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This composition can be written by people or recorded.
This article mainly introduces family members' personalities, hobbies and interesting things that happened between them.
★ When writing, pay attention to details and write true feelings.
How to choose materials
1. Family members can introduce or evaluate one by one. For example, dad is tall, honest and clean, and frugal all his life; My mother is hard-working but irritable, not only in charge of the financial power at home, but also taking care of all the housework; My sister is naughty and lovely; Although I am fun-loving, I get good grades in school. Our family is happy.
2. You can introduce interesting things that happened between family members. If my mother skips rope to lose weight early in the morning, my father and I will be miserable; Once at dinner, my brother offered to give grandma a young tooth, and so on.
You can write about the experiences of all family members. Such as riddle guessing activities held by families, sketch programs performed by families, song and dance programs performed by families, etc.
How to write wonderful
Point 1 renders the atmosphere by describing the environment, which leads to the description of family events.
As night fell, the moonlight lit up the dark night sky and stars appeared one after another. After a noisy day, the earth began to calm down. Finally came to our annual watermelon eating contest.
Point 2 When describing family events, you can use a unique subtitle structure.
For example, in Two or Three Things in a Happy Family, the author has three subheadings: "Dad's New Shoes", "Mom's Weight Loss Event" and "My Happy Life", which respectively tell the happy feelings of each member.
Point 3: Write the story of family events in detail with details.
For example, I covered my face with my hand and cocked my neck and shouted, "Grandpa is not good, Grandpa is not good, why is this orange so sour?" Grandpa hurriedly ran out of the kitchen, picked up the orange and tasted it. He found that oranges were not sour but sweet, and he couldn't help being curious. Seeing grandpa cheating, I covered my mouth and smiled. I said naughtily, "Grandpa, is the orange delicious?" Grandpa was taken in! Grandpa was fooled! " Grandpa suddenly realized, hugged me and said repeatedly, "It's really my good grandson, my good grandson!" " "
The fourth point: Write down the real feelings or inspirations brought by this family event.
On this day, how happy and interesting our life is. So happy! I care about my parents and my sister, and I have a harmonious and friendly family!
Grab meat with dad
"Lunch is ready!" With the "big horn" mother's command, my father and I rushed to the table. So, the battle for meat began-mom didn't know what possessed her these days and decided to lose some weight. It doesn't matter if she loses weight, but she has already suffered from me and my father, two "carnivores".
(★ Cut to the chase: The opening part explains that the battle of meat is about to start, and the reason why "I" and my father want to fight for meat points out the theme and paves the way for the battle of meat below. )
So, facing the pieces of meat on the dining table, my father and I moved a lot of brains!
"wow! Dad! Isn't that piece of meat you caught too big? " I was so anxious that I cried out. Seeing my father proudly eating meat, I was "angry" and immediately picked up chopsticks and "tumbled over the river" on the plate. Oh, my god Meat! My father and I suddenly lit up, and two pairs of chopsticks couldn't wait to reach for the plate to hold the meat. Dad was "slower" than me after all, and the meat got into my stomach safely.
(★ Scene description: Here, the process of "me" and dad grabbing meat is vividly described through details such as language, expression and action. )
Look at the plate, there is only one piece of meat left, hurry! Burn your eyebrows
While dad was eating steak, I rushed to the meat at lightning speed. Shit! My hand trembled and caught a small white mushroom. At the same time, a pair of chopsticks rushed over. Oh, no! Dad was caught!
(★ Detail description: The detail description of "I" failed to hold the meat quickly, and the meat was taken away by my father, which fully showed the urgency and disappointment of "I". ) When my father was eating meat with a bright face, my mother who was "sitting quietly" finally said, "Alas! You guys! Tomorrow, I will fry more meat! " "It's better to be a mother." I'm flattering.
Alas, the battle was not in vain!
Full mark reference point
◎ Selection of materials: The author chooses a small segment of family life that competes with his father for meat to show the joy of family life. The materials are novel and close to life.
◎ Intention: At the beginning of the article, the author explained that the meat fight is about to begin and the reason why my father and I are fighting for meat, then gave a vivid and concrete description of the meat fight, and finally ended up with my mother's "compromise"-agreeing to fry more meat. This idea is novel and ingenious. The level is clear and the center is prominent.
◎ Language: The little author painted vivid and interesting scenes for us with humorous brushstrokes, showing the fun of family life to the fullest.
My "remote control"
"You are a kite, I am a thread, home is a harbor, and you are a boat." This is what my parents often say to me.
Yes, no matter how high the kite flies, the ship will return to the harbor to rest. I am like a kite and a boat, commanded by a big "remote control" and a small "remote control". (★ Cut to the chase: Start with a topic and use an image metaphor to write the relationship between "I" and my parents and family, paving the way for the following narrative. )
Dad is a big remote control. He is responsible for "big things" such as what to learn, how to learn and what qualities to exercise. For example, whenever I borrow a novel, as soon as my father opens his mouth, he starts to talk about those big things again. Once, I did my homework very slowly, and I read cartoons and novels as soon as I finished it. When my father came back and saw me like this, he became angry and immediately "fired": "Duan Huizhi! You are disobedient again, aren't you? Didn't I stop you from reading this book? Are these useful for study? What a shame! " While speaking, I threw the book away. I saw that book and asked me for help! (★ Behavior description: Through the description of my father's language and actions of not letting me read casual books, I wrote my father's control and concern for my study and life. )
My mother is a small "remote controller", and she cares about "small things" such as what to wear, what to eat, whether the homework has been completed or not. The clothes I usually wear are put on my pillow by my mother every morning, just wait for me to put them on. Every day, my mother cooks in different ways. Today, she eats kung pao chicken, and tomorrow, she eats fried rice with beans. These are all based on nutrition. Helping me with my homework is also one of my mother's jobs. She told me questions that I didn't understand over and over again until I understood them.
This is my home "remote control" my two "remote controls". One of them is responsible for my growth direction and the other is responsible for my daily life. The life controlled by these two "remote controllers" is full of happiness. (★ Deepening the theme: At the end, I summarized the functions of the two "remote controllers" and wrote my true feelings-happiness, which deepened the center of the article. )
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: around the characteristics of "remote control", material selection from the perspective of parents reflects parents' concern for "I" study and life. It is typical and profound to draw materials from the little things in life.
◎ Intention: At the beginning of the article, it is pointed out that "I" is controlled by two "remote controllers", that is, my father controls my study life and my mother controls my daily life. Finally, summarize the full text and point out my feelings.
◎ Language: The language of the article is concise and vivid, and the use of rhetorical devices adds a lot of color to the article. For example, the title of the article compares mom and dad to "remote control", which is accurate, appropriate, novel and vivid.
Interesting family recommendation meeting
I am a naughty king at school and often make teachers angry. It's not, parents will be invited again today.
(★ Detail description: I pointed out at the beginning that I was a "naughty king" and was often invited by my parents to pave the way for the story about mom and dad pushing each other. )
When mom and dad heard that they were going to invite their parents, they avoided them because they knew that if they went, they would be criticized by the teacher and said that they had not educated their children well. Alas! There is no choice but "universal suffrage". (★ Care before and after: The description of mom and dad's behavior just confirms the "I" at the beginning.
He is the "naughty king" of the school and is often asked to echo his parents' narrative. )
All right, the general election begins. Raise your hand if you want your mother to go, only your father raises his hand; If you want your father to go, please raise your hand. Only your mother will vote. The key to winning or losing depends entirely on my vote. Just when I was undecided, my mother came up to me and said with a smile, "Dear son, if you vote for your father, I will buy you a big bag of delicious food so that you can eat enough at once." It makes my mouth water. At this time, my father came up to me and said, "Good son, if you vote for your mother, I will buy you the game CD you want most." This makes me very embarrassed. On the left is the latest game CD, and on the right is a big bag of delicious food. How should I choose? At this time, I suddenly had a brainwave and smiled and said to my parents, "Mom and Dad, since you are so modest, why don't you go together?" Even if it is criticized, it is two people. Don't forget my benefits. " Mom and dad listened, crying and laughing, but what can they do? We have to go together. (★ Scene description: The description of parents' demeanor and language, as well as the description of "I" psychological activities, reproduces the scene where parents shirk each other and "I" benefits from it, which makes people laugh. )
Of course I got what I wanted, hahaha. ...
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The theme of inviting parents to meet teachers is written in the form of family promotion meeting. The joy of family and the cuteness of characters are unique.
◎ Intention: At the beginning of the article, I was told that I was asked to invite my parents because I was naughty and angered my teacher. Then I described the process in which my parents decided who would participate through universal suffrage. Finally, it ended with my secret joy, which is endless. The concept is novel and the center is clear.
◎ Language: Language humor, especially the description of characters, makes the scene of parents shirking each other because they don't want to be invited to see the teacher lively and interesting, which makes people laugh after watching it.
I love my family.
I have a happy home. There is a father, a mother and a brother at home. Oh, and me, don't forget. (★ Cut to the chase: Introduction "I" have a happy family, point out the center of the article. )
I have an amiable mother who cares about my health. Every morning, my mother will cook an egg for me to eat on the way, saying that eating it can replenish my brain and make me more energetic in class. In the evening, I finished my homework. When I go to bed, my mother will make me a glass of milk, saying it is good for my health. You see, this is my mother who is very concerned about my health.
My father is particularly concerned about my study. Once, my exam results were among the best in my class.
I was so happy that I told my parents the good news as soon as I got home. However, my father said, "I will be proud if I get such a result." Haven't you heard the old saying,' Modesty makes people progress, while pride makes people lag behind'? "It's like a pot of cold water poured into my heart, and I almost cried.
(★ Contrastive technique: I vividly wrote the uncomfortable psychology of "I" with vivid rhetoric, which is in contrast with the "happy" mood in the last article, highlighting the blow of my father's words to "I". )
My brother is a lively and lovely, very naughty brother. He is lively and lovely sometimes. When I am unhappy, he will make some faces or say some funny words to make me happy. However, sometimes he is naughty. When I do my homework, he often bothers me with such and such things, and sometimes he steals from me. I always suffer in the end. Who called me sister?
I am a cheerful person. I live in a warm home and grow up happily in a warm home. I love my family! Well, I've told you all about my family, and it's time for me to listen to your family's opinions! (★ Express your feelings: The ending expresses your love for your family, which echoes the beginning and sublimates the center of the article. )
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The author introduces family members one by one, writes about the happy relationship among family members, and outlines the happiness and happiness of family life. Material selection is typical.
◎ Conception: I have a happy family at the beginning of the article, and then describe it from the aspects of my mother's concern for my life, my father's attention to my study, and my brother's harmonious coexistence with me, and finally point out my love for my family. The concept is rigorous and the structure is round.
◎ Language: The author is good at using language and details to describe characters, such as indirectly describing the mother's language, vividly depicting a nuanced mother image.
Happy sentences of a happy family
This afternoon, our family of three played an interesting game-drawing lots to make sentences.
We divide the paper into three piles. The first pile writes about people, the second pile writes about places, and then the third pile writes about what to do. Then we draw a piece of paper from each sheet piling to make sentences. (★ Specific description: Use sequential words such as "first", "second" and "then" to describe the preparation steps of playing lottery sentences very concretely, giving people a clear impression. )
I'll go first and start the first round of drawing lots. I stare big eyes, hold my breath, carefully take out one from each of the three sheet piling, hold it tightly in my hand, put it on my chest, and silently pray: God, I have no grievances with you for a long time, and I have no resentment recently. Please don't embarrass me. (★ Detailed Description: To "Me"
The expression, action and psychological description of "I" depict my caution and worry. ) I heaved a sigh gently and spread out my hand to form a complete sentence-"Mom is taking a bath in the toilet". I pointed at my mother with one hand and patted my thigh with the other, laughing until tears came out. Mom said in distress situation: "How can I take a bath in the toilet?" Not to be outdone, I plausibly said, "No wonder I'm your life!" "Then my mother drew lots and saw that she drew three. I didn't expect to form' I danced on the iron pot', and my nose was crooked. Mom smiled and said, "This is your destiny! ""I said helplessly, "What goes around comes around!"
At this time, it's dad's turn. Dad said, "I must be better than you." I thought to myself, "That's not certain! Do you know your' destiny' when you smoke it? " Faced with so many signs, my father drew three without hesitation, and the result was: "Dad sings karaoke in the water". My father was blindsided at first sight, and my mother almost didn't throw up when she was drinking water. I gloated and said, "Better than me. I didn't know you were singing karaoke to others in the water now! There is really a road in heaven. If you don't go, hell will come to you! Haha ... "(★ Scene description: The language description of mother's behavior and" I "vividly reproduces the scene that" I "gloated after my father signed it, and my mother couldn't help laughing. )
Our family really had a good time!
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The material selection of the article is novel and interesting. The author shows the warmth and romance of a family of three by describing the process of playing sentence group games among family members.
◎ Intention: At the beginning of the article, a family of three plays a sentence group game, then introduces the preparation activities, then describes the process of the game, and finally writes the feelings. Rigorous conception and clear structure.
◎ Language: the narrative is smooth, and the language is simple and simple. The author is good at using details to describe characters, and vividly describes the situation of characters in sentence group games, such as in front of readers.