? After my unremitting efforts, I finally learned all swimming skills, such as butterfly, breaststroke, freestyle and snorkeling.
? Now I can swim. I swim with my friends. You have fun!
? But one day, I suddenly received the news that the swimming competition was about to start, which made me very nervous. I thought, can I succeed? It's the day of the competition, and I summon up my courage. My boss gave me a lot of cigarettes, and I won the first group competition. I did my best. The last frog swam very fast in the water, and I swam back and forth when I got off the street. "I succeeded." I cried out excitedly.
Appendix:
Grandpa's revised draft
Last September, I won the title of "breaststroke star" in the third mini triathlon swimming competition in , Soochow, Huzhou. Speaking of the experience of winning this honor, many scenes are fresh in my memory.
In the hot summer vacation, grandpa accompanied me to swim. Swimming is my favorite sport. When I arrived at the swimming pool, I was envious to see some children swimming happily in the water like fish. Because I can't swim, I can only watch them by the pool. Children come to me from time to time and invite me to swim with them. I can only say, "You are just beginners. You can swim first." At this time, I secretly made up my mind. I can't let them look down on me. I must learn to swim and become an excellent swimmer in the future. So, under the guidance of the swimming coach, I got up the courage, held my breath, plunged into the water and found myself slowly floating on the water. ...
After unremitting efforts every day, I finally learned how to swim, such as diving, breaststroke, freestyle, butterfly and backstroke. My friends gave me envious eyes, and the swimming coach patted me on the shoulder and encouraged me to refuel.
Suddenly, I was told to take part in the swimming competition. This news makes me happy and nervous, and I look forward to it very much. I spend time practicing for the game. On September 2 1 on the day of the competition, I organized a lucky draw before swimming and actually won the first group. The game has started. I try to swim fast in the water. In a round trip, I reached the finish line with the first place in a small group. I raised my hands and shouted "I succeeded" excitedly!
The experience from learning to swim to winning the honor of "breaststroke star" made me understand Einstein's famous saying: success equals 99% sweat and 1% inspiration.