In ancient times, there was a scholar who never got to the point when writing articles. Once, he went to ask the teacher for advice. The teacher took him to a small forest, pointed to a spider web and said, "Please worship it as a teacher!" " "The reader looked at it for a long time and suddenly understood the mystery. Since then, his article has made rapid progress. Someone asked him why, and he said, "There is no spider web without a center in the world. Spider webs are made of a center and then a circle. The same is true of writing articles! "
So how to write around the central meaning?
Write a paragraph around the central sentence.
The composition of the middle grade requires writing one thing around the central meaning. Students in this section can usually practice with fragments-write specific sentences around the central sentence.
What is the central sentence?
The central sentence is generally the first sentence of a paragraph, which summarizes the main content of this paragraph.
Exodus: The fog this morning is really heavy and beautiful! There was a vast expanse of whiteness between heaven and earth, as if there was an incomparably wide tulle garment floating. Mountains, houses, fields and trees in the distance are shrouded in milky fog, looming and beautiful. I walked on the way to school, as if I were in a misty fairyland, which was very interesting.
The first sentence in the example is the central sentence, and the last three sentences are all around "The fog this morning is really heavy and beautiful!" This sentence is described in detail: "white, milky white" first writes the color of fog, and "incomparably wide gauze clothing" is a metaphor for writing the beauty of fog and fog. Through my feelings and conversations with characters, the fog is very thick and heavy.
2. Writing a composition on the topic of concession, as a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation, seems to be increasingly questioned by people in the modern society where competition is everywhere. People who advocate modesty say, "Modesty and forbearance are not only self-cultivation, but also great wisdom." Those who oppose modesty say, "Modesty has long been out of date. The law of the jungle, competition should be. " However, it is undeniable that things like humility seem to be difficult to happen around you and me. Whether it is by bus, shopping, queuing, buying tickets, or cooperating with others, giving priority to personal interests is not only human nature, but also human survival instinct inspired by real life. Liang Shiqiu once wrote in an article: "When I was a child, I read the story of Kong Rong letting pears, and I felt really commendable and ashamed. Some people suspect that Kong Rong may have a bad stomach and was afraid of eating raw cold, so he was happy to humble himself. I dare not speculate. However, we have to admit that interests will make people get carried away, and humility is not an easy task. Kong Rong's "The Story of Pear" does have educational value, but unfortunately it has little practical effect: it is rare in Kong Rong today. " Is modesty really out of date? Of course not. Modesty is a kind of mind, a kind of virtue, a kind of grace, a kind of wisdom, and more importantly, a kind of cultivation. We need humility, and this era also calls for humility. Today, modesty is out of date.
In the Qing Dynasty, a big family wanted to build a courtyard wall to separate themselves from their neighbors. There was a serious conflict between the two houses on the position of the wall base. Although a large family has deep pockets, it has suffered immediate losses because it is not as rich as its neighbor's children. Deeply ashamed, he immediately wrote a letter to his son, who was a big official in Beijing, detailing the troubles at home, and asked his son to return to China quickly, trying to punish his neighbors and find face for his family. After reading the letter, the senior official in Beijing sent an urgent letter to his family, which earnestly explained the truth that a distant relative is not as good as a close neighbor, and wrote four sentences at the end of the letter: "A thousand miles to pick a book is just separated by a wall, why not let him be three feet?" The Great Wall of Wan Li is still there today, but I haven't seen Qin Shihuang. "Everyone read the letter and was deeply educated. They quickly repaired with their neighbors and decided not to build a wall between the two families and never separate! As the saying goes, "take a step back and broaden the horizon", modesty is not a loss, but a room for yourself.
There is a public service advertisement, except for people crowded in front of the bus, which has always been a voice-over. A man and a woman fought each other in order to get on the bus first. An old man calmly advised two young people to "relax and don't squeeze".
Both of these stories reflect the important role of humility in life. Discuss humility with an extremely optimistic and open-minded friend. She said that humility is actually a philosophy full of wisdom, because humility can sometimes not only resolve contradictions, but also reflect a kind of grace and self-restraint of human beings. "Don't dispute" is a state of mind. Modern society requires people to be proactive, and no one is willing to give their own interests to others. Modesty doesn't mean that you can't face the really cruel competition, which has nothing to do with personal ability, but because modesty seeks an inner peace, and inner peace will make you quiet, and peace will breed great wisdom. Aside from haggling over every ounce, humble cultivation and personal charm will increase your popularity and gain more trust and goodwill. Who says you don't leave yourself more room and opportunities for development?
Of course, modesty is also selective. Some things, even if we are humble, can't see the slightest self-cultivation, and after we are humble and polite, the collateral impact of the incident is incalculable, and the bad factors it produces will haunt us and linger. For example, love is completely selfish, and love may need genius and minutes to play. Lovers can be humble in getting along, but love itself can't be humble. Don't think your modesty is great. In fact, it not only hurts yourself, but also disrespects each other. Another example is a task at work, but you must show humility. I push you, you push me, but you know you have to step back from the background if you can do it well. It seems to have become a hypocritical attitude towards life, conniving at false deception. This is not self-deception. "supercilious, does not mean making trouble, or to outdo each other in the work that needs coordination, secretly making discovery ambushes. No humility, more spiritual self-confidence, I can do it, I can do it, not personality atrophy. The coordination and cooperation of work is the organic combination of countless people who are not humble, not the loose sand of humble people. " So, some things should be done.
Does this conflict with the humility we advocate? Actually, it is not. "Modest love may mislead others and yourself, and even make yourself regret for life. When an enterprise or a collective needs coordination and cooperation, its employees show strong behaviors of not giving in to each other everywhere, then any work of this enterprise or this collective will increase costs because of internal friction. " Modesty is not a trading principle, but always looks at personal interests from the perspective of overall interests. When there is a contradiction between the overall interests and personal interests, we should consciously sacrifice personal interests and safeguard the overall interests.
When educating children, my friend once said that as long as you like what you want, don't give it up easily and don't humble it to others. Yes, modern society requires us to learn to fight for ourselves. But in fact, humility is more about consciously obeying an order for modern people. And the observance of this order will bring convenience to people and themselves. Generally speaking, everything in the world is not enough to fight, but enough to let go. Do you think modesty is out of date?
3. Write a 600-word essay on the topic of "Rang".
Politeness is very important in life and society. In real life, many contradictions and disputes and impoliteness often lead to unnecessary troubles and even irreparable consequences. So I think everyone should learn to be polite now. As the saying goes, take a step back and broaden the horizon.
Let's look at the impoliteness in traffic. According to the survey, there are more than 1000 traffic accidents in China every day. Why are there so many traffic accidents? Although there are many reasons for this situation, one of the main reasons is that you are not polite. For example, overtaking by force is impolite. Can't we just wait to make way? Why make fun of your life? There is also traffic jam, which is also a special case of impoliteness. If everyone is polite and orderly, then traffic jams for many hours or even longer will not happen; There is also running a red light, which is also impolite. Why not let the green side pass smoothly? Why gamble your life because of greed? From the well-known traffic accidents, I believe everyone can appreciate the importance and necessity of comity.
Let's take a look at our students. Many primary and middle school students often quarrel over trifles, some even fight, and some even cause heavy casualties. Think about it, if both sides can be polite, then many things can be solved smoothly. Learn comity, big things can be reduced, small things can be reduced; If you don't learn to be polite, you may make a big fuss about small things and get out of control. I once learned this lesson: one day I accidentally stepped on a person's foot, and that person scolded me angrily. I thought to myself at that time, why are you so fierce? I am not easy to bully, so I scolded him, too. So the conflict intensified, and then there was a fight. I beat him black and blue, and he hit me against the wall. As a result, the two of us not only lost hundreds of dollars in medical expenses to each other, but also got criticized at the school meeting. Look, a little thing like accidentally stepping on each other's feet. Because it is impolite, this is the result. If only one party had been polite, there would have been no serious consequences afterwards.
I remember a saying like this: "endure a calm moment and take a step back." This sentence tells us to be patient, open-minded and not so petty. From now on, we should all learn to be polite to each other, which can not only avoid many things, but also increase many friendships. Finally, I want to say to people in the society: "Learn to endure one step and take a step back in everything. Don't haggle. "
Comments: This competition composition in the examination room can closely follow the central argument of "learning to be polite", and can be based on familiar traffic cases and personal experiences with sufficient reasons.
4. Write a composition around the central idea. Write a composition around the central idea
Scene description, so what is a scene? Scenes generally refer to scenes presented to people in group activities within a certain period of time. Just like a scene or scene we saw in a play.
What scenes have we participated in or seen in our life? Here are some examples for your reference.
The labor site. We often participate in school-run factories, farms or service labor at school. There are many people's enthusiasm and enthusiasm in labor, and there are good people and good deeds in labor. We also often visit factories, villages and shops and ask questions to see how uncles and aunts work. These are the scenes of childbirth.
Game scene. Students often play games together at home or on campus, and teachers also organize various activities during sports activities. These game scenes are often very lively and interesting, and students are familiar with them.
Entertainment circle In our colorful after-school life, entertainment is a very important content. There are many vivid scenes in literary performances, party activities, watching movies and TV plays that are worth remembering.
Ceremony site. At the beginning of each semester, we will hold the opening ceremony. Ceremonies are usually held in your city, village or town, and also when new buildings are completed. The scenes of these ceremonies are meaningful and instructive, and we should carefully observe and record this memorable moment.
Sports scenes. At the sports meeting, athletes chase after each other, struggle hard and strive to create excellent results; The audience applauded and cheered for the athletes. These exciting scenes are unforgettable.
Life scenes. There are many scenes in daily life that are also very distinctive. For example, buying goods, family reunion, traveling by car and boat, seeking medical treatment, building houses and repairing walls; , decorate the bedroom, etc. , have a strong flavor of life.
Meeting site. Class meeting, team meeting, school meeting; Meeting heroes and model figures and attending various celebrations and commemorative meetings often leave a deep impression on us.
In a word, practicing scene description can improve our observation cognitive ability and narrative description ability.
5. Writing skills with resignation as the topic
Nowadays, society is becoming more and more complicated. I always try to get rid of these complexities and seek peace, but I often can't get what I want.
However, the words of a boatman made me suddenly enlightened and learned the skills of concession.
That time, I was drifting in the Grand Canyon in western Zhejiang. Sitting on a long bamboo raft, looking at the beautiful scenery on both sides of the strait and facing the cool breeze blowing slowly, it is very comfortable. The beautiful natural scenery here has not been developed yet, maintaining its original style. Everything is so quiet, and occasionally a crisp bird song makes my heart tremble. We, a group of people, are silently observing everything around us, coming from the bustling city and stepping into a peaceful pure land.
The river is so clear that I can clearly see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river. I couldn't help putting my hand into the water, and the fish kissed my finger curiously. Suddenly, the water rushed up and there were more rocks protruding from the water. I quickly withdrew my hand, quite nervous. It can be seen that the boatman is still very relaxed, and the long pole is as smooth as walking on the flat ground in the fast-flowing water. Seeing me staring at him, he smiled innocently: "Be careful, the water is rushing, be careful not to fall into the water!" " "I smiled at him, but I knew there would be no danger in his boat. Every time I hit a stone, I was about to hit it, only to see him suddenly give way and avoid danger; Every time we encounter a whirlpool, when we are frightened, it is another way to pass by the whirlpool skillfully.
"Uncle, you are really good, you must know everything about every danger here! Otherwise, how can you avoid it so deftly? " I said admiringly to the relaxed boatman.
"I don't know. After supporting the raft for so many years, I only know where it is safe to let the raft pass smoothly. Why should we avoid danger? " The boatman is still so calm.
I was stunned. We were all wrong. We have all thought about how to get out of danger, but we have never thought about how to find safety. Perhaps, if the boatman only cares about avoiding rocks and eddies, how can many dangers be avoided? It is better to find a road without danger and walk steadily.
I suddenly understood the skill of letting go. The complexity of life has nothing to do with me. I don't have to think about letting them go all day. I might as well find peace in my heart, find a peaceful lifestyle and go on smoothly. To be a hermit of the soul, why must we let go of the complexity of the world?
6. Write a 500-word composition around the central meaning to help find it.
The night light is like water, and the bright moonlight shines on the sofa. I stood on the balance car and shuttled through the living room. Alas! The sky is gray and wild. Where can I find my English book?
English book, where are you? Without you, my mother would skin me! I fly in every corner of my home. I'm not in my schoolbag again, am I? I ran to my room, opened my schoolbag and rummaged through it one by one. I still can't find my English textbook. It's not in the closet. I opened the cupboard door and rummaged through my clothes, alas! How I wish I could read English books!
I jumped on the balance car and flew to the kitchen, opened the refrigerator, opened the cupboard and lifted the lid, huh? Where did the English book go? I sat on the sofa and thought it over. When I asked the teacher to dictate the words in the makeup class, the teacher put the book on another table. Then I finished my composition and left ... Well, so my English book is making up lessons! God, it's really dumb to eat coptis. I can't tell you how bitter it is!
At this time, the "Queen Mother" mother came. "Read English quickly, what are you doing here!" I don't move, "what's the matter? What can I do for you? " "I forgot my English book." "Where did you forget it?" "Makeup class." "Oh, then go and read, and look for it tomorrow!" I took a deep breath and "hoo-"finally escaped from the underworld. I went back to my room in frustration and read it with the biography of Hulan River.
The challenge of death is really terrible. Next time, I'd better check my schoolbag and stop being so careless.
7. There is such a fable in the composition about the topic of letting. It is said that there are two horses walking together. One bit the other's neck, but the bitten one comforted the horse who was ashamed of biting himself.
Although the story is small, it reveals the touching character between heaven and earth, that is, let. In fable, the concession of animals is good for evil, and in Buddhism, the concession of Maitreya is "the stomach can hold the world". How to understand concessions in our real life? In fact, concession is a realm.
Make it like water. The usual "concession" is to forgive others' temporary mistakes, not to haggle over every ounce, not to blame others, and to be a generous person in a friendly way.
When encountering contradictions, tenderness is often more effective than excessive revenge. It is like a clear spring, slowly erasing the temporary hostility of the other party, making people calm down, so as to see the original reason of the matter clearly.
At the same time, I also saw myself clearly. The bitten horse in the fable rationally chose to give in, and finally the two made up.
Imagine, if it is tit-for-tat, what can be brought about by fighting back at each other in the same way, in addition to both losses and cross the rubicon? Therefore, it can be said that the legendary national horse is actually very wise. Its wisdom lies in "returning evil with good".
Let it be like fire. Because giving in again means not only not caring about personal gains and losses, but also warming others' hearts with your own love and sincerity.
It is rare to be calm as water; Giving charcoal in the snow is more valuable and moving. From the fable, we can see that the horse that made the mistake has realized its absurdity and felt ashamed. At this time, the comfort of the bitten horse is like a flame, bright and warm.
Let, not only melt each other's freezing, but also radiate the heat of love to each other's hearts. In that era, which was criticized by some people as "materialism", what people with shrinking space from bottom to top lacked was not the concession between the two horses. When you choose to let, you also choose understanding and warmth, and you also choose the vastness of life.
Jane is a poem. Jane is a poem of life.
Surrender to the highest realm is not only manifested in the handling of an event in daily life, but sublimated into a kind of mind for the universe and poetic tolerance for life. The meaning of "letting" is not limited to the understanding and care between people, but the inner generosity and fraternity of all life between heaven and earth.
The legendary horse can't reach this realm, but this realm is so real and profound for human beings. Those who are worried about the dull and unfortunate life, please choose to put it down.
This does not harm your dignity at all, but helps people to cross mediocrity in the long river of life. With the ideological realm of concession, we can understand the true meaning of life, and concession is also an art of life.
Of course, it is not contradictory to yield to "being strict with yourself and being lenient with others". Forgiving yourself easily is not a concession, it is a coward.
"Treat people in an all-round way" depends first on the object. Let people who don't cherish promiscuity; Letting go of those who are not worth letting go is appeasement; It is indulgence to indulge unforgivable unscrupulous people.
Therefore, let yourself, is also a kind of life learning. On the road of our life, it is not as simple as two horses.
Life is often complicated and often boring. It is precisely because it is like water that it becomes pure after filtration; It is because of the fire that the dullness becomes more and more distinct through calcination; It is precisely because of this poetic concession that life is endowed with art and eternity.
1. Learning to let others is learning to be kind to yourself. Resentment can only keep our hearts in darkness forever; However, letting go can make our hearts free and liberated.
It was an ordinary autumn. I wore a pair of white sweatpants bought by my mother and went to school in high spirits. At school, many teachers and classmates praised me for my white pants. I'm very proud. I feel very chic today.
That day, there happened to be physical education class. I was so excited that I didn't even care that I was wearing white pants, so I started playing. I was playing basketball with some girls when suddenly a figure jumped out. I passed the ball without seeing it clearly.
Just at that moment, Qiu hit his clothes impartially. When I looked intently, the unfriendly classmate left a black mark on his light blue shirt. I quickly apologized, but he flew into a rage and kicked my leg. Look at my white trousers, and they have left two deep footprints.
In the past, I would pay him back, but this time I calmed down unexpectedly. I don't know what suppressed my anger, but I continued to play ball ... After school, my classmates went home one after another. This is when I found a classmate anxiously looking for something.
I walked over enthusiastically, and when I saw it, it was the classmate who kicked my pants. I turned to go, but I thought: Why? Just help him find it together and embarrass him. When I reached out to help enthusiastically, I was greeted by that classmate's grateful smile, and my heart was full of warmth and happiness.
I remember another time, just after class, two junior high school students who came to primary school bumped into me. I only heard them swearing: "You are looking for a fight!" When I heard this, my face turned red with anger: it's outrageous that you should be so righteous when you obviously hit me.
I was about to get angry, but I thought, forget it! Forget it. I smiled and said, "I'm sorry!" "You see that unreasonable middle school student, who is also ashamed at the moment, walked slowly.
I also do it one brace up, let a person sex should be changed! When one foot stepped on the petals of a violet, he left the fragrance on that foot. This is Jane. A mental patient broke into a doctor's house and shot his three daughters in the mood for love, but he still cured the mental patient.
This is also to make. If a person chooses to care, he will spend the rest of his life in darkness; And if a person chooses to give in, then he can shed sunshine on the earth.
There is an old saying: "If you know your mistake, you will change it. There is no benefit at all. " That being the case, why can't we make way for the mistakes that a person made unintentionally? When our hearts choose to give way to ourselves, we get the freedom we deserve, because we put down the burden and should give our friends and enemies a sweet smile.
If you can make friends, when you can make other people's mistakes with an open mind, you will naturally have more friends. Let's make more concessions and let life.
8. Modesty in Compromise-themed compositions
Modesty seems to slip away from us in today's society. On the bus, you will see an old man standing there intentionally or unintentionally, and a young man and a young girl dressing up in their seats. When shopping, it is difficult to see a neat queue. On the contrary, how can you be humble if you fight for it? ……
Perhaps in the eyes of now, it is a competitive society, and being humble to others is hurting yourself. If you are kind to your opponent, you are hurting yourself. Do whatever it takes to be famous, let alone humble. Nominally? It's none of your business. You can't take it with you, and you can't take it with you. Why do you have to fight for it by any means? On the contrary, if you give this to your opponent, you will not only lose an opponent, but also gain a friend. You know, money is easy to get, but bosom friends are hard to find! Modesty is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation, so why can't we carry forward this traditional virtue and let it slowly disappear from the world?
Vanity is at work We are not the same as before. Nowadays, people's vanity is too strong, and they will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals, which also violates a lot of truth. Perhaps this is the case, humility will quietly leave us with its incomprehension and anger.
It is never too late to mend. Learn to be humble to others, you will get many friends, learn to be humble to them, and be humble from the heart, then you are the real winner!
9. Write a tearful composition around the central idea. tears
I was good at crying when I was a child, and now I love crying when I grow up. In fact, tears are not only the expression of excitement or extreme sadness, but also a release, a relief and an expression of love.
Life needs tears, and the thought of that makes my heart sour.
Ding zero zero. . At 6: 30 in the morning, I lazily picked up the alarm clock and turned off the bell. Hey, I seem to remember something. Yes! Today is my birthday! Mom said that I could invite my good friends to dinner at home this birthday. You know, this is the first time for my mother who never allows me to bring my friends home. I am extremely happy, but I feel a little uneasy vaguely, as if something is going to happen.
I finally got to school and invited many friends home in the evening. My mother has prepared a sumptuous meal and bought many delicious drinks. My mother asked me to come in. I think she must have told us not to play too crazy. Who knows, it's not like this at all.
"Do you know why mom asked you to invite your classmates home?" Mother touched my head and whispered. I don't know. I replied inexplicably, "Maybe today is my birthday?"
"No, it's because-you're leaving these good friends, and we're moving."
My heart suddenly became very painful. Listening to the laughter of friends outside the house, my eyes filled with tears. "We can't let our friends know," I thought to myself. "Let's have fun!" But I can't be happy.
When I first started eating, my friends seemed to see something, but no one asked, just trying to make me happy. When they gave me presents one by one, I couldn't help crying any longer. I suddenly feel that I have a thousand words to say to them, but I don't know what to say.
The students left one by one, and my mother and I sent them downstairs. Looking at their distant backs, tears once again moistened my eyes.
The next day, I never saw my friends again, because I had moved to a new home and transferred to a new school.
As we all know, tears represent unforgettable experiences and will leave a deep impression in the depths of emotions; Tears represent the record of growth and reflect the course you have gone through.
10. Composition Competition and Modesty with Concession as the Topic
The wall clock on the wall walks minute by minute, and the rhythm and law have never changed. However, social progress has accelerated the pace of our life and intensified competition. At the same time, there have been more sighs of "human feelings are cold and warm, and the world is cold".
Perhaps competition is a necessary condition for progress. In the course of human development, competition runs through. But it is precisely because of competition that the world becomes unpredictable ... will fierce competition gradually dilute the warmth between people?
In a remote and backward mountain village, two good brothers were admitted to a key university, a computer department and a mathematics department at the same time. What should have been a double happiness has now become a dilemma, because it is impossible for a family with financial difficulties to support two children to go to college at the same time. So we had to draw lots. My father pulled out one with tears in his eyes and read, "Brother!" The younger brother jumped up in ecstasy, and the younger brother went out silently, without tears or complaints ... A week later, the two brothers took up their backpacks and left this backward mountain village. My brother went to school, and my brother went to work ... Many years later, my brother graduated, found a job, and prepared to study for him. At this time, my brother told him that the two notes were actually written for my brother. Because he thought my brother needed to go to school more and the computer department was more promising, he secretly released it.
Hearing this story, I was shocked and moved at first, and then I felt sorry for my brother. Some people may think that my brother has given up a bright future, but you can calm down and think about it, and you will find what a wonderful story this is. In the struggle for his future, the two brothers chose humility. Why, they can only explain it this way: family is priceless!
In the competition between people, either you die or I die, but my brother chooses humility, and what we see is the warmth of the world. The ultimate goal of life is to enjoy love and care, but driven by interests and the cry of money, more and more people are numb in many blind competitions.
Two students call each other brothers. After graduation, they joined a company together, but promotion can get a raise. One of them often criticizes his friend in front of his boss, which leads to his resignation. Since then, the era of calling each other brothers has passed, and the two have become strangers, and things will go away. As time goes by, the bad friends in those years have risen step by step, but every time in the dead of night, deep guilt arises. Finally,
It doesn't matter whether that friend forgave him in the end. We can see that in the fierce competition, interests take away people's thoughts. With the increasingly frequent competition of words, many pairs of once clear eyes have been blinded, many beautiful feelings have been defiled and many innocent hearts have been crushed. Competition should be the wheel to promote social progress, but it has been distorted into intrigue by many blind and numb people. In today's fierce competition, the scene is destroyed. In the hot broadcast ... it seems that everyone has learned the tricks of hedgehog and is ready to puncture the so-called "opponent" at any time. But I believe that human nature is kind and beautiful. When we wake up from the fame and fortune, all good things will recover. Without the warmth of the world, competition is just a cold iron wall.
A little more humility, competition seems to be humanized. In today's increasingly fierce competition, how can we add the weight of competition and humility to make the balance of life find its own balance point? After all, people and animals are different. Animals choose to compete, so there is no reason to be humble. Humans who choose to compete can also have care and humility at the same time.
In the process of progress, we need competition and hidden * * * to compete for the world. At the same time, we also need a peaceful mind, looking for warmth, feeling warmth and appreciating life in peace.