1, what is the basic meaning of "pro"? What may be used in this composition?
2. How to explain "affection"?
3. What does "the best" mean? What part of speech, what emotional color?
4. Why should affection be eulogized?
5. Write at least 20 idioms or words about feelings.
Activities of cooperative investigation team
6. What are the famous sentences or poems about family ties? Write 10 sentence.
7. What are the texts or chapters about family ties in primary and secondary schools? How much do you know outside the text?
8. What are some family examples related to you in your life? Please state the most touching one vividly.
9. Make a sentence of "metaphor+parallelism" around "home".
Communicate and display the display style.
Delegates perform in this group, and other students help them perfect their materials, expressions and body language.
B, representatives of each group show their own characteristics and styles in the class.
(Note: If time is tight, you can draw lots, and only one question will be given for each group of 6-9 questions. One group shows, and the other groups can write down the advantages and disadvantages and score. )
Use progress to promote sublimation.
C, team self-evaluation, including advantages and disadvantages.
D, he commented, pointed out the advantages and disadvantages of his group, and showed the score.
E. The teacher comments on the language expression of each group and nudges the test questions or contents displayed by each group. Finally, the winning groups were announced.
Standard test to consolidate the results.
10, write an emotional sentence around "home". The feelings expressed should be combined with family ties through specific pictures to form a parallelism sentence. (within 100 words)
Realize the composition layout of the target
The song in my heart is dedicated to my lovely father (mother)
Requirements: write a narrative; Family ties should be specific and the image should be full; The writing style should be beautiful and the feelings should be sincere; Not less than 800 words. Teachers reflect on the gains, shortcomings and efforts of this class;
Composition writing guidance-eulogize family study and write it fully.
The composition writing instructor praised the study and wrote it fully.
Training objectives
1, describe family ties in touching language, and capture rich details to express family ties.
2. Let students understand what the enrichment of the article means and master how to enrich the content of the article.
Warm-up before class
Knowledge link
Family has a wonderful power; Affection is a topic that never fades. Some people describe affection like this: affection is an old wine, sweet and mellow; It is a famous painting handed down from ancient times, exquisite and meaningful; It is a classic old song, gentle and sincere; This is a precious silk, delicate and smooth. I said, affection is the affection between relatives, and her essence is caring, maternal love, fatherly love, brotherly love, affection, and love from the elder to the younger generation? We don't have to compare with anything, and we don't have to decorate with any words. We just need to feel it with our hearts. Affection is the most sincere, warm and precious emotion in the world. It accompanies our life, permeates our life, and shines in our hearts like sunshine. Without the care of relatives and the warmth of family, how bleak life will be. With the continuous enrichment of life experience, people's feelings for their families will gradually become delicate and profound. Consciously observe life, enrich life, cultivate emotions and lay an emotional foundation for writing. "Eulogize for family, learn to write completely" belongs to the problem of how to arrange the content of the composition. Content enrichment is the most basic requirement of composition, and it is also the soul of college entrance examination composition. Mencius said, "Enrichment is beauty." The ancients wrote an article about "crested pig belly and leopard tail". One of the "pork bellies" is
Emphasize that articles should be rich in content. What is the enrichment of the article? Rich content means rich material and full image. Rich in materials means that the materials used in the article are various, huge in quantity and rich in content, with flesh and blood. Writing a narrative requires vivid plots, vivid characters and outstanding scene description; Writing an argumentative essay requires rich and typical arguments; Writing expository texts requires a wealth of information. In a word, we should try our best to avoid the disadvantages of outdated and single composition content, weak arguments and lack of information. Full image means that narrative composition can create concrete and tangible characters, which can be vivid, make the characters have unique personality, rich spiritual world and stand up truly and naturally.
Reading and writing experience
1. Read the following clip and analyze how the author wrote "fatherly love" and enriched it.
Fatherly love (fragment)
My father was very strict with me when I was a child. When I came home from school, my father shouted, "Homework! Bring it! " When I waited for him to finish his homework, he hurried me into the room, set the tables and chairs, and let me continue to sit down and write the homework he asked. He himself moved a stool, took a newspaper, and sat at the door of the room at a distance, watching absently. His eyes turned to my exercise book and then to the newspaper. Outside the window, the children walked by laughing. I was so sad that I looked back at my father. He was looking at me sternly and said nothing, so I had to bend my head and concentrate on my homework.
Answer: fatherly love is majestic, and fatherly love is great. The author uses language (homework! Take it! ), movements ("rushing", "fixing", "moving" and "sitting"), expressions ("absent-minded" and "strict") and other details, and write down the love for your father. Sincere feelings.
Please write a short film with substantial content centered on "missing your loved ones". Feelings should be sincere and descriptions should be delicate.
Example: I was homesick just after my first year of high school, so I called home and said, "Ding? Hey? " When the phone was connected, I thought I saw my mother washing clothes. Hearing the bell, she immediately put down her clothes, stumbled to the phone and said, "Don't worry, I'm coming!" " "Where did she know? I can't hear you at all! " Hello? Xiu, is that you? "It's mom's voice! My tears suddenly flowed out. " Mom, I miss you! Me? "I can't go on." Me, too? Miss you! "I feel my mother's trembling. She must be laughing and crying!
Classroom writing guidance
1, text reference
Who doesn't want to be rich, high-ranking, and glorious? However, the Chinese nation has always been adhering to the tradition of "filial piety is the first virtue". When "high official and generous" and "filial piety" can't have both, Shimi gave up high official and generous without hesitation and chose to honor his relatives. It can be seen that family is the first. The article "Chen Qingbiao" is a good article praising family ties. So how can this article be written well?
The article Chen Qingbiao is sincere and touching. Regarding the article "Chen Qingbiao" in China's View on Ancient Literature, he said: "Stories and narratives are all written by innocence, and not a word is empty? The words of nature are touching. " Shi Mi lost her parents when she was a child and was raised by her grandmother Liu alone. This filial relationship is naturally inseparable, so the author writes from here first. He wrote about himself first. He was lonely and powerless since he was a child, thanks to Liu's support, and he was "less sick, absent at the age of nine, and lonely. As for the establishment." This shows Liu's efforts. This is the author's direct expression of gratitude to his grandmother. (Choose typical materials and express feelings directly)
Write Liu's "children are often ill in bed", and only Shimi will take care of it. The inseparable relationship between Liu and Shi Mi is not enough here. The author also added a special situation, that is, his family "has neither uncles nor fresh brothers", and in an environment of "being alone and inseparable", it is inseparable from his grandmother's dependence. Finally, Liu's dying situation in his later years is described as "twilight, exhaustion, shallow life and danger." This is my feeling for my grandmother under special circumstances. (Describe specific images and express emotions)
At the same time, the author expressed his gratitude in the second paragraph and wanted to take office, "running with the letter." Why not go? Because "Liu's illness is getting worse every day", this reflects his deep filial piety on the other hand. It comes down to this natural situation: "I don't have a grandmother, and I don't have today;" Grandma has no ministers, and her years are endless. Mothers and grandchildren are more interdependent, so we can't waste distance. " Finally, you can naturally put forward the purpose of this performance, "begging for the last support"-filial piety before loyalty, and then sincerely explain that your situation is a mirror of heaven and man, expressing your loyalty to the court "born as a man, died as a man." In this way, the full text is full of rich feelings and appears sincere, while Shi Mi's filial piety to his grandmother is more real, deeper and more touching, and Emperor Wu of Jin naturally has nothing to say. The content of the article will naturally be enriched.
2. Write a summary
The expression of affection is easy to generalize, without details or examples, only expressing one's understanding of affection or gratitude to relatives. Therefore, when eulogizing affection, we should pay attention to the expression of examples and the grasp of details. So how can we enrich the content?
(1). Pay attention to association and grasp emotions.
To express the true feelings to the fullest, the most important thing is to pay attention to association, recall the stories that happened in the past through association, and realize the feelings at that time and the thoughts now.
Association refers to a kind of thinking activity that someone or something causes thinking about related people or things. When writing, expand the association, and there will be a lot of material concentrated in the brain. Associative attention is related to people, things and things in front of us, and then from reality to emptiness, to achieve the effect of virtual reality. .
(2) Pay attention to details and describe true feelings.
Details refer to typical life examples or characters' words and deeds. The details should be carefully selected, grasping the typical characteristics of the characters, expressing the characters' personalities, expressing their thoughts and reflecting the author's thoughts and feelings.
(3) Express your true feelings
"Impure and insincere, not moving. Therefore, those who cry hard are sad but not sad; Strong anger, though strict; Strong pro, although laughing. " When Zhuangzi writes an article, he means that the article should be sincere, heartfelt, not false, not "false", not insincere and not insincere. In fact, the most important thing in an article is to have true feelings, full of humanistic care and lively personality characteristics. It can be manifested in the following three aspects:
① Choose typical materials to express true feelings. Writing, like being a man, should be simple, find typical examples from real life, tap the extraordinary significance of ordinary life, learn to pay attention to life, express people with the reality of life, and express their views and attitudes.
2. Describe specific images and express emotional attitudes. The article should concretize abstract feelings and accurately express their feelings through concrete and sensible description, discussion and narration. Write people lyrical, emotional, emotional in the scene, scene blending, with the help of people, things, things, scenery, reason to express their understanding of family.
③ Write about the familiar life and express your true feelings. The truth of life is touching. Although the article does not rule out fiction, fiction and falsehood are essentially different. The novel reproduces real life, not fictional real life.
(4) Pay attention to scene description.
Scenes refer to scenes and scenery. Scene mainly refers to the pictures related to the characters and plots in narrative articles at a certain time, place and occasion. Scene description is a description of many people and their surroundings in a certain occasion, including static and dynamic scenes such as natural scenery and people's activities. Scenery description refers to the description of the external environment directly related to the characters, which is an organic part of the article. The role of scenery description is to create an environmental atmosphere, render the emotions of the characters, promote the development of the story, and express the characteristics of the times and seasons.
Write a 300-word essay on real topics (1)
You may have heard such a touching story that a three-year-old girl took care of her paralyzed father alone and helped him with the housework. How does a three-year-old sister shoulder the burden of the family? It turned out that she was born in a poor family. As soon as she was born, her mother left him because she couldn't bear the poverty at home, and her father was paralyzed at home after a serious illness. From then on, the little girl slowly learned to help her family and take care of her father. Every morning, when grandparents are working in the fields, she gets up to brush her teeth and wash her face for her father. I stood on the stool in the kitchen and cooked noodles for my father. Trembling with a bowl of noodles, I walked to my father's bed and slowly fed it into his mouth. My heart was pulled up. What a sensible child! And when I was three years old, I might still be spoiled in my mother's arms. Compared with this girl, I am far from it! In contrast, the value of the little girl spirit can be highlighted. What is the concept of three years old! Watching her support this family with tender hands, my heart is full of emotion and admiration! She's great! Later, after the media broke the news, many well-intentioned people extended a helping hand to this suffering family and helped the little girl's family solve many difficulties. The little girl went to kindergarten with her schoolbag on her back, and her father was transferred to a big hospital for free treatment. The doctor said that the situation will get better and there is a great possibility of recovery ... Now when I think of those little hands, my heart can't help shaking. What would this family be like without them? It was these little hands that touched people, and it was these little hands that aroused the true feelings of the world!
Write a true composition of 300 words (2)
The world is full of true feelings-a lost and found wallet.
There are true feelings everywhere in the world. I happened to meet them today!
It was very hot, so my friends and I went to buy popsicles. We walked to the store, but it was crowded with people. My friend and I were just about to join the team when the old man in the shop stopped us and signaled us to go in without queuing.
Those adults also got out of the way and let us walk in. I thought at that time: the world is full of true feelings! When everyone picked out the popsicles they wanted, the classmate in charge of money screamed, "Where did my money go?" ? Why is there a big hole in your pants? "
The shopkeeper looked us straight in the eye, obviously full of trust and concern. The boss pondered for a moment and said to us, "Never mind, children, take it and eat it!" " I don't want to ask who stole the children's money, just ... don't arrest me! "The adults are in turmoil, and they all sympathize with us. Finally, they decided that everyone would donate 50 cents to us.
Watching adults donate money, our eyes are filled with tears of happiness. There are true feelings everywhere in the world. When my friend and I came home with money, we suddenly found a stolen wallet and a note inside. The note said: I'm sorry, I shouldn't have done that, forgive …
Our eyes are full of tears again. Yes, the true feelings in the world make our world full of beauty and love. ...
Write a true composition of 300 words (3)
True feelings composition: immortal true feelings
Accustomed to the brilliance of the full moon, it is perfect, but the curved moon, with its silence and wisdom, allows lonely people to peep at the true meaning of life. The wind and rain are gloomy and the night is boundless. where am I going? Looking back on the past, I am very grateful! Needless to say, I love you very much!
It's drizzling and affectionate. A long-hidden heart makes a difference. Do you want to hear it far away? Let the wind blow the wings of yearning and pass it on to you in the distance; Let the cold rain reach your heart with biting power!
There was an ignorant boy who went to junior high school and had infinite reverie about the world. Knowing you in ignorance, we meet our hearts and feelings. Because of ignorance, he got into trouble. When you help him with tears in your eyes, his heart is also crying, which shows how much he wants to hug you tightly and shout out: I love you! He walked away for family reasons. In a blink of an eye, step into the next day. The classes are together again, but when you want to express your love to him, he avoids talking about it and leaves it alone. Time flies like water. The third grade is also separated, but your heart has not changed. Tears ask flowers without words, and flowing water is like the sea. Gradually, the boy grew up. Every time I talk to you, every time I look at him, I lean on his heart. The sky wants me to be lonely. I dare to put everything down and gamble with heaven, but I will sink into real life in the end. It's not that I don't love you. When I saw my beloved woman fall in love with someone else, I was full of blessings. I dare ask who can do it? It's not that I don't love you, it's family reasons. You have to work hard with me in the countryside all your life. Is it difficult to love you? When you are with friends, is it because other people's makeup makes you look shorter than others? How can you bear it! People who love each other don't need to be together, and they don't need to last forever. Making each other happy is the favorite! Well, it's beautiful. It's an immortal truth! You in the distance, does your heart hear you? Do you hear my heart calling? I miss you very much!