseng" breakfast!

In the morning, the air is fresh and a cool autumn wind blows. Grandpa asked me to go to the kitchen. Grandpa smiled and opened the lid and said, "Jun Hua, you had a good time this morning. Because today's breakfast is to eat' Korean ginseng'. "

Korean ginseng? No, my family is too poor. My father has been working for people, and there is always not enough money. My mother hasn't been to work for a long time. How to buy ginseng today? I put a big question mark in my heart.

But when I saw it, it turned out to be a sweet potato. I understood, smiled and said, "Eat Korean ginseng!" " "

After brushing my teeth, I immediately picked up the hot "Korean ginseng" and peeled it slowly. Bite it down one by one. How sweet!

"Mom, come and eat ginseng. It is delicious. Grandpa cooked it. " I ate "Korean ginseng" and shouted.

Mother was drinking water, and when she heard it, she spat it out with a smile.

"Are you? Then I'll have' Korean ginseng' for breakfast. Let me taste the taste of' Korean ginseng' first. "

3. Your family loves you. No discussion. Composition 200

In Grade Five, we have a new math teacher-Miss Zhang Yuqing. Her face is very strict, and all her classmates are afraid of her, but we know that she loves us and we love her very much. So there is a kind of silent cooperation between students and teacher Zhang. Love you is not negotiable!

"Love you is non-negotiable" is the most common mantra of Teacher Zhang. This kind of love sometimes praises your high spirits and sometimes makes you cry. Once in a math class, many students in our class didn't bring their homework, and some of them did badly. Teacher Zhang was very angry and flew into a rage. The students were terrified out of their wits, fearing that their "mistakes" would trigger a fuse and annoy Teacher Zhang again. They all sat like clocks, afraid to move. At this time, xxx, a classmate who usually likes Mr. Zhang, slowly walked up to the teacher, rubbed his left hand with his right hand, casually looked at the podium table and said intermittently, "Zhang. Teacher Zhang, I ... I didn't bring yesterday's newspaper. " Just after that, I heard teacher Zhang's seemingly unbreakable voice, which sounded deafening again: "What did you say? Alas, you, a famous' good student', still forgot to bring your homework! " Say, take out a mobile phone from the bag and throw it at xxx. "Call your parents and ask them to send it right away!" "Xxx's eyes suddenly turned red, and she went out silently. In fact, Teacher Zhang loves us. She wanted to warn her classmates in this way, "whoever doesn't bring homework again will end up like him!" "After a while, sure enough, under the well-trained guidance of Teacher Zhang, the number of people who forgot to bring their homework in our class gradually decreased.

Teacher Zhang is sometimes humorous. In order to arouse the enthusiasm of students in class, he compared the topic to "bugs" and asked us "young eagles" to destroy the huge bug family, not to see who ate more bugs. The students were amused by teacher Zhang's wit, and they all scrambled to raise their hands to speak. Everyone was very happy in that class. Another time, when Mr. Zhang was doing his exercise book, he saw a student pretending to know that he couldn't do it, so he used a two-part allegorical saying to encourage him to "hit his face-make up for the fat man." This classmate blushed instantly after listening to teacher Zhang's insinuation (hehe, never mind, it's a bit exaggerated). "If you have questions you don't understand, ask your deskmate and ask the teacher." Do you think Teacher Zhang is funny again?

Teacher Zhang is very strict with us, but there is no lack of humor beyond strictness. She often gives us lessons in spite of illness, and always wants to teach us everything she knows, so that each of us can get better and better under her inspiration. Such a teacher, can you say that she does not love us?

4. Ask for the composition "China people, love you is not negotiable."

China people, love you is not negotiable.

To love Chinese, we must first love our Chinese, because Chinese is the most elegant language in the world. A vulgar heart is not worthy of elegant Chinese, but elegant Chinese can save those increasingly vulgar hearts. An excellent Chinese teacher must be a good friend of elegant Chinese.

I have a more and more real feeling-I have fallen in love with Chinese deeply, just like falling in love with a person, even his footsteps are like music, I have fallen in love with Chinese. No matter how tired and depressed I am, as soon as I enter the classroom, I will devote myself wholeheartedly; As long as I open the Chinese textbook, I want to find a pair of eyes that can meet me in the text, hoping to find the "light" that can best let students follow me and enjoy the beauty of the text at the moment when they meet each other.

Really, I think about the class almost all the time, always thinking and pondering, always hoping to turn the idea of a class into reality, regardless of success or failure, and I don't care what others say.

Is "love" really amazing? If you love someone, you must be prepared to travel around the world for him; So, what if you love something?

It is not negotiable that China people love you.

Do you like Chinese? Chinese, so lively and interesting, can help us improve our reading ability and writing level; Chinese, a guiding light, can teach us the truth of being a man, that is, not to go astray; Chinese, a treasure house of knowledge, has taught us a lot of knowledge. Chinese, an excellent tour guide, can let us appreciate the magnificent mountains and rivers of the motherland and the mysterious beauty of foreign countries. China people, love you is not negotiable!

In Chinese class, we can also learn texts about places of interest. In the mountains and rivers of Guilin, those sentences with great literary talent really fascinate us. It seems that we really followed it to Guilin, plunged into the embrace of nature and had a good time there. Walking into the cloud of Alishan, we are once again fascinated by Alishan and infected by its ever-changing nature. China people, love you is not negotiable! You are so beautiful, your beautiful sentences, your touching words, your infectious paragraphs reveal your charm between the lines. You told us a legendary story, which was thrilling again and again and exciting for a moment. You have recorded the long history of the motherland, the long journey of the Olympic Games and the dribs and drabs of great men. China people, love you is not negotiable! China people, your charm is infinite. We all like your Chinese, and you are our favorite.

China people, love you is not negotiable!

It's not very well written

6.600 words of love for you, not negotiable.

Composition, love you is not negotiable.

-some experiences in composition teaching

"Make life poetic and sacred" has always been my life pursuit. I like reading articles, and I prefer writing articles. When my pen dances on white paper, my heart seems to fly in the bright sunshine. Therefore, I can't wait for my classmates to cry for Wen, laugh for Wen, be smart for Wen and be crazy for Wen. Fortunately, I used to be a special writing teacher. It is really a happy thing to recall the experience of studying and teaching composition in the past year. The following is my experience in the teaching process:

First, novel and rich class types and classroom content design

Any teaching behavior should be targeted, and composition teaching is no exception. According to the "student-oriented" teaching philosophy, through the analysis and grasp of the learning situation, the specific teaching content is determined in a planned way, and then effective teaching strategies are formulated. For example, most junior one students have just entered middle school, so it is inconvenient to communicate with each other. Students are often lonely and especially miss the happy time they spent with their friends in primary school. After mastering this learning situation, I complied with the students' strong desire for friendship, and asked them to write down their feelings in writing, and get it off their chest quickly. The class type is defined as: listening to songs to express friendship. Then carefully design the teaching plan of this composition class: impress people with wonderful sentences and cause students to sing. They will play Friends by Emil Wakin Chau with classmates and friends who reminisce about the past. When students are filled with emotion, take the opportunity to guide and talk about their unique experiences. Play Liang Guang's "I've been looking for you for a long time" again to understand what a true friend is. Through autonomy, cooperation and exploration. Let students master rich sentimental poems, famous sayings and epigrams, Chinese and foreign stories and some wonderful remarks. Finally, play Mao Amin's Forever Friends to further extend your experience that you will meet new friends in your new life and your life will be happier. At this time, students have a strong desire to express their feelings. Simply remind students to use different genres to innovate their ideas. The results show that the students' compositions are of high quality: sincere feelings, novel and diverse forms, profound thoughts and prominent themes. Here I only give a simple example from the design of classroom content. For example, in terms of class types alone, I also designed (1) activity classes: such as "Honesty" press conference, "Touching" Grand View Garden, pen sales meeting (description training), and helping Xiaoming tell stories (associative thinking training); And (2) practical classes: such as taking dragons (five people work together to complete an article). The different forms of each class will bring some suspense, some new ideas and some surprises to students. Let the students look forward to the next writing class.

Second, clever and wonderful teaching forms and teachers' language.

"A single flower is not spring, and a hundred flowers bloom in spring." Chinese characters have a history of more than 2,000 years and are rich in cultural heritage. It is a beautiful and proud thing to be able to express your feelings with them. I realize that it is the most basic responsibility of a writing teacher to make students feel the charm of words. It is my goal to experience the truth, goodness and beauty by feeling words, to experience life and the value of life, and to combine life with composition. For example, in the writing class of "Teachers and students write as one", in order to let students learn to care about others, a series of activities were carried out centering on "Teacher's Day".

In the teaching process, 1) ignites students with enthusiasm and passion. For example, I wrote a proposal in the form of a poster: "Dear students, when you marvel at the beauty of nature; When you feel the ups and downs in your life ... "Then please ask the students who are interested in writing wonderful articles to solemnly sign in the signature area of the poster. My students and I have set a slogan for the writing class: "The composition lasts forever, and the article lasts forever!" 2) Infect students with poetry and true feelings. Every writing class, I design a refreshing topic according to the teaching content. Such as: flying songs in my heart (trying to write poems), dressing up language, making articles charming (literary talent training), lighting the lamp of language innovation, I have an appointment with spring (taking spring as the topic), language beauty room and so on. And in my spare time, I will talk to them about my childhood dreams, about an equal life, about loving life, how to understand nature … respect their ideas and help them keep secrets. All these have made me know them better and brought us closer. My love for literature also inadvertently germinated in their hearts. 3) Conquer students with literary talent and knowledge. I remember that in the first writing class, I introduced myself with a Tibetan doggerel: "Gu Yue is in the pines, and it is quiet. Laugh at my disciple and the article will become famous. " There is my preface in the poem: the word "Hu's name", and I express my hope that my classmates will write good articles. Next, I told interesting poems of ancient China to arouse students' interest. The students wrote in their diaries: "This more literary prologue left a deep impression on them. I often write some hydrology according to my own topics. Occasionally, I will do something I am proud of, and I will read it and share it with my classmates. It's interesting to talk about my experience. Students will also come up with some couplets or topics to discuss with me In this way, students' interest in literature will naturally increase.

Some people say: "Education is the process in which an imperfect person leads another group of imperfect people to pursue perfection." In the process of teaching, my students and I happily walk on the sunny and happy composition road, learning from each other and making progress together. May all teachers realize the same wish: let students write articles with talent, wisdom and individuality!

7. My brother loves you. I didn't discuss the 500-word composition.

Today, my mother and I went to the paradise in Shanghai to play. Because the bus hasn't come yet, but I'm tired of waiting. So I played games on my mother's mobile phone. It didn't take long for the car to come. I saw a scene in the car. Let me understand a truth:

My mother and I were sitting in the car. Behind us is a young boy. We will arrive in half an hour. There was still a long way to go from Shanghai, and something happened: an old woman came over, and I didn't even want to give her my seat. But a boy behind us offered his seat to grandma, and I said, "Hum. Isn't it just giving up your seat? If not, grandma won't get sick! I don't understand! Standing can also exercise! There will be seats in a few stops. " The boy sat beside him, and a few minutes later an old woman came over. This time, I think that boy will never leave me alone! To my surprise, he gave in again. At this time, I suddenly realized a truth that Russell said: As a person, we should respect our parents, be kind to our children, be generous to our poor relatives, and be polite to everyone. Although the elder brother doesn't know these two grandmothers, he is still helping them like taking care of them.

Refer to it and adopt it.

8. Dad loves you.

Speaking of the most familiar people around me, my "lovely", amiable and respectable father immediately came to mind.

Dad has a pair of intense eyes under his thick eyebrows, and a pair of black-rimmed myopia glasses on his high nose. Dad's handsome goose egg always has a sweet smile like eating honey.

To say that dad is "cute", we should start with his learning to skate last year. My father envied me for playing skateboard, so I washed the dishes for my mother for three days before I got my beloved skateboard. Although I fell into a splash for the first time, my father smiled and said, "Never mind,' failure is the mother of success'!" So in order to please me, he bought me ice cream and "worshipped me as a teacher", and soon found the trick. There was a childlike smile on his face as he limped along.

Dad loves me very much and often watches wonderful cartoons with me, which is my happiest moment; Whenever I encounter obstacles in math problems, my father who killed tigers will immediately appear at my side and teach me how to overcome them. Dad and I are really like a pair of bosom friends!

Dad is a bookworm. He not only loves reading his own books, but also borrows fairy tales from me with his library card! Whenever I have time, my father will tell me interesting historical stories: Romance of the Three Kingdoms and Yang Jiajiang ... Under the influence of my father, I prefer reading.

I love my "lovely", amiable and respectable father. He will always be the best father in the world!

9.600 words of love for you, not negotiable.

Writing, love you is not negotiable —— A little experience in writing teaching "Let life be as sacred as poetry" has always been my life pursuit.

I like reading articles, and I prefer writing articles. When my pen dances on white paper, my heart seems to fly in the bright sunshine.

Therefore, I can't wait for my classmates to cry for Wen, laugh for Wen, be smart for Wen and be crazy for Wen. Fortunately, I used to be a special writing teacher.

It is really a happy thing to recall the experience of studying and teaching composition in the past year. The following is my experience in the teaching process: 1. Novel and rich class types and classroom content design. Any teaching behavior should be targeted, and composition teaching is no exception.

According to the "student-oriented" teaching philosophy, through the analysis and grasp of the learning situation, the specific teaching content is determined in a planned way, and then effective teaching strategies are formulated. For example, most junior one students have just entered middle school, so it is inconvenient to communicate with each other. Students are often lonely and especially miss the happy time they spent with their friends in primary school.

After mastering this learning situation, I complied with the students' strong desire for friendship, and asked them to write down their feelings in writing, and get it off their chest quickly. The class type is defined as: listening to songs to express friendship.

Then carefully design the teaching plan of this composition class: impress people with wonderful sentences and cause students to sing. They will play Friends by Emil Wakin Chau with classmates and friends who reminisce about the past.

When students are filled with emotion, take the opportunity to guide and talk about their unique experiences. Play Liang Guang's "I've been looking for you for a long time" again to understand what a true friend is.

Through autonomy, cooperation and exploration. Let students master rich sentimental poems, famous sayings and epigrams, Chinese and foreign stories and some wonderful remarks.

Finally, play Mao Amin's Forever Friends to further extend your experience that you will meet new friends in your new life and your life will be happier. At this time, students have a strong desire to express their feelings.

Simply remind students to use different genres to innovate their ideas. The results show that the students' compositions are of high quality: sincere feelings, novel and diverse forms, profound thoughts and prominent themes.

Here I only give a simple example from the design of classroom content. For example, in terms of class types alone, I also designed (1) activity classes: such as "Honesty" press conference, "Touching" Grand View Garden, pen sales meeting (description training), and helping Xiaoming tell stories (associative thinking training); And (2) practical classes: such as taking dragons (five people work together to complete an article).

The different forms of each class will bring some suspense, some new ideas and some surprises to students. Let the students look forward to the next writing class.

Second, clever and wonderful teaching forms and teachers' language "One flower alone is not spring, and a hundred flowers bloom in the garden in spring". Chinese characters have a history of more than 2,000 years, with rich cultural background. It is a beautiful and proud thing to be able to express your feelings with them. I realize that it is the most basic responsibility of a writing teacher to make students feel the charm of words.

It is my goal to experience the truth, goodness and beauty by feeling words, to experience life and the value of life, and to combine life with composition. For example, in the writing class of "Teachers and students write as one", in order to let students learn to care about others, a series of activities were carried out centering on "Teacher's Day".

In the teaching process, 1) ignites students with enthusiasm and passion. For example, I wrote a proposal in the form of a poster: "Dear students, when you marvel at the beauty of nature; When you feel the ups and downs in your life ... "Then please ask the students who are interested in writing wonderful articles to solemnly sign in the signature area of the poster.

My students and I have set a slogan for the writing class: "The composition lasts forever, and the article lasts forever!" 2) Infect students with poetry and true feelings. Every writing class, I design a refreshing topic according to the teaching content.

Such as: flying songs in my heart (trying to write poems), dressing up language, making articles charming (literary talent training), lighting the lamp of language innovation, I have an appointment with spring (taking spring as the topic), language beauty room and so on. And in my spare time, I will talk to them about my childhood dreams, about an equal life, about loving life, how to understand nature … respect their ideas and help them keep secrets.

All these have made me know them better and brought us closer. My love for literature also inadvertently germinated in their hearts.

3) Conquer students with literary talent and knowledge. I remember that in the first writing class, I introduced myself with a Tibetan doggerel: "Gu Yue is in the pines, and it is quiet.

Laugh at my disciple, the article has a good reputation. There is my preface in the poem: the name "Hu", and I express my hope that my classmates will write good articles.

Next, I told interesting poems of ancient China to arouse students' interest. The students wrote in their diaries: "This more literary prologue left a deep impression on them.

I often write some hydrology according to my own topics. Occasionally, I will do something I am proud of, and I will read it and share it with my classmates. It's interesting to talk about my experience. Students will also come up with some couplets or topics to discuss with me

In this way, students' interest in literature will naturally increase. Some people say: "Education is the process in which an imperfect person leads another group of imperfect people to pursue perfection."

In the process of teaching, my students and I happily walk on the sunny and happy composition road, learning from each other and making progress together. May all teachers realize the same wish: let students write articles with talent, wisdom and individuality.

10. Puppy, love your non-negotiable composition.

I have a little dog named Xiao Huang.

It has a pair of watery eyes, drooping ears, a small black nose, extremely sharp teeth and a very beautiful cry. When it is happy, it will jump around and then run around me. Recently, many dogs got rabies and killed some people. Therefore, people all over the country beat dogs with sticks.

I am afraid that Xiao Huang will suffer, so I get up early every day, watch Xiao Huang, gently touch his head, and then go to school with my schoolbag on my back. After school in the afternoon, I am always the first to rush out of the school gate and get home early.

Looking at Xiao Huang waiting for me, I always smile brightly. I greeted him and Xiao Huang ran around me. I happily picked him up and walked around the circle into the house ... One weekend morning, I got up early and looked at the sky outside. Dark clouds are gathering, and it seems that it will rain soon.

The wind hits the tree, the tree wobbles, the flowers are dejected, the leaves are floating on the ground, floating ... I think of Xiao Huang, that is, at this moment, I heard something outside in a trance, and then there was a sad dog barking. That's Xiao Huang's voice! My eyes must have understood something. In an instant, my tears blurred my eyes, and I quickly ran outside ... However, just as I was about to go out, my mother stopped me, and I jumped up hurriedly and walked straight outside, regardless of my mother's stop. But my mother quickly pulled me into the house.

I sat at the table helplessly, and my tears fell on the table like beads with a broken net ... The sad cries outside the house kept coming and became more and more dense. That voice, is Xiao Huang calling me? Is Xiao Huang asking me for help? In tears, I seem to see Xiao Huang being chased by several people with sticks, and Xiao Huang also crying. Too lonely ... Life in Xiao Huang is too bitter! He was separated from his mother when he was very young and has been wandering in the street. It eats stinking leftovers that people throw away, and even such food is not enough! Xiao Huang was often bullied in the street.

It wandered like this ... until one day, it met me and I adopted it. But later, he was often bitten black and blue by some big dogs ... I looked out of the window, and the tree was covered with dust and bowed its head, as if praying for Xiao Huang, and the sky was even more gloomy.

I cried on my desk! Xiao Huang's bleak cry came again, and it was raining in Mao Mao. I finally couldn't help it. I stood up crying, rushed out of the house and rushed into the rainy world ... the crying disappeared. I closed my eyes and looked up, letting the rain wash away and breaking my heart! Xiao Huang just left. He left this world forever. Although he left me happiness, his departure brought me more sadness! I like puppies and my little yellow.